Hello everyone! I've created my second chapter! Well...not today...I've actually created 5 chapters before I considered actually posting them here. But of course I wanted to see if my first chapter would pass through critics.
2 lazee to post disclaimer...if u wanna reed it, reed da 1st chapter.
Anyways, in my first chapter there were some errors going on, like no appearing and nothing was in itallics to show thinking. So I hope I have fixed these minor setbacks and hope you people enjoy this chapter! And...if no appear, then anything without the "..." indicates thinking and I'll let you know when there's a flashback.
F.Y.I. - For all you people who wonder "Hmm...why does Charles hate Naru so much?" well if you remember from the first chapter, Charles is to ensure that Keitaro is 100 happy...so if anything were to make him upset or mad...well you get the picture.
NOW ENJOY!
Maybe he had to...
Maybe he didn't need to...
But eventually he did...
He succumbed to his life...
And so did his ambition...
To his aid followed a follower...
And so did his aid cause trouble...
Shall this epic ever end?
CHAPTER 2
Hinata Apartments, 2:36pm
We find Keitaro cleaning the dorm as usual on his daily manager-like chores having Charles close to him if any trouble would brew. Everyone within the Inn seems to be doing there own thing and Keitaro decides to have a nice simple chat with ol' Charles.
On top of the roof
Keitaro: "phew...that was exhausting"
Charles: floating "Do you have to do this kind of feverish chores day-in and day-out?"
Keitaro: "Yup! That's how it is around here"
Charles: "Damn man...don't you want me to wish for it to be done?"
Keitaro: "Nah...I'm fine now actually...yknow I don't really know of what to wish for right now"
Charles: "Ah, that's quite alright...it usually takes a couple days for it to settle down into your head - I'm sure in about three days you'd have a shit-load of wishes just waiting to be granted"
Keitaro: "Three days..."
Charles: "What? What's up man?"
Keitaro: "Ah crap!! Christmas is in three days!! I haven't even done any shopping!!! SHIT!!"
Charles: "Uh...ok..."
Keitaro: "And I haven't even had any time to study!!!"
Charles: "..."
Keitaro: "Ah crap! What am I gonna do?" starts rolling around on the roof
Charles: "Did you forget about me already?"
Keitaro: gets up "OH YEAH!! THATS RIGHT!" takes in a big breath of air "Ok man...I wish I had tons of money...AMERICAN MONEY!! About...$1,000,000 in my bank account!"
Charles: "It's about time man" bows then begins to cast magic "Alright stars grant this kid's wish!!" There's a shining light above Charles' head and then disappears. "Well, that should be it"
Keitaro: "That's it? No light show or anything?"
Charles: "Sorry man...nothing"
Keitaro: "Shit...oh well, thanks a lot man! Actually I should get going right now and do some shopping! Tell everyone I'll be back in 2 hours k?"
Charles: "Ok..."
Keitaro: jumps off the roof and lands perfectly "See ya later man!"
Charles and Keitaro wave each other goodbye and Charles sees Keitaro running into the distance until he turns his back on to the apartment.
Charles: "Hmm...what to do while he's gone?"
Motoko jumps on top of the roof with hakama and all.
Motoko: "YOU! I was hoping for Keitaro to leave so he wouldn't be giving me any disadvantages...now I challenge you to a fight MAN! Sword vs. sword! Bring it on!!"
Charles: "I'm sorry..."
Motoko: "WHAT?!"
Charles: "I'm sorry, I cannot fight with a sword"
Motoko falls over herself laughing her ass off until she begins to cry.
Motoko: "Aw man, heehee, that's the funniest shit I've ever heard AHAHAHA...." Motoko suddenly regains herself, "Well I don't really care...as long as I KILL YOU!!"
Motoko begins to charge at Charles with swift speed and pulls out her sword ready to strike. Charles sighs and vanishes into thin air like he always does.
Motoko: "Your tricks wont stop me you piece of shit! Su! Use your detector NOW!
Su magically pops out of nowhere.
Su: "Ay ay captain!" Su yanks out a spherical device from her skirt and pushes a big red button that says, 'Invisible detector' "HES BEHIND YOU!"
Motoko thrusts her sword in the opposite direction she's facing hoping to peirce through Charles. Within seconds she could not tell if she had hit him or not. Motoko turns around and to her dismay it seems like she missed.
