I… I… can't sleep. Just watched the newest episode, and have been crying for at least 30 min. tell me how long you cried in your reviews please.
I'm crying mostly because the tragic end of the show, but I'm also crying because y story is now all confusing to me. And now it will be to you because I pictured something different.
You'll catch on, any questions I'll answer at the end of chapters.
For now I'll keep on trucking' through this.
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"Kailani! Come down from there! We need to keep moving, Al's pocket radio said the army's are searching the countryside for fugitives." Ed yelled up a nearby tree, not realizing it was the wrong one.
Kailani climbed down, but didn't let Ed know she was right behind him then…
"BOO!" she screamed right into his ear.
"AHH!" he yelled before running behind the tree.
Everyone else burst out laughing.
"Very funny…" Ed mumbled coming out from behind the tree, brushing himself off.
"Yea, it was, wasn't it?" Kailani questioned the other two. They exchanged glances and burst out laughing again, nodding their agreement.
They started off across the river, and in no time at all they came across another burning village.
The population in this area was close knit. A village was at least 5 miles from the next.
They party searched for survivors. They walked first to the center of the town. There was a huge fountain with everything still intact.
"We should split up." Kailani thought out loud.
"That's stupid. What if the people who bombed this place are still hanging around?"
"What are the chances of that? Besides, we can all take care of ourselves." she argued.
"Oh really?" Ed scoffed.
"If you two can't make up your mind I'll decide." Mr. Elric declared, looking a little annoyed.
"Fine!" the fighters shouted, glaring each other down.
"Okay." the father started. "Ed, you go with Kailani to the west side, Al will go northwest, and I will cover everything else. We'll meet back here, okay? Be back before sundown."
"What!" Kailani and Ed screeched in comparison. But the others were already walking away.
"See you by sundown!" Al called, smiling at the stunned faces he left behind.
After they couldn't see Al and Mr. Elric anymore, they stared at each other.
"Let's go." Ed commanded, and Kailani deftly followed, thinking that Mr. Elric wanted her to die.
They searched about a dozen houses before a building that they were walking by started to collapse. Kailani, being in the state were she just watches like-a-person-who-is-stupid at things that are dangerous, just watched as the pieces started to crumble.
"Kailani!" Ed screamed running into her and pushing her towards the wall of a building across the way.
When her head hit the wall she came out of her state.
"Wah?" she burbled.
"Get down!" Ed commanded covering her body with his.
The building fell. Bits and pieces fell on Ed.
When it stopped Kailani helped Ed stand. He winced in pain.
"Thanks."
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Al sat down. He checked over 40 houses and found nothing. Nothing but corpses. He was about to check the ruins of a church up ahead.
It looked from the way the bodies were dressed there was a wedding taking place the time this building was bombed. But the thing that saddened him most was the bride.
She was still alive.
Pain.
Suffering.
She was still alive. But her body was pierced through the stomach. She tried to jump through the widow when the roof fell.
Death.
He walked up to her. She handed something out to him. A golden necklace.
"Please, take this to my sister. I'm sure she survived. Her name is Raeka, can't miss her." she tried to smile, but it failed miserably.
"May your soul rest in peace." Al whispered, not knowing what he could've said.
"Good luck to you." she said. As she slowly died, she smiled. "Tell my sister that I will always love her no matter what she does."
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Al made his way to the center of town. He seemed to be the first one there, but then he became aware of another presence.
"Who's there?" he shouted, taking out his dagger.
"It's only me; I will do you no harm." What Al saw next bewildered him.
It was a girl no more then 4 ft. She was tan-skinned with dark black hair and green eyes. She was wearing a red dress that ended just above her knees with a little bit of ruffles coming out the bottom.
"What are you doing here?" she asked.
"I should ask the same thing."
"I am… was… here for my sister's wedding." Al suddenly remembered the necklace.
"This belongs to you then. Your late sister said to give it to you…" Al walked slowly over to the girl about two steps, necklace held out. She ran toward him, tears swimming in her eyes.
"Thank you so much." she sobbed, sitting on the edge of the fountain. He put an arm around her and whispered,
"She said she loves you no matter what you do."
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Ed and Kailani made their way to a stable building. Kailani needed to tend to Ed's wounds.
As she ripped her jeans, Ed made a slow picture in his mind of her looks.
She was very pale with large blue eyes and red hair. She had a Hawaiian name but was mostly Dutch. Freckles covered her across her cheeks and nose, but surprisingly nowhere else. Not to skinny and not to plump, she was very attractive.
Hey, he can at least notice that.
"Take off your shirt" she commanded.
"What?" Ed questioned confused.
"Just do it." he did.
"Hold still, this will stop the bleeding on your back."
"I'm bleeding?" he looked at the back of his shirt. He found an orange sized blood stain. "Oh."
She wrapped the ripped fabric tightly around his torso.
"There!" she exclaimed, admiring her handy work.
"Kailani…"
"What?" She asked, leaning down and smiling.
"I can't breathe…"
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Okay, I'm expecting at least 4 reviews now. Don't forget to tell me how long you cried! Any advice is kindly accepted and appreciated. I'm confused about how I'm going to make where they are and what time period their in. Oh, and tell me what couples you'd like to have in here! Also, should I get Mr. Elric a date?
Yours truly,
Jaineroo
