Thanks toLegion Fardreamer for reviewing my story. I almost gave up on it because I thought no one was reading it. Pretty Much no one is... I understand why though, not many people are Firefly and DA fans.
The two pairs of twins stared through the viewing window into the room.
"She looks just like Mom did when we were little." Lex whispered, her statement barely audible.
"We have to get her out of here now!" Jess moved to yank open the door. Gel stopped him.
"Wait!" She hissed.
"What?" Jess asked, confused.
"The door might be rigged to an alarm." She rolled her eyes. "You know the Alliance loves alarms."
"Oh. Yeah." He smiled sheepishly.
The blonde laughed. "You never remember the alarms." She shook her head and got to work on the panel next to the door. After a minute she stepped off to the side. "Done."
"Great." Jess opened the door. A red light silently began to flash over the door. None of the part transgenics saw it. The four of them walked silently through the now open door.
Four sets of eyes; two sets emerald green, two sets deep blue, stared down at the unconscious form of X5623.
The transgenics was sedated and bound to the medical bed she was lying on. Her long dark hair was tied back and her heavily lashed eyes were shut.
"She looks like she's our age." Hel whispered.
"Well, she kinda is." Gel whispered back.
The burst of static over their comms tore their attentions away from the young woman.
"Guys!" Rex's voice yelled over their earpieces. "You must've tripped a secondary alarm or something, Alliance guards are on their way to your position."
Jess and Lex cursed quite colorfully. Hel and Gel shared a look then began undoing 623's restraints. As soon as she was free, Jess gingerly scooped her up into his arms.
Lex turned to her brother. "Jess, take her and Gel. Hel and I will try to hold them off." He opened his mouth to argue but she cut him off. "Just go, Gel needs to be with her to check her stats and you need to carry her out of here."
Jess nodded silently and hurried out of the door. Gel followed. Hel and Lex shot each other a glance.
The sound of rapid bootsteps coming towards them a minute later steeled their nerves. Lex slid her prized silver pistols out of their hlsers. Hel cocked her handgun. With a quick glance and a pair of nods, they burst through the door, guns raised.
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