Hey thanx fer the review kagome gurrl,You are the only one who review(so far)
and i will not get burn cuz it is my story and i can do cliffys if i wanna lol you are a true best friend, literally. you live 3 streets down soooo.
on with the story...
Chapter 2:The Attack and the Save
As the creature moved closer to the girl, it eased itself out of the water.It wraped one tentacle around her ankle and pulled her under. She struggled to get air but salt water poured into her mouth as she was pulled deeper and deeper under water.
The lifeguard sat on his chair talking to his best friend on his cell phone when he heard a scream and a form being pulled under water. He got up and jumped in to the water and quickly dove under the surface. He saw the tentacle wrapped firmly around the girls ankle then they dissappeared in to the dark deep watter he grabed her hand before it was engulfed in the darkness and pulled hard on her wrist. The monster let go of the now sleeping girl and swam to the bottom of the deep ocean. He pulled the girl to the surface and on to the beach where she lay motionless.
Everone on the beach came over to see if she was alright."Hey back off she needs air!"yelled the life guard who was preforming cpr on the drowned Kagome. After 10 minutes she coughed up the remaining water and Sango ran up and glomped her."Kagome your ok.Everyone thought the worst would happen."She had tears streaming down her face as she got up and let Kagome breathe.
She looked around and saw the lifeguard standing close by."Thank you for saving me.What is your name?"she said with thanks in her voice.
"Inuyasha"he answered in a rude voice as though he did it only cause it was his job.(oh yeah it was tee hee)Well she didnt like his tone and glared at him until she was draged off the ground by Sango who looked as though she was getting ready to kill."Wow Sango if looks can kill then I feel sorry for the one....AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!PERVERT!!!!!"She screamed jumping behind Sango who got her giant boomerang out of no where.(how does she do that.i mean 1 minute shes helpless the next she throwing a boomerang)Sango picked it up and hit him on the head with it.He got knocked to the ground and didnt get up.Inuyasha look at him and shook his head in a he-will-never-learn sort og way,then turned and began to say"I guess youve met my friend..."he was cut off by Sango and Kagome"Miroku yeah weve met."they said in suit."Yeah by the way Im Sango and this is Kagome...Oh no you dont."she said scooting away from Mirokus hand which was moving closer.She hit him on the head with her boomerang and turned to Kagome"We better go to the hotel and get ready for the party Kagome or have you forgotten why we even came down here??"Kagome stared for a minute and said "OH YEAH we'll be late.Oh no we cant be late she'll kill us."She began to run to the hotel then remembered Sango who had stayed staring at Kagome.
She ran back grabed Sango and ran again. When she got there she went up to the counter to ask the old lady what time it was forgeting the watch on her wrist.
She said"Umhuffma'mhuffwhathufftimehuffishuffit?"completly out of breathe."It is 7:00.No need to call me ma'm Lady Kagome my name is Kaede."she said in reply."Thank you Lady Kaede. We need to go now were gonna be late for a party."
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When they got to the party they were greeted by a very angry friend and her boyfriend."You guys were supposed to be here on time and now Ayame blames me for you being late for her birthday party.If she doesnt kill you i will!"said Kouga,her boyfriend,angrily.Then his expression changed as 2 unexpected people walked in the room.
Hey!Another cliffy!I love cliffies!Thanx again kagome gurrl fer your review even if you yelled at me your still a true frieng!!!teehee!
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and i will not get burn cuz it is my story and i can do cliffys if i wanna lol you are a true best friend, literally. you live 3 streets down soooo.
on with the story...
Chapter 2:The Attack and the Save
As the creature moved closer to the girl, it eased itself out of the water.It wraped one tentacle around her ankle and pulled her under. She struggled to get air but salt water poured into her mouth as she was pulled deeper and deeper under water.
The lifeguard sat on his chair talking to his best friend on his cell phone when he heard a scream and a form being pulled under water. He got up and jumped in to the water and quickly dove under the surface. He saw the tentacle wrapped firmly around the girls ankle then they dissappeared in to the dark deep watter he grabed her hand before it was engulfed in the darkness and pulled hard on her wrist. The monster let go of the now sleeping girl and swam to the bottom of the deep ocean. He pulled the girl to the surface and on to the beach where she lay motionless.
Everone on the beach came over to see if she was alright."Hey back off she needs air!"yelled the life guard who was preforming cpr on the drowned Kagome. After 10 minutes she coughed up the remaining water and Sango ran up and glomped her."Kagome your ok.Everyone thought the worst would happen."She had tears streaming down her face as she got up and let Kagome breathe.
She looked around and saw the lifeguard standing close by."Thank you for saving me.What is your name?"she said with thanks in her voice.
"Inuyasha"he answered in a rude voice as though he did it only cause it was his job.(oh yeah it was tee hee)Well she didnt like his tone and glared at him until she was draged off the ground by Sango who looked as though she was getting ready to kill."Wow Sango if looks can kill then I feel sorry for the one....AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!PERVERT!!!!!"She screamed jumping behind Sango who got her giant boomerang out of no where.(how does she do that.i mean 1 minute shes helpless the next she throwing a boomerang)Sango picked it up and hit him on the head with it.He got knocked to the ground and didnt get up.Inuyasha look at him and shook his head in a he-will-never-learn sort og way,then turned and began to say"I guess youve met my friend..."he was cut off by Sango and Kagome"Miroku yeah weve met."they said in suit."Yeah by the way Im Sango and this is Kagome...Oh no you dont."she said scooting away from Mirokus hand which was moving closer.She hit him on the head with her boomerang and turned to Kagome"We better go to the hotel and get ready for the party Kagome or have you forgotten why we even came down here??"Kagome stared for a minute and said "OH YEAH we'll be late.Oh no we cant be late she'll kill us."She began to run to the hotel then remembered Sango who had stayed staring at Kagome.
She ran back grabed Sango and ran again. When she got there she went up to the counter to ask the old lady what time it was forgeting the watch on her wrist.
She said"Umhuffma'mhuffwhathufftimehuffishuffit?"completly out of breathe."It is 7:00.No need to call me ma'm Lady Kagome my name is Kaede."she said in reply."Thank you Lady Kaede. We need to go now were gonna be late for a party."
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When they got to the party they were greeted by a very angry friend and her boyfriend."You guys were supposed to be here on time and now Ayame blames me for you being late for her birthday party.If she doesnt kill you i will!"said Kouga,her boyfriend,angrily.Then his expression changed as 2 unexpected people walked in the room.
Hey!Another cliffy!I love cliffies!Thanx again kagome gurrl fer your review even if you yelled at me your still a true frieng!!!teehee!
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