Hi… I'm new at this so plz tell me what I could do better :)
This is a story about my OC Aaron, you will learn about her past soon. (I don't like how you spell the girl Erin's name because it's ugly looking but she is a girl) but I will tell you what she looks like, she has long black hair, golden eyes, a "ty lee" figure, wares and outfit like Mai's but it has a black sash around her waist,.
Disclaimer: Sure I own avatar and since I do I won't let the avatar movie come out (was said in a sarcastic voice)
With Aaron
Aaron looked down into the stream; it was peaceful, calm, quiet, and very smooth, just as her life had been before Ozai turned her life into a living nightmare. She cried at this thought, it was his fault her baby brother and parents were dead, his fault she now was on the run from the fire nation
"He is a bastard for doing this to me, one day I will get my revenge, and nobody will stop me," Aaron thought with the utmost glee.
She suddenly herd noises from right behind her, she knew it was not an animal; its sound was too heavy to be an animal.
"Show yourself coward," Aaron said with as much authority as she possibly could, witch was not easy considering she'd been crying for last day and a half. Nobody came so she sat down by the stream and cried some more.
With Zuko
He saw a girl with long black hair call out to him, well not him, but wanting to know who she is, he would not let her see him as the blue spirit, no, he would leave his mask in his bag, well hidden from his uncle, and come back, he knew it was safe to approach her, she was fire nation, he saw her eyes, and robe.
With Aaron
Aaron was still crying when she herd another noise, it had been an hour since the last one, but she didn't care, so she didn't call out. Aaron then sensed it was coming towards her.
"Get back, leave me alone." She cried with all her might and shot a wall of flame out of her hands and then let it die down, she knew it was still there, and she was scared.
With Zuko
A wall of flame almost got him! A bright red wall of flame! So she was a fire bender.
"Wow, I knew she was fire nation, but a bender, most of the girls can't bend," Zuko thought thinking of Mai, Ty lee, his mom, his grandmother, and a couple of other girls in the palace.
He had to say something, he felt he should, but words escaped him. Right as he was about to say a greeting she raised her hand and a bright red flash went right before his eyes.
"Holy shit," was all he could think
That's all for now, I hope you like it :) plz review