Disclaimer: still cant find the rights to own Avatar,

We'd like to make a small thank you to Air Bending Dragon35 for being our 100th reviewer! Thank you Air Bending Dragon35 even though you probity didn't mean it thanks!

Also thanks to: bndrchic15, XEye-Of-The-WolfX, HanyouRiyumi, Mdog, outthere101, Mavrik Zero, i love zuko, Fire wolfess, Gir The Insane Flamin Ninja, and darkavatar13 for reviewing and making this such a wonderful time.

Now an important note PLEASE READ:

If we keep getting Anonymous flames we are going to turn off our Anonymous reviewer, which would be sad for those who WANT to send REAL reviewers

Oh and for Zuko flamethrower and General Iroh and for any other reviewers… we can report you so please think before you act because next time we're not going to be nice and just post your flame.

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Liz watched in horror as her friend was taken up into the air "Marie!" she cried her eyes wide

"we need to get out of here while we still have a chance" Sokka said

"But Marie!" Liz cried pointing toward the flying dragon.

"She's right" Aang said shakily holding up his glider (L: remember he's still got a little hangover) "we can't just leave her"

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Hanging upside down from the dragons claws, as if flew higher. Marie panicked, she thrashed about but the dragon just groped tighter, its talons cutting into her. Realizing that was useless, she lay still in it's grasp thinking.

It was it must have fire, but does that mean fire can't hurt it? No harm in trying…

Suddenly the dragon stopped it's ascent, and hovered far above the ground. It raised it's claw holding Marie in front of it's face and opened it's gapping mouth as if to eat her.

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Liz watched helplessly as the dragon stopped hovering far above them her breath was becoming uneven as she racked her brain for something, ANYTHING that would help her friend. Suddenly a voice, seemly in the distance called out "use your waterbending!"

Quickly with out a second thought Liz called the water to herself consecrating harder then she had ever concentrated before. 'if I can make a butterfly maybe I can make a spear' forming the image in her mind she pulled the water together and to her surprise as well as plasher it started to take form

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'Dear god please let this work' Marie prayed as she clutched her necklace. Almost immediately she burst into flames. The dragon instantly dropped her and thru back it's head and screamed at high pitched shrieking sound that nearly froze Marie's blood. As she plummeted toward the earth she tried to remember how to fly.

((Liz: Marie never gave me her flash back so I need to call her and get it, but since she's soooo slow If I wait I probably won't be able to put this up until Monday if I'm lucky so I decited to just give you this note and tell you that once you put up the next chapter it'll be on. so for now just use your imagination))

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Liz stood there her water spear in had trying to fined a good time and place to throw it. Suddenly she saw Marie burst into flames for a few moments then fall form the dragons gasp. Taking this rare opportunity the let her spear fly toward the monster. It flew right through the dragons tail. Giving out a horrific screech the black terror dove down toward her. Suddenly from the corner of her eye Liz saw blur of red streaking toward the monster. Then Liz realized that it was MARIE!

"leave her alone!" the human fireball yelled lunging toward the dragon. Quickly recovering herself Liz started to make and throw water needles at the monster.

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Marie hit the dragon head on casing it to fall. Standing there she felt a bunch of water needles fly past her and at the dragon, turning she saw Liz in a fighting stance and a determined look on her face. The blonde smiled until she herd the dragon snarl behind her. Spinning around she saw it getting up.

"This is our battle" slapping his tail down the earth began to shake then it split separating the 2 girls from everyone else.

"What are you!" Liz asked fear slightly clinging to her voice. The dragon got up to its full height giving out a hiss like laugh he looked right at the ashen girl.

"I shall be the one who will destroy the protectors." With this he lunged at Liz swallowing her in one gulp.

" Elizabeth!" Marie screamed "NO!" bursting into flames again she flew at the best "you killed her! You killed my best friend! You killed her!"

- A firenation ship some where at the north pole this morning –

Cono sat at his station board like every night "nothing ever happens when I'm on duty" he muttered to himself "sure they say see the world! Meet new people, join the fire navy… all I've seen is a cold wasteland and all the people I've meet want to kill me." Sighing Cono looked up something black catching his eyes "what it?" walking closer he realized what it was: some kind of black mist sweeping over the water and heading strait for them.

- back to us, the important people-

Marie lunged at the monster screaming bloody murder the whole time. The dragon stood up to its full height (M: which I must say it pretty impressive) hissing.

