Resident evil, chapter two
Dang, I was hoping that some one might review my work
But I was wrong, no one at all, (except a friend) I was really hoping that some one would at lease tell me if it was bad or good but I got the short end of the stick…
And well I all so have to say I'm sorry for my tipping errors, it's just I like to tip but try to do it fast from lack of time…
Chapter two, all alone…
Sarah: (thoughts) awe… damn it all!
Sighing from the fright of the animal and the fact of the vehicle that she had just crashed in to didn't help the situation one bit, all Sarah could think of at the moment was the pain and the blood that was sliding down her ankle to the floor.
Sarah: awe… ohh shit, what about the thing!
Sarah stood cold for a moment and then noticed there was no more sound or cluttering that an animals toenails would usually make. As she pushed up with her hands, to try to pear to the side of her, to see what might have happened to the thing that was chasing her she started to stutter as she saw the dog laying in a pool of blood, almost 12 feet from her, looking at it closely Sarah flinched when she seen it was missing half of its face and a ear.
Sarah:(silence)…
As Sarah looked closely at the anime its eyes twitched, fear ran strait up Sarah's neck as the dog started to roll off its side.
Sarah:… stay… down …stay…do…w…n…
Sarah started to cry as the dog pushed up with its two-hone leg and started to growl strait at her. There was nothing to keep the dog from pouncing on her it was all over…
Sarah closed her eyes and let the only thought that could come to her mind hit her lips.
Sarah: get it over, you piece of shit . . .
As the dog started to growl, a gunshot went off and another splatter of blood hit the pavement floor, Sarah's eyes went wide. The dog went down after 3 seconds and yelped as it hit the ground with a thud.
Sarah sat there speechless staring in to the emptiness of the dogs eyes.
Voice: you should really have your leg bandaged up.
Sarah blinked when she heard the voice, as she glimpsed the area of where the dog was once standing; out of the corner of her eye she could see a figment of a metal object being pointed at the beast on the floor.
Voice: I think it would be a good time to get in doors now, my watch is telling me that the sun will be lowering in three and a half hours and unless you would like to meet more of those… flesh eating people we should probably get in doors.
But on the other hand, if you would like to die like (ahem) you where saying to the dog before, you might as well just stay out here.
Sarah felt a strong rush of embarrassment as she tried to grasp the fact that instead of dieing she was saved, it was a awkward feeling that she was about to give up here life to a ugly dog, but instead she got saved…
… hmm well that's it for the story for this chap, I know that I haven't added some parts that I should have for instance I should of told of the other gun shot and off how she reacted to the voice but I am out off time so I will leave all this crap until the other chapter and I will explain in a little 4more detail of what happens… and yes I will make it longer with better grammar use unlike in this (end of chapter preview) I'm just rushing sense the bell rung…!