A/N: finally, I can publish this even if it's only here. This story was written by me in my youth, I was about 8 but I had a good heart. I am taking most of the original and keeping it but to make more sense I am rewriting parts of it. So here we go.
Dis: I do not own Legend of Zelda rights, but I do own all OC's in here.
A dark mist engulfs the once flourishing, green forest of Kokiri. Insect even hid in the dirt to avoid the airs foul odor. In the distance a lone blue light shines with might. A fairy, a fairy shines with all her might. The fog slowly thins to reveal a man, dress in dark robes and battle gear. His blade and shield resting on his back in there holdings. The figure sits atop the a house, once owned by a former hero. The fairy slowly flies in circles around the man. On occasion she bounces up and down trying to get his attention.
"hey! I am talking to you!" the fairies voice high pitched almost annoying the man. (I think everyone found Navi annoying)
"I told you go away" he swings his hand in the general direction of her attempting to swat her away.
"but you have the power of the Triforce, you must see the queen, as foretold in many legends of the hero of time"
"listen fairy!" he gets up and points his finger in the opposite direction Navi flutters.
"I'm over here" Navi says insultingly.
"hey, it's not my fault I was born without the ability to see the Light side"
"an advantage for me, listen I have had many people I was guardian to, and they all had that same Triforce power you have. How can you be so ignorant!"
"as you said before under your breath, my 'arrogance' gives me my courage. There all in the same"
"I have no time for this, you coming with me!" Navi kicks him in the back of the head forcing him to fall of the roof of Link's former home, into the ground below.
"why you little, if I knew where you were I'd kill you!"
"well to bad. If you want me to shut up go see the Queen, then maybe I'll consider it"
"ack, how can someone so small be so annoying" he mutters.
"Good luck, Domina"
"shove it half pint!" Domina leaves the forest in a fit. Hand at the ready for anything.
Domina walks out to the glorious Hyrule fields. Even with the forests magic dead this place seems to keep it's holy glow. The sun shines on Domina's dark presence, nullifying his dark aura. Domina just scuffs and walks on to the castle, hand still gripped to the hilt of his blade. Thought the field is small a good 8 hours pass to get from the forest to the castle. Domina walks into the market at mid evening. The orange glow of the sun give the market a nice golden look. Domina seemed ever so sick to see all these people having fun and even just talking. Being chosen as the hero of time wasn't on his wanted list but he knows that if he wants it gone he'll have to do this.
"where is the castle?" Domina almost threatens a villager with just the tone he uses. The villager points up the hill to the north and Domina just drops him on the ground.
"thank you" and he walks off to it.
The Queen sits in her royal chamber, upon her throne. All of the memories of the once glorious hero. He was the only one to save Hyrule from it's destiny. All the others could not even pass the first tests. She sighed as her thoughts slowly drifted to the only true hero.
"Link, why. Why did you leave Hyrule, return to me, I miss thee"
"sentimental thought don't suit you queen" Domina almost bursts into the chambers insultingly.
"you must be the next chosen hero of time" the Queen looks at his attire. "a strange get up for one of your fate"
"I don't want to be this hero, I had intent of over throwing the throne but it looks like I have to do this first"
"what? Fate has chosen a villain to save the world"
"I take offence to that, I am a petty thug, no evil villain. I don't want to make people suffer I just want to be known"
"then why not take this Hero's Quest. Fame can become of it"
"and become your personal guard, I'd rather slay you right now" Domina goes to pull his blade but a magic force seems to be stopping him. He then just resumes a calm stature and stare down the queen. "what is my first task"
"glad to see you accept"
"I never said that, make note of this tramp" the Queen glowers at his titling. "when I save the world I will come back and kill you, Queen Zelda IX. Mark those words and fear the day I come back" Domina walks out of the chambers and slams the doors shut behind him.
"the Triforce of courage in him seems to have lost it's luster. His arrogance gives him power, now all I need to do is find out where the Triforce of Power lay, and I may be able to stop this all form happening again"
Navi zips around the blackened, dead, Kokiri Forest. All her memories of the fateful day when she was paired up with Link. That was the bravest she had ever been, she at first thought that the Triforce of Courage that she had later found he had within him, gave her the power. Nut she now knows that it was her heart all along, she cared to much for the outcasted Link that she to felt that it was her duty to make sure he was safe. She suddenly gets a chill down her spine, a familiar chill though. She zip over to the entrance of the Kokiri Forest to see Domina entering again.
"I thought you said you'd stop annoying me if I went"
"I know, I lied. Now come on we have to get you started" Nave futilely tries to drag Domina back out to the fields. Domina, using the sense of touch, grabs Navi and holds her close to his face.
"I may not be able to see you but that won't stop me from killing you. Get off my case and go find someone else to be the hero. I want the kingdom not the glory, you go inform that tawdry wench that I refuse to do so" he then casts Navi out off the forest with a firm curveball pitch. Navi collides with a nearby tree and is knocked out.
Domina walks back to Link former abode and rests atop the roof 'til night. But his restful state never stayed complete for long. Every so often a howl and ghastly moan was heard from inside the house. Domina would roll over to look through a hole in the roof and see nothing in there. And he'd then roll back on his back to rest again. Until one final time he looked and he saw a figure on the bed. He want to get up but fell through the roof. The figure remained undisturbed, Domina went in to get a better look, a ghost. Rather a haunting image, the former hero of time, Link. His ghost had come back, retelling the day that changed his life. But he lay restless, tossing and turning in his bed, his hand came out from time to time as if reaching for someone. Domina step closer and looked at him from above. He reach slowly to attempt to wake the sleeping ghost child. But just as his hand was able to touch, the figure lunged forward with it's sword. For being an object of unstable memories it hurt Domina, blood came from a nonexistent wound. Domina fell to his knees and pulled his hand away from the blood. He looked at it then collapsed on the bed.
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okay, the first chapter done, actually this is more like 2 and a half from my old book. But I hope you like it, the only things I really changed was how he addressed the Queen, and a made the Queen !X instead of the original Zelda I. Review please