Caught out
Disclaimer:Dammit! the locksmith refused my offer! well ill just find another way...oh i still dont own xiaolin showdown
i got a review from cyleflynt giving me tips on my story writing no offense but id never dream of using those tips who are you my literacy teacher! but thankx 4 da tips anywayz . . i also got a reviews from xiaolin butterfly and i know omis terrified of squirrels thats what the mental condition does! please answer me DJ hixie.P.S i recently changed my name to shokuchild just so you know!
Enjoy!
Rai and Kim were going out for a night on the town
"wow its so much different to the nightlife in tokyo" said kimiko looking around as they searched for a place to dine
"in tokyo its all clubs and brightly lit diners...its so much more romantic" said Kimiko leaning lightly onto Rai and looking dumbstruck at a lowly lit bamboo lamp post. they finally decided on a restaraunt called Tiki Retreat...luckily for them it was licenced.finally they ordered the most expensive food on the menu
"are you sure Kim?"asked Raimundo amazed
"dads paying" said kimiko shrugging and taking another bite of a complimentary breadstick.
Rais POV
Kimiko stared out the window marvelling at the dimly lit sand road that was the town littered with peaceful little cottages and restaraunts she sighed then turned back to Rai as their champaigne arrived Rai glanced out the window to see police cruising the road he remembered about all the thefts that went on in hawaii he looked back at kim and stared into saphire blue eyes she stared back how beautiful her eyes are...said an awestruck voice in his head.forget her eyes look how hot SHE is
"yeah.." rai said dreamily out of nowhere
"what?" said a confused kimiko rai blushed and searched his mind for a reply thinkin hed totally blown his cover but then he remembered that he only hid his feelings for her before the trip so his rate slowed down and his blush faded and he smiled slightly
"i was just thinking how hot you are" he said slyly still staring at her
"RAI!" she yelled angrily
"sorry! i meant beautiful" he said placing a reassuring hand on hers
"thats what i thought you meant" she said slyly before they both leaned in for kiss.rai closed his eyes but when he opened them his heart started pounding. first he saw something lurking in the shadows avoiding all eyes (but failing to do so with his)and then he saw an underage drinking sign and remembered what the brochure had said about how strict they are about underage drinking he was scared about that for a minute then it faded as he remembered that they were 17 and in china they were aloud to drink at seventeen but then at second glance his heart skipped a beat when he saw that in hawaii you had to be 18!...but they just turned seventeen before they came on this trip!
"kim "he said still staring at the sign
"what?" she asked before following his gaze to the sign she quickly read it and had the same expression as rai had on his face(if you can imagine it)then the look faded and she opened her mouth to speak to rai but was interrupted by police walking in and asking them with one eyebrow raised
"are you eighteen?"...
A/N YAY! i made a cliffy and i managed to make it need a scroll bar yay! any wayz R&R srry it took me so long to update but like as soon as i finished adding the last chappie i started this and then couldnt be bothered finishing it
but i aint updatin this till i get 3-5 more reviews so if u want me 2 continue then give me REVIEWS! tanx!