"You will now win and once I have consumed your fire I shall help my creator destroy this dimension and all who live in it"

"Shut up!" Marie hurled a huge fireball at him her anger pretty much at it's peak (L: trust me she doesn't get angry often but when she does…) but the dragon just opened it's mouth wide and swallowed it whole.

"Your next" he hissed flying toward her and catching her in his talons. Flying up again it stopped hovering large red eyes baring into it's victim, and this time Marie knew she couldn't get away.

- Ozai's castle –

"Lord we just received word from captain Nor from the north pole he says there's this odd black mist covering the sea and traveling south and captain Grmore from this station at the south give a similar report. They both say it started this morning." Ozai gripped his chair.

"Summon Darsino and tell him I'd like to have a word with him."

- back to Marie's pending doom –

Marie watched in horror as the dragon opened its mouth ready to devour the poor blonde. Shutting her eyes Marie cringed "this is it" she thought bracing herself for death. Suddenly the dragon's belly made a funny gurgling noise then Liz burst out or at least Marie guessed it was Liz. At least it looked like a human but this person looked like he or she was made of water.

"Get your snack some where else!" the person said "and leave me and my friend alone!" yep that was Liz.

- Ozai's thrown room –

"You wanted me your highness?"

"I just received word that a strange black mist is covering both the north and South Pole. And oddly enough it all started right around the same time you preformed that ceremony."

"This is true my lord, soon the whole word will be covered in darkness. Once the sun is cut off everything will slowly die"

"WHAT!" the fire around Ozai erupted "I'll kill you if you don't fix it!"

Darsino just laughed and evil cruel laugh "you can't kill a demon I am immortal, but this dimension wont be for long!" with a twirl of his cape he disappeared in a puff of black mist. His evil laugh still lingering in the room

- back to the 2 clueless that they are this dimension's only hope-

Lunging at the dragon's claws, which where holding Marie, she swiped at him with a water ax cutting off both claws with one swipe. Marie burst into flames and landed harmlessly next to Liz on the forest floor. Both girls turned back into their normal forms.

"You know" Liz said looking at her hands in wonder "if our lives weren't in danger I'd have to say that this is the coolest thing ever!"

Marie shook her head and looked up "Look" she pointed to the dragon. He was lurching and screeching then the hole in his stomach and his claws begin to grow back.

"Now what? How are we suppose to fight something that can just grown back it's limbs?" Marie asked her friend crest fallen "this is hopeless" Liz's head suddenly shot up as if Marie had just said something amazing.

"We pray"

'What?"

"We pray, trust me Marie, it's like this dream I had… just trust me Marie"

The blonde smiled looking right into her determined caramel eyes.

"I always do"

- with those poor forgotten others –

"What are they doing!" Sokka screamed as both girls knelt down "Their going to get killed!"

"Get up" Katara whispered her sapphire eyes full of worry.

"Look" Aang said pointing to the 2 girls. They were both glowing, Liz blue and Marie red. Suddenly the shot up into the air toward the dragon. Then taking hands they begin to spin like a twister of red and blue. They stuck the monster head on. there was a HUGE explosion. Fire, Water, and Black mist raining down. When the dust cleared the only thing seen was the girls lying in the grass motionless.

No one moved to scared to fine out if they where alive or not. Then suddenly a familiar voice broke the silence.

"I cant move my body!"

"Ha! I feel worse then a double Jazz class."

"Do you always relate everything with dance?"

"Yep and so what you make everything into a joke."

"True"

Katara ran over helping Liz up "Oh Liz that was amazing!"

"What was amazing?"

"Everything!"

"Oh…"

Iroh walked over to Marie Zuko trailing slightly behind him to in shock at what he had just witnessed to think strait "Are you alright?" Iroh asked helping the poor girl up.

Marie nodded slightly turning to see Liz, who looked up. Carmel met blue gray and Liz said what was on both of their minds.

"Now what?"

No sooner had these words left her mouth when a light appeared and an amazing archangel stepped forward.

"Now you go home"

Who are you?" Marie asked

"My name's Mekalo and I'm here to take you home." With a wave of his hand a portal appeared showing Liz's room just like it had been when they had left it. Both girls gave out a squeal jumping up and down hugging each other. Suddenly Liz stopped.

"Wait a minute" turning to a slightly shocked Katara she walked over giving her a hug "that you Katara" then she turned to Aang hugging him as well "stay strong Aang" then it was Sokka's turn, Liz's eyes were already moist "Good bye you big idiot!" she cried hugging him. "Man I'm going to miss you all SOOO much!" she said tears streaming down her cheeks as she scooped up Momo and giving him a big kiss on the head.

