MaGiCsLiFe
2006-07-11
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hey ur making sasuke weak. that sucks!
aznengel
2006-07-10
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update soon!
Maiyuko-chan
2006-07-10
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Uhm... Okay... Good start, I guess. But!
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critter141151
2006-07-10
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wootness first post also continue they should run in to each other at the sand I wonder does she still love him
Bahhhhhh too many criticism for meh first story… WAHHHHHH.. hides behind someone anywaiis…. Sheesh Sasuke can't have a weak moment in his life…. Ever?ㄱㄱ Sakura's a lot stronger now newaiis
Naruto started to wake up, and he first noticed the dark raven haired boy peacefully tied up against a tree sleeping.
Sasukeee?
He leapt off from where he was and crouched down right in front of Sasuke. He glared at him into his now open onyx eyes, and Sasuke glared back. Sakura noticed this, and she watched them.
She saw Neji walking towards them. Oh no… he wouldn't… would he?
Neji went in front of Naruto, and he kicked Naruto from the back.
" Tch." Neji said while walking off. " Have a great kiss fair blond princess" Neji put a smirk on his face.
Sakura smacked Neji on his head. "OoooOOwwww"
Sakura ruc\shed off to them and a sweat drop formed on her head. She saw the two kissing and their eyes widened. They broke apart. " –cough- ARGGHH-cough-"
"YOU-cough- DOBE!"
Sakura started laughing loudly and they both stared at her." Ah…. I'll leave you two to some privacy" She smirked and went away.
" So Sasuke… how'd you end up here?" Naruto was still crouching in front of Sasuke, then laid back to the floor.
" Sakura……" Sasuke started talking. " ….Is a lot stronger now."
" Well yeahhhh… She's nearly strong as Neji, maybe even more… She's our highlight of our team!…………But I can't imagine her saving you and bringing you here……She's been depressed over the years….."
Sasuke looked away. " Because of… you" Naruto said it so calmly it even scared him.
" She tried suicides also…" Naruto couldn't continue talking because of the twitch Sasuke gave him back.
" She's been very sad over the past years, until all of a sudden she became really strong on her 15th birthday." Naruto searched Sasuke's face for maybe an answer, or maybe even a speck of emotion.
"She became so determined over the past years… and now she's really strong….But I can't imagine you leaving her like that….." Naruto felt a tear drop on his head. He swiftly turned around and saw Sakura who wiped her tear dry and gave them a smile. " B-breakfast time Naruto" She walked off after her simple statement.
Sasuke saw her running off, and Naruto running after her.
She… tried to commit suicide?
She loved you… dobe.
Sasuke closed his eyes, and looked back at the times when he had made her cry, which was quite a few.
For the next few minutes his eyes remained closed until Sakura came up to him with something that smelled good.
" Sasuke…. It's not much to even call it snack… but here." She gave him the berries on his lap and realized something.
" O-oh yea.. you can't move your hands because of the rope….Don't worry I'll feed you," Sasuke gave her a quick glance maybe searching for her childish feelings, but he found none. She was simply talking to him with a blank expression on her face.
Her green emerald orbs were deep without expression. The deeper Sasuke looked into them, the more it seem empty.
She seemed to be waiting for his cue to open his mouth and did so.
- -
" What are we going to do with him?" Neji asked to all the people in his team.
" Leave him-,"was the short reply of Shikamaru.
" No" broke in Sakura " I'll carry him with us"
Everyone's eyes widened as she looked at the also very surprised Sasuke.
She swiftly went over kneeling beside Sasuke ." You have no choice-." Sakura whispered near his ear, as she hit his pressure point again and he instantly paralyzed into sleep.
" You sure-," Naruto began. " Yes I'm sure" was the simple reply as she carried him on her back.
He's heavy-
You should be happy! Yeesh The boy of your dreams is on your back… Sleeping!
You mean the boy of my past dreams- the boy who is a traitor to Konoha- the boy.. who broke my heart-
Sigh there is no pleasing you is there?
Sasuke made a deep breath in his sleep. She smirked at him- for being so handsom.
" So here we are….. The sand territory" Said TenTen. "Let's rest here until the morning."
- - -
It was about midnight when Sasuke awoke from his sleep and he realized he was nowhere near the ANBU team and was not tied up.
My chance to escape-He saw Sakura crouching down and looking at her reflection in the river near Sasuke. Sakura noticed he was awake, but simply stood up and looked the other way.
"Why…why didn't you just leave me tied up? He said while standing up.
" I thought you would be helpful in helping us killing Itachi. So I carried you here" She softly spoke, but he heard her.
He looked at her quietly. " If you're worrying that I'll be all love sick with you like I did when we were team 7… you won't have to worry. I'm over that now"
Bahhh sorry for making Sasuke seem so weak but its just that shes gotten stronger too! Really… gulp hides behind someone. Well./..hope ya ppl like it so far!
