Disclaimer: we no ownie (Marie: owine?) Avatar the last airbender
Warning: this chapter contains much evil and darkness (along with a death) so if you don't want to read there is a warning in the bad spot (remember this IS a pg story)
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It was an early morning when Marie woke up. Now, normally she wasn't a morning person but someone was banging on her door
"Ug, you're more annoying then John," she growled, getting out of the bed and marching over to the door. She peeped out to see a smiling Iroh.
"Good morning, Miss Marie, we are going ashore and I was wondering if you would join me."
"Ummm, sure, just let me get ready." With that, Marie shut the door and got dressed, wondering what this was all about.
Once she was done, she walked out. Iroh was waiting on deck sipping tea. "Here you are! I made you some as well," he said, handing her a steaming cup.
"So, why are we up so early?" Marie asked, gently taking a sip of tea. Her blue-gray eyes scanning the row of soldiers all standing to attention as Zuko talked to them.
"Prince Zuko has found the Avatar, and is going to fetch him."
"Oh," Marie muttered, looking a little downcast. Seeing this, Iroh looked confused.
"What's the matter? I thought you'd be happy to see your friend again."
"Well, I am, but… well, you see… oh, never mind, it's really nothing."
Slowly, they made their way toward the gangplank.
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"Ozai, the time has come! All I need is your fire… and an innocent girl."
Nodding, Ozai told a servant to bring a certain girl to him. Nodding, the man left.
"Ozai, let my daughter go! We have been nothing but loyal to you and you family!" Dera, a rich noble from Ozai's council, pleaded as his fifteen-year-old daughter was led to the Firelord; her copper eyes wide with horror.
"We need to kill the Avatar, and we need an innocent girl. Who better to fit this request then your daughter?" the Firelord said coldly.
Darsino smiled, running a hand across the young girl's cheek. "She's perfect… what is your name, child?"
"A…Am… Ami"
"Well, Ami, you are about to help win the war for your people…" Pointing to a huge black star with dragon wings in the middle of it, he indicated for them to lay the poor, frightened girl down. After strapping her to it, Darsino shoved the small, black crystal into her hands. Then, stepping back, he gave the signal.
"NOW!"
Ozai shot a large fireball at a wide eyed Ami, and almost immediately the girl went up into flames. At first, all you could hear were Ami's screams of fear and pain, but then a dark mist began to come up from the star and surround the burning girl. Then a deep growl sounded and the darkness seemed to explode, covering everything in darkness…
Then, almost as suddenly, everything was back to normal; only the girl and crystal were gone. The only sound that could be heard was the evil laughter of a certain hooded man.
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Liz bolted up, clutching her chest. Her heart felt like it was going to explode right out of her chest. She had just had a horrible nightmare, only she really couldn't remember what it was about.
Yet, as she sat there, the sun began to rise and she had this foreboding feeling that something terrible was going to happen.
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Marie was halfway down the gangplank with Iroh by her side, when suddenly everything went dark. Then she sensed a girl's scream, two glowing red eyes and a deep growl. The poor teen screamed in terror as she fell back.
Iroh was shocked. First, Marie was walking next to him as normal as anything. Then, suddenly, she stopped as if she had just seen a ghost, and shrieked in a way that would make anyone's blood freeze. She then fell down crying in horror, as Iroh ran to her side.
Zuko was a little ahead of his uncle and the girl when she screamed. It was something about her scream that reminded him of an old friend. He wasn't really sure why, but he found himself running over to where she was sitting propped up against his uncle.
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"Ug, what happened? My head hurts…" Sokka said, as he woke up to the smell of cooking fish. Aang groaned from where he was sleeping.
"Good morning!"
Sokka winced as his cheerful sister walked over to him.
"Oh my head…" he wailed.
Liz just giggled like she always did. "Well, that's what you get for drinking."
Sokka raised his eyebrow. "Drinking?"
"Remember this?" Liz asked, holding up the bottle for him to see. Then it hit him like a bolt.
"So, that's what that was."
"Can you remember anything from last night?" Katara asked, kneeling beside him.
"Not really… all I remember is Liz having these huge angel wings and you were glowing."
"Glowing? I was glowing?"
"Yeah, it was pretty weird."
"Huh…?" Liz muttered as she walked over to Aang, who had just gotten up and was looking like he was going to be getting rid of everything he ever ate.
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After they had helped Marie, Zuko mounted a rhino. "Hurry up; we must catch the Avatar while he's still helpless."
Quickly, Iroh got onto another rhino. ((M: I know this might sound cruel, since he was so nice to me…but I don't see how Iroh got up on anything quickly)) "Are you sure you're feeling all right?" he asked Marie, who was standing next to his rhino.
The blonde nodded hesitantly.
"Now, don't worry," Iroh said, holding out his hand for Marie to get on. "We're going to stay well away from the battle."
Nodding, Marie jumped up behind Iroh and got ready to go, not sure what was waiting for them.
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"Going somewhere, Avatar?"
All four kids turned to see Zuko and his small army standing in the clearing. Katara gasped, Aang tried to stand, and Sokka… poor Sokka threw up his remaining rum.