Marie walked over to Iroh giving him a hug "Thank you for always being there for me, and I wanted you to have this." Holding out a picture she gave it to him.

"Your welcome, I will always think of you as a the daughter I never had" he said hugging her back tears coming to both their eyes. Marie then turned to Zuko holding out a hand.

"Thank you for teaching me" she said Zuko slowly took her hand.

"Your welcome…uff"

"Good bye you hot head" Liz had come up behind him and was now hugging him from behind "I'll even miss you". Zuko's face turned a slight shade of red and is wasn't from embarrassment or pleaser. Getting the hint Marie gently but firmly pried Liz off the prince.

"Let's go Liz"

"Ok, good bye Iroh! Save me some tea for when I come back!"

"Heaven forbid" Zuko muttered as both girls walked into the portal suddenly a blinding light burst out….

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Marie: I thought I should point out that the fanfiction logo is "unleash your imitation free your soul" not put your good stories up and let people who have messed up lives flame them.

Liz: meaning if you have a problem point out it in real words not just some stupid thing that has nothing to do with the story.

Marie: we support all those "Little kids" that are (what you call) trying to write fanfics at least they are putting their thoughts into words and letting there imaginations run free.

Flame form General Iroh (who by the way has not stories because he/she is to lame brained to write one):

The genre of people getting sucked onto the Avatar-verse is old shit. It should be avoided at all costs. (Liz: well sorry to say this is one of those stories and it says so in the front so why in the world did you read this?)
keep your fantasies about Aang or Zuko or any other Avatar character to yourself. (Marie: AANG? Why Aang? Ok I can kind of, ignoring all the NO ROMANCE things posted all over this fic, Zuko and maybe Sokka… but AANG? Liz: ewww in this story I'm 16 and Marie's 14)
Good fic has plot, tension and good writing. Your fic has none. (Marie: well some parts got so tense for me that I had to tell Liz to stop and it DOES have a plot your just not really reading this so you cant see it)
you owe me a new computer screen because I vomited on it. (Liz: sorry but we didn't tell you do so we don't HA! Marie: oh that was mature)
don't ever reproduce. The last thing we need is more Suethors. (Liz: I'm not even going to ask what THAT means, but "don't ever reproduce. The last thing we need is more losers in this world")
take your filth somewhere else (wait, don't. No one deserves to be terrorized by this) (Marie: I have a better idea Why don't YOU leave I think it would make MORE people happy)
No one cares about your fantasy. (Liz: ok I'll tell that to the 98 reviewers that said they liked this story…)

Marie: oh and your shaming the good name of General Iroh

Now for the real reviewers

Air Bending Dragon35:

Liz: first THANK YOU FOR the 100th review!

Marie: second… we might make a sequel but it wont be an avatar…. More on it later.

darkavatar13:

Liz; no idea…

Marie: we're just great and everyone loves us! (just kidding)

Liz: well why do you read this story?

Gir The Insane Flamin Ninja:

Marie: well tell them at they can report him/her

Liz: YES SHOUTING IS FUN!1

Marie: LIZ my ears!

Liz: that sounds like fun we should get together some time, then the world would really tremble!

Marie; yes bad dragon! But he gets what he deserves

Fire wolfess:

Liz: I know it's sad but it DOES show how bad this dude is

Marie: well Zuko flamethrower DID give us a REAL review after her/his flame sooo maybe he/she has SOME creativity

i love zuko:

Marie: I know and thanks for noticing your such a great reader

Liz: and yes we did

Mavrik Zero:

Marie: we'll miss you a lot you've been such a GREAT reader and reviewer

Liz: if you want to read some more of our crazystuff try our drabbles… I have no idea if you like randomness but it's pretty good

outthere101:

Marie: WOW thanks to say it's THAT good means a lot to us

Liz: yah

Mdog:

Marie: pretty scary, I mean riding a NICE REAL dragon is cool but being caught bye a monster that looks like a dragon that was created bye some poor girls blood and Ozai's fire WASN'T what I call fun.

Liz: HEY what about me! I had to WATCH you!

HanyouRiyumi:

Marie; what movie was that?

Liz: sound's cool but scary at the same time, if it's anything like this

XEye-Of-The-WolfX:

Liz: fine I'll just sit here and sulk

Marie: here –hands her a mountain dew-

Liz: HORAY!

bndrchic15:

Liz: we might but now until we finished our other story's
Marie: but It wont be about Avatar