So I like this one better. Reviews would be really appreciated the story is set when they're parting ways.
Looking Back.
They always looked back, without even noticing themselves that they did it. To check if the other was there, and when they were spotted they turned back their head with a little sigh, of course they didn't notice that either. But when they couldn't spot them they would stop briefly and almost in a frantic state eyes would search everywhere. Intill they popped out of practically no where. Then another undetected sigh came out.
But when they finally realized what they were doing as they traveled. They just decided in their minds that she was checking if he hadn'r run off, and he decided he just looked back to see if she hadn't been kidnapped. Again. They decided that they didn't smile with contentment and relief, but the reassurance that they didn't have to run around looking for the other.
It had been decided, silently, unconsciously, that they wouldn't walk side by side. Either her infront, or back. And him walking a bit next to Jin, never together. They decided they didn't dart their eyes because they didn't want to be questioned. But really they didn't want to face the fact they were watching the other.
But they did look back. Too see the other was there, close enough to trott bit, to reach out and touch, even just briefly. They decided they didn't look back, and sigh with relief knowing the other was there, that they had a moment of joy with that petty fact. No, couldn't one just simply look back without there being a deep complicated reason?
But when that faithful day came, when they came to the fork of the road. They had walked together, Fuu in the middle, Jin on the right, Mugen on the right. There were no words, just the sounds of their shoes hitting the ground. And after a few words, humour, they started waling away from the others. One kept on going, but two stopped and looked back at the same time. Seeing the other was looking, they for a fleeting second was going to wipe their head away. But they didn't. And even far away they could see the other smile softly, they knew, and they had finally decided with the truth. There was a quite moment as they looked back on the other, then they finally turned around, content with this new relaztion. As they heaved a sigh for the other.
But something stopped them, as once again without their knowing they turned around, walking briskly, hurried. They stopped in the middle of the road, without saying anything. Their all knowing smiles told all. As they started walking forward together. No more looking back, they will look forward now. And then there was another sigh, but of finality.
Reviews pwese! Now..Im kinda out of ideas,but that dosen't mean I won't update!