Motoko: "DAMMIT! Why is he so fast?"
Su: "Motoko! He's above you now!"
Motoko points her sword above her head and begins to concentrate her energy heavily.
Motoko: "SHINING TORNADO!!" A blast of wind forms around Motoko like a tornado, repelling everything away from it as well as inside of it.
Su: "WAAAAHHH!" Su is hanging on to the roof for dear life while the tornado's gust is practically tearing her clothes apart.
The air and dust clears and Motoko hopes for all the best that she had hit Charles.
Motoko: "SU! STATUS NOW!!"
Su gets up from the struggle with only half her skirt still on and only her bra remains.
Su: cant tell where he is..."
Motoko: "Shit...I can't even detect his energy...what kind of cloaking technique is he using?"
Charles: "Looking for me, dear?"
Motoko and Su look around themselves in confusion to where the voice came from.
Charles: "You humans are utterly pathetic...I can exceed all limits and I can even cast magic...how come you think I'm able to move so swiftly? How come I hide my energy so well you cant even detect it?"
Motoko: "Come on! Why don't you fight me? Be a man! Hell, I didn't even agree to your stay here in the first place!"
Charles: "If I come out from my hiding spot and challenge you to a fight...just with my fists and feet...would you fight me?"
Motoko: "Of course! That's what I've been waiting for!"
Charles: "Under one condition though"
Motoko: "Why should I do something that stupid? For all I know you could get Keitaro to rape me in my sleep and erase my memory without even me knowing!"
Charles: "Please...I would never do that kind of thing"
Motoko: "Then what the fuck is this condition?"
Charles: "If I win...would you let me stay?"
Motoko: "My ass I would let you stay! That's the shitiest condition I've ever heard!"
Charles: "sigh...fine...what if you and Su fought me, using your own skills, and I defeated you both...THEN would you let me stay?"
Su: "Hmmm...that sounds pretty fair to me"
Motoko: "SHUT UP SU!!"
Su: "YIPE!" runs off and hides in a corner
Motoko: "How about this? It is not entirely up to us to decide whether or not you stay here...it's up to all of us..."
Charles: "Go on..."
Motoko: "If you defeat me AND Su in a timed match of only 10 minutes, we shall donate our respect for you at the least..."
Charles: "So good so far"
Motoko: "BUT if you lose you must grant all you power to me and leave this planet...and if you don't give it to me directly I shall force Keitaro into wishing it and I HAVE MY WAYS!!"
Charles: "It shall be done"
Charles begins to appear right before Motoko's face as though he was standing there the entire time.
Motoko: smirks "So you were here all along"
Charles: "Let's get this started ok?"
Motoko: "Su! Let's kick this...huh?...Su?"
Motoko and Charles look around for Su.
Charles: "I think you scared her"
Motoko: "BULLSHIT! You scared her away with your retarded tricks!"
Charles: "Geez...why do you yell so much?"
Motoko: "BECAUSE I FEEL LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Su: "Hey guys! I'm baaaaack!" Su gives a thumps up to Motoko and Charles.
Motoko: "Hey! What took you so long?"
Su: "Well...I had to get some clothes...and I had to get THIS!"
Charles and Motoko stare up above them in the sky to see what Su had brought to fight Charles with...ITS A GUNDAM!
Motoko: "Alright SU!"
Su: "It's the most powerful gundam I have ever created! I call it ZERO-X 2nd version!"
Motoko: "I dont care what the fuck it does, as long as it gets the job done!"
Su: "Ok!" Su boards the gundam.
Motoko: "You see that shadow over there?" Motoko points to a tree's shadow just over yonder the Hinata Inn. "When the shadow reaches the stairs...10 minutes will be up, got it?"
Charles: "I got it"
Motoko: "Confident huh? WELL NOT FOR LONG!!! NOW DIE!!!"
Su: "Prepare to taste the power of my gundam!!!!!"
Charles: "Bring it bitch!"
Motoko lunges forward towards Charles as Su prepares her targeting system to fire the shots and missiles from her gundam. Charles jumps high in the air to dodge Motoko's rush and lands behind her. Motoko swiftly turns herself around and un -sheaths her sword into the open. Charles ready's himself for the attack in a defensive position. Motoko swings her sword horizontally which Charles easily dodges, then vertically which Charles steps aside to avoid. Motoko's swings and cuts became rapidly faster as Charles' dodges began to push himself off the roof. Charles had to think fast, so he attempted to land a punch on Motoko but was swiftly dodged and was consequently kneed in the gut and fell over.
Motoko: "Is that all you can do?"
Su: "Target locked! FIRE!!!"
Charles: Pull yourself together man...just because that girl stole you ability to fight doesn't mean you can't still win! Don't you remember all those years of training you've done? You even beat the Commander man, you don't always need brawn to win at these games...
The missiles from Su's gundam came towards Charles at the speed of Mach 2! Charles had no chance of surviving.
Motoko: "I will finish this HERE AND NOW!!"
Motoko raises her sword above her head and chanted,
Motoko: "God's cry school 2nd technique: ULTIMATE FORM!"
Charles: "...! Now's my chance!"
Charles quickly recovers himself as he back flips off the roof towards the stairway that lead to the Hinata Inn. Before Motoko could even notice Charles was gone, Motoko had just completed her technique which missed, and the ki wave blast was sent towards Su's gundam instead.
Su: "This 'aint good..." sweatdop
Motoko suddenly realizes that Charles had disappeared.
Motoko: "HEY! I THOGHT YOU SAID NO MAGIC!"
Charles: "Hey Motoko! I'm right down here!"
Motoko looked over the edge of the roof and saw Charles waving his hand at her.
Motoko: "What the hell are you doing there?"
Charles: "Don't worry about me! Worry about yourself!"
Motoko: "Huh?"
Without taking heed to Charles' warning, Motoko was brutally hit by all of Su's missiles, and in unison, Su's gundam was destroyed as well. Upon impact, the two residents went flying in the air, hit each other and fell to the ground to only land right in front of Charles.
Motoko: barely alive "It 'aint over Charles...you didn't defeat us yknow..."
Charles: "We'll see about that" smiles
Charles cracks his knuckles and gave a good uppercut to Motoko's defenseless chin as she fell over on top of Su which knocked her out as well. Charles turns himself 180 degrees around to the stairway to find the shadow wasn't even close to making it there.
Charles: "Looks like I win" smiles
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Elsewhere within the Hinata Inn, the residents are beginning to settle down in the lounge.
Naru: "So what are we gonna do with this guy?"
Kitsune: "Personally I don't mind if he stays"
Naru: "Kitsune, you gotta keep in mind that this is a girl's only dorm...we can't allow another man to live with us,"
Shinobu: "Umm...but, Sempai lives with us..."
Naru: "But that's different though!"
Kitsune: "How so Naru?"
Naru: "Well...he just showed up out of nowhere, he caught me naked in the hot spring bath, and now he just expects to live here...this Charles, or whatever guy seems to be like trouble"
Kitsune: "Y'know, that sounds just exactly what Keitaro had done when he first got here"
Naru: "..."
Kitsune: "The point is, the only danger he presents is the ability to 'cast wishes' but the only thing he can do at the moment is cast magic...just think about it...normally by the end of the day he would've wasted his energy and wouldn't be able to cast magic anymore, and it's not very likely for Keitaro to ask for such a dangerous wish anyhow...he's just too shy to do it anyways,"
Naru and Shinobu: OO
Kitsune: "What?"
Naru: "When did you become so philosophical?"
Kitsune: "When did who become what now?"
Naru: "sigh...nevermind"
Mutsumi walks in (dressed this time) and joins the conversation.
Mutsumi: "Hello everyone what are you girls talking about?"
Naru: "sigh...nothing, it doesn't really matter"
Mutsumi: "Oh! Were you talking about that Charles person?"
Naru: "I guess..."
Mutsumi: "You know, I think he's a very kind person "
Kitsune: "See? Even Mutsumi agrees!"
Mutsumi: "After Keitaro had to find tissues for his nose, Charles had given me an extra set of clothes I don't know what happened to my others though"
Shinobu: "Hey, that rhymed!"
Everyone but Shinobu stares at her.
Shinobu: "Nevermind..."
Everyone: sweatdrop
Naru: "Anyways, I doubt that Charles would do such a thing...I mean you didn't even wish for it"
Mutsumi: "I know but he said something about making sure that everyone is put in their proper place to ensure Keitaro's happiness...or something like that "
Kitsune: sweatdrop "Besides the point...we all think this Charles fellow is a nice guy to us all, so why don't we just give him a chance and see what happens ok?"
Naru: "Fine...sigh..."
Mutsumi: "Yay! He's moving in!"
Naru: "It's only temporary though...we still have to figure out where he's going to sleep and stuff"
Charles walks in through the front door leaving Motoko and Su outside to rest.
Charles: "I could stay with Shinobu...she has an extra futon for me to sleep on"
Naru: "FUCK NO! We don't need any child molesters in here...one is already enough!"
Shinobu: "What's that supposed to mean?"
Charles: "OK...how about Kitsune? She has tons of extra room..."
Naru: "Are you out of your fucking mind? She could get drunk with the snap of a finger and she'd be all over you in seconds"
Charles and Kitsune: That doesn't sound that bad
Naru: "Looks like you're gonna have to stay with me then...there's nowhere else you can stay..."
Charles: "Well I was gonna suggest Keitaro's room but if you insist..."
Naru: "Huh? You say something?"
Charles: "Nothing at all!!"
Motoko walks in through the front door with Su on her shoulder.
Naru and Kitsune: "HOLY SHIT WHAT HAPPENED TO YOU?!"
Motoko gazes upon Charles and looks deep into his eyes. Charles gives a friendly smile back to Motoko and slightly blushes. Charles is confused by why she's blushing, but he nods his head to confirm to not tell anyone what had happened on the roof that afternoon.
Motoko: "Uh...we tripped?"
Naru and Kitsune: "MY ASS YOU DID!"
Motoko walks away with Su on her shoulder and begins to walk up the stairs.
Motoko: "Hey Charles?"
Charles: "Yeah?"
Motoko: "You're not such a bad guy after all"
Su: half asleep "Yeah...not such a bad banana...uh...guy..." falls back asleep
Motoko makes her leave by going back to her room.
Kitsune: "Then it's settled! Charles! Welcome to the Hinata Inn!"
Charles: "Why thank you" bows
Keitaro immediately makes his entrance through the front door with a shit-load of presents in each hand, head, back and foot.
Charles: "I thought you were gonna be 2 hours?"
Keitaro: "Yeah well, with a million bucks you can get things done with style!" Keitaro drops all of his presents and pulls an intercom out of his pocket. "OK! Thanks for the ride man!"
Intercom: "No problem dude"
Everyone hears a jet fly off from some direction.
Charles: "OK...I don't need to know"
Keitaro: "Anywho, here's everyone's Christmas presents! BUT no one gets to open them until the day actually comes!"
Nobody in the room really cares so Keitaro picks up all his things and dumps them in his room. Meanwhile Shinobu hears the phone ringing.
Shinobu: "I'll get it!" Shinobu runs off and picks up the phone.
Charles: "Well, while she's doing that, I think I'll go into town and just check things out...HEY KEITARO IM GOING OUT, IF YOU NEED ME USE YOUR INTERCOM I'LL USE MY MAGIC TO TALK TO YOU THROUGH THERE!"
Keitaro: "DUDE I'M RIGHT HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Charles: "Oh, ok...well see ya later everyone"
Everyone except Shinobu and Keitaro: "See you later then!"
Charles begins to hover and flies off through the front door.
Kitsune: "So uh...cards anyone?"
Shinobu: "WHAT?! YOU WANT WHAT?!"
Naru: "What's wrong Shinobu?"
Shinobu hangs up the phone and looks to be in shock and terror.
Shinobu: "The...the...man...he...Sarah...he..." begins to cry
Naru: "What is it Shinobu tell me everything that happened"
Shinobu: "sniff...the...the...guy...Sarah...he...kidnaped..."
Naru: "What's this about Sarah?"
Shinobu: "SARAH WAS KIDNAPED!!" begins to wail
Naru: "THE FUCK?!"
Shinobu: "sniff...and...and...sniff...he said that he wanted 5000 dollars American, and sex with either me or her or else he wont give her back!"
Naru: "THE FUCKING HELL?!"
Kitsune: "Shinobu! Do you know where the call came from?"
Shinobu: "No!! I have no idea!! The call was blocked and I couldn't recognize the voice!!"
Naru: "KEITARO GET YOUR ASS IN HERE!"
Keitaro runs into the room.
Keitaro: flustered "Yes ma'am?"
Naru: "GET CHARLES ON THE LINE! NOW!"
END OF CHAPTER