And we can cut there, too.

Step 3:

Using The Weakness (cont'd)

So, now we've had two stories with Mary-Sues. Now, Varen's weakness: ugly men. That one was pretty obvious. She also probably dislikes peasants, or poor people. So, Raven doens't like sharks, death, or bugs, and Veran dislikes ugly men and peasants. So, we can use these weaknesses to destroy them. That means that we turn the story around to defeat the Mary-Sues! But, there's still another Sue we have to show you first.

Wait. I have to explain something first. You did notice that the first Sue was an animal attracter, and the second Sue was a men attracter, right? Well, even if you didn't, that's okay. So, can you guess what the next will be? Sues are kind of like this, in a pattern.

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Mary-Sue #3

The Child Lover

ENGLAND

Somewhere in Europe

Avren Nuhtre smiled at the small child. He had a bucktooth, but he was very skinny. He was cute, but he looked like he hardly ate anything. She passed by him, to see a fat child with stains of chocolate around his mouth, and a chocolate bar in his hand. The next one was a girl, who had blonde hair, but looked very brave, and looked like she could beat someone to death if she had to. The next was another girl, a brunette, who smiled widely, but had the look of a brat. Avren passed on. The last was a boy, who glared at her, and had brown hair, and matching eyes. His hands twitched as she passed by.

"You're all so adoreable! And he's letting me babysit you while he...gets the place all ready, correct?" she asked, trying to smile at the boy who was glaring at her.

"Yes, ma'am. That's what he told us, anyway," said the bucktoothed boy. He grinned at her happily. "I've never had a babysitter before, ma'am." He walked up to her and smiled. The fat boy marched up to her proudly.

"I'd like it very much if you gave me some chocolate," he said in a German accent. Avren smiled.

"I can arrange that." She looked at the blonde girl. "So, why don't we sit in a circle and talk?" she asked.

"Of course!" they all agreed, except for the brown-haired boy.

"I hate talking circles," he said stubbornly.

"Fine then," Avren said silently.

"I can kick him with my martial art skills, if you want," suggested the blonde girl. Avren had to set her mind to tell the girl not to.

"I don't think that would be a good idea," she said, trying not to be sarcastic. Bucktooth boy sat next to her.

"I think you are a good babysitter." He smiled again.

"So, what do you do?" asked the brunette girl.

"Well, I can play the piano, or so I'm told, but my actual profession is helping children who are mentally challenged." She smiled.

"Is that an insult?" asked the jerk-boy defiantly. Avren sighed. This would be a long hour that she had to babysit. The boy walked over to a big control panel looking thing,