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Chapter: 2
Arrival of the Replicas
Lloyd and Colette came from Dirk's House and were flying to Altamira to find Presea and Regal. Colette was worried about what was going to happen with the world if the Devil's Arms remained in their hands. What if they already know we're trying to stop them somehow? We would be in danger and we'd die. I would be devastated if I lost Lloyd.
"Colette? Are you okay?" Lloyd asked concerned. Colette merely said that she's fine. She then thought positive and back to her optimistic nature and buried her cynical thoughts.
They landed near the resort and went inside, but surprisingly, no one was there. Not a single person. It was a ghost town. "Where is everybody?" Lloyd wondered. They both headed down the elevator and talked to the man who controlled the boat-like train.
"Excuse me; do you know where everyone is?" Colette asked.
"Everyone's hiding in the amusement park or somewhere inside the hotel. If you're trying to hide, go to one of the two places." The man informed.
"Hiding from what?" Lloyd confusedly asked.
"For some odd reason, some clones of President Regal and Presea are attacking the real ones near Alicia's grave. There's also something involving a devil's leg or something."
"Devil's Arm. Take us there." Lloyd demanded.
"Are your out of your mind? It's dangerous out there. If I take you there, you'll be killed. You can't go there."
"You have to! We know these two and we can help those two!" Colette exclaimed.
The man just gave up and agreed to give them a ride to where the President's office is. Lloyd and Colette took off on the boat and rapidly rushed to the elevator and to Alicia's grave where they found Regal and Presea battling their clones. Plus, Regal and his clone were wearing the President's outfit (clone has handcuffs) and clone Presea was wearing her noble outfit.
Lloyd shouted to Regal and Presea they arrived. "Lloyd, Colette! What are you doing here?" Regal asked.
"We can't explain now! What's going on?" Colette exclaimed.
"We don't know! Please help us first!" Presea shouted.
They ran up to the clones so they can start fighting them. Lloyd used a Sword Rain Alpha on "Regal" and followed with a Rising Falcon. But "Presea" protected him using a Mass Devastation doing only half damage.
"Holy rings, I beg of thee to reveal the glory. Angel Feathers!" Pink angel feathers and her chakrams targeted toward the clones.
Presea used a Mass Devastation on "Presea" and followed with Eternal Damnation on "Regal." "Regal" quickly countered with a Swallow Dance and an Eagle Dive. Regal used a Heaven's Charge to counter that. Lloyd then used a Lightning Thrust with a Lightning Tiger. Regal healed Presea with a healer.
"Thy faithful servant, asketh for thy blessing, honor us with thy splender of thy song. Holy Song!" A light on the ground stretched out increasing everyone's attack and defense and healed everyone a little.
"Finality Punishment!" "Presea" launched at Lloyd.
"Gah!"
"Presea" then performed Overdrive (attack to get in Overlimit in Tales of the Abyss). She ran up to Lloyd, Regal, and Presea and performed the Hien Messhoujin hi-ougi.
"Turn into dust! This is… the end! Hien Messhoujin!" She slammed her axe on them and jumped in the air and jumped back down and the flame bursts.
"Time will never return, which is nature's fate."
Regal healed Presea with a Chi Healer. Colette used a Pow Hammer on them and cast a spell.
"Thy faithful servant asketh for thy blessing, honor us with a special….oops." Nothing happened. "I messed up. What?" She performed her Holy Judgment which healed the party and damaged the clones with the blinding light.
"Regal" went into Overdrive. "Swallow Dance, Eagle Rage, Wolverine! Won't get away! Take this! Garen Zesshugeki" "Regal" performed a bunch of kicks surrounded by an aura and shone in the air. "This is it! Regret it" He then jumped down for one blow.
"Aah!" everyone shouted.
Lloyd lost much energy but had enough to perform his special move. He ran up to them. A blue light appeared and circled the clones and jumped in the air with the Eternal Sword shining. "Hah! I'll show you!" Lloyd jumped and the rainbow light circles everyone like a whirlwind. "Divine Justice! Falcon's Crest!"
The clones disintegrated and a dark shadow disappeared and followed a path and left two jewels. Colette picked them up.
"Are you guys okay?" Lloyd asked.
"We're fine." Presea said.
"What happened?"
"We're not sure. We were just working in Regal's office and suddenly those clones appeared and were trying to destroy us."
"I think it has to do with the Devil's Arms. They also left two jewels." Colette said.
"What are you talking about?" Regal asked. Lloyd and Colette explained everything about the missing Devil's Arms and seeing Kratos and such. "I see. So the world is in danger again."
"We need everyone's help in order to beat this." Lloyd explained
Presea noticed the design on the two jewels Colette picked up. One jewel had a design of the Apocalypse and the other had a design of the Diablos. "Colette, about those jewels you found, the designs look the Devil's Arm that we previously had in our possession."
"Yeah, you're right. I wonder what these jewels are for."
George, Regal's assistant rushed to see if he was fine. Regal replied everyone was okay. "Master Regal, it would be best if you rested before you go." Everyone agreed with him to rest. "Let's go."
"I wonder what these jewels are for." Colette wondered curiously.
In a mysterious world, there's an oracle or prophecy about one woman. The woman will eventually have the ability to destroy all foes with songs. The spirit of a Martel's friend stepped on the oracle. "The light of the songs will destroy all darkness. May time be in favor of this corrupted world."
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