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Chapter: 3
Search for the Sages
Ugh, Gosh. It's really tiring having to go place to place to find Zelos around the world. Why would Zelos not be in Meltokio? Usually, he stays there just to flirt with the girls there and his groupies that follow him everywhere. If he's not there, then he's probably with Sheena flirting with her assuming he knows where she is.
"Lloyd, should we just look for Genis and Raine and look for Zelos last? I'm exhausted from trying to find just Zelos?" Colette suggested. How many girls actually know and love Zelos? Maybe that was an insipid question. He flirts with practically every single girl he sees. It's kind of creepy that he also hits on the old and elderly.
"Colette's right. The chance of finding Zelos at this rate is 15. We would have more success if we decided to find Genis and Raine currently instead of Zelos now." Presea said.
Genis and Raine could be anywhere as they're trying to make the world accept half-elves and trying to find Virginia. Suddenly, a thought struck into Regal's mind like lightning. "Everyone, I was thinking. What if Genis and Raine are in Exire trying to see if Virginia is back or such? They might be there or we could find somewhere that knows there whereabouts. We don't have any other leads."
"True. Let's give it a shot!" Lloyd exclaimed. Everyone headed to the floating city of Exire. They had to put their Rheiards on the first platform. This time everyone saw them but they weren't stared at since humans rarely come there. The group went inside Virginia's house and only found a half-elven man.
"Excuse me. Do you anything about where two half-elves are? They're names are Genis and Raine and they're the children of Virginia." Colette explained.
"Uh, yes. They headed toward the Otherworldly Gate to see if Virginia was there. I just hope if they do find her, things won't be so maddening." The man said.
"Thanks."
Everyone headed back on their Rheairds and headed toward the Otherworldly Gate. Presea was thinking about something and thought it might make sense. "Guys, remember last time when we saw Virginia and the man said she disappeared? And the elder said that after Kloitz died, Virginia began to lose her mind? Maybe in her mind, she thought someone was chasing her and went to the gate. We can probably find Virginia there."
"You're right. Genis and Raine would probably be there, too." Regal said. It's a pretty logical explanation.
They planted their Rheairds on the ground and saw Genis and Raine talking to Virginia. The only thing odd is that Virginia was acting normal and thought Genis and Raine were her children, not the dolls.
"Genis! Raine!" Colette shouted.
Genis and Raine turned around and saw everyone and were mildly surprised. But Genis was wondering how they found them, wondering if they went to Exire first to find them….or if it was just pure dumb luck. In that case, it would be ironic.
"Lloyd, Colette! You're all here!" Genis exclaimed.
"Genis, Raine, who are these people?" Virginia asked.
"Everyone, did Virginia make a full recovery?" Lloyd asked.
Presea looked at her closely and found a physical flaw in Virginia, since she luckily has keen eyes. "That's not Virginia." Lloyd and Colette seemed pretty dumbfounded as how that was possible.
"Presea, what are you talking about?"
"Look at Virginia's left eye. There's a small arch under there and there's an arch above her right eye. She never had anything like that when we saw her before. She's an impostor."
How in the world did she find out? No matter, my goal will soon be accomplished. "Impressive, but not enough." Suddenly, everyone looked at her astonished. The so-called Virginia body split into half and the two halves changed their body structures. The first half turned into a Raine clone in her maiden clothes. The second half was a Genis clone in his noble costume.
"How did you do that?" Lloyd questioned as if he'd been struck by a thunderbolt. Is that even possible?
"It is nothing that you should be concerned with. This is just a gift the Replicantis gives to certain people. Even though the Replicantis has to perfect its cloning power." The Raine clone said.
"The Replicantis? What are you talking about?" Raine said as if she was demanding an answer. Is that a machine that creates replicas of people almost perfectly? Is that a monster? What's the necessity of that?
"It is not of your concern, pathetic idiots. You'll never survive to remember everything. You'll never survive our power. Now that you know all this, we have to kill you to avoid punishment from Nebilim." The Genis clone declared.
"For that to happen…" Lloyd unleashed his swords. "You'll have to get through us." Lloyd ran up to the Raine clone and slashes his swords at her two times while she was casting and used a Sword Rain, unleashing multiple thrusts into her. However, she still finished her spell.
"Holy Lance!" A rainbow glyph was carved under Lloyd and three shining swords targeted the glyph also targeting Lloyd. But since everyone was busy with the Raine clone, everyone forgot about the Genis clone.
"Eruption!" A small volcano appeared under Regal and Presea and the volcano erupted red hot lava three times almost burning them. Presea then ran up to the Genis clone and slammed her ax three times and unleashed a Mass Devastation, slamming her ax which caused the rocks to also hit him and she unleashed a Finality Punishment, spiraling her ax while the final spiral sent him flying. Regal then kicked the Raine clone three times.
"Judgment!" Beams of light came raining upon the heavens. The beams only hit the Raine clone one time. The real Raine finished her spell.
"Ray!" A ball of light shined at the top and unleashed three illuminating beams of light going off in different directions. Genis then finished his spell.
"Gravity Well!" An shadowy earth well unleashed some lightning inside the well and exploded and erupted which caused the clones to slow down their running speed. Lloyd ran up to the clones and he was thrusting his sword five times, but missed after the fourth time. The Raine clone