"I can see you're in no position to fight. So why don't you give up peacefully and no one gets hurt."
"I don't think so, Zuko," Liz said, getting into an attack position. "Quick!" she hissed to Katara, "get the boys and run!" Katara was about to object when Zuko lunged at Liz.
Shutting her eyes, (L: Hey, it works for Padme!) Liz braced herself, but Zuko never got to her. Suddenly, the ground between the two parties split and a HUGE dragon that looked like it was made of mist emerged from the earth. Its red eyes scanned its surroundings until it saw Marie.
"Fire… MUST HAVE FIRE!" It growled, and Marie's eyes opened wide when she realized it meant her. It lunged at her, and scooped her up, taking her with it into the air.
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Liz: first we'd like to thanks everyone for All those WONDERFULL reviews! We got more then 12 for one chapter! HORAY!
Marie second we'd like to thank Zuko's Flamethrower because we have a feeling that for some reason more people reviews because of his/her flame
Liz also a small note this story is almost at the end, sad yes but all good things must end. And we promise it has a REALLY cool ending.
Marie: now to thank everyone who reviewed to the last chapter
XEye-Of-The-WolfX:
Liz: well randomness is god!
Marie: she's been saying this for over a week now
Liz: yes randomness is god and I'll take what ever your drinking!
Marie: no you wont
Gir The Insane Flamin Ninja:
Liz: yes vault IS good but I like mountain dew better
Marie: I like sugar… it's yummy…
Liz: hehe yah… I guess it's her turn to act crazy
Marie: we're not at all ticked at our dear zuko flamethrower because he/she helped us get over 15 REVEIWS! WOW
Liz: we shall be thanking her/him later
Marie: Liz likes to shout a lot to
Liz; YES AANG AND SOKKA GETTING DRUNK WAS REALLY FUNNY!
phantom-willow217:
Marie: I know… when Liz first told me about it I was kind of freaked out 2
Liz: and yes dear zuko flamethrower is wrong but then it's hard to be right ALL the time
Marie: and thanks for the kitty she looks like my cat!
Liz: you just keep thinking that Marie….
Mavrik Zero:
Liz: yes and we owe it all to zuko flamethrower
Marie: yep Liz decided to do another chapter quickly so that we could tell him/her off.
Liz: yes we found it funny too starts laughing like the manic that she is
Marie: ahem… moving right alowng here, well that's for all your support all this time.
Zuko's Flamethrower:
Liz: we have amused the great Zuko's Flamethrower all bow down starts to pay Zuko's Flamethrower fake homage
Marie: so did you read this chapter or just the part about your flame
Liz: well I have to thank you because of your flame we got over 12 REVIRWS! HORAY!
The Green Phoenix:
Marie: thanks we really enjoy it when people enjoy our story cuz that's what keeps us going
Liz: here's more of that "mysterious guy" for you
Moon n Sun:
Marie: I agree but I think what he/she really needs is some friends and a stable life
Liz: to me people getting sent to the Avatar world or any other dimension for that matter is a kind of plot that everyone should try at least once just to try it out, as long as it has a semi plot it's fun to read.
Yanielle:
Liz: that's ok I'm kind of slow at reading to and Marie's REALLY SLOW
Marie: as long as you reviewed we're happy, because that's all that matters
Amberhawk:
Liz: well the people kind of are self inserts since their us…
Marie: so we don't really know what you mean
Liz: we'll try to get the characters as IC as possible
darkavatar13:
Liz: in the story I'm 16 but in real life I'm turning 18 on the 6th of July!
Marie: poor I hate it when thing's like that happen hope you computer get's fixed soon.
7:
Liz: thanks we REALLY appreciate that
Marie: you have NO idea how much
Fire wolfess:
Liz: I think I said there was going to me no romance like 100 times! Yet does anyone listing NO!
Marie: lol we sould tell him/her that sporks are plastic! Pluss I don't really think she/he even read this story
JustPlainPeachy:
Liz: well I'm honored that you got the same review! That must mean that our story is really good!
Marie: I'm in this chapter so there you go you can be happy now
Liz: something like that…. But more like this big monster comes and almost kills everyone, but I'm not going to spoil it for you
i love zuko:
Liz: I know thanks for telling me that you got that flame so I was prepared
Marie: yah thanks I love Zuko you're a real live saver
Air Bending Dragon35:
Liz: it was really funny when they got drunk
Marie: I hope you had fun at camp
raven-foreverdark:
Liz: -goes on with raven-foreverdark about how stupid flamers are-
Marie: but we need to thank him/her because he/she helped us get over 12 reviews
Liz: don't worry we're still going to write
HanyouRiyumi:
Liz: you should and if you get something from him/her remember it's nothing personal
Marie: we will keep this story up it's going to take a LOT more then one stupid person to stop us
Liz; thanks for telling us what Canon parings were
Well that's all fokes and thanks for reviewing and PLEASE review! We don't care if it's just a "great story" or "nice" just as long as we can see that you read and liked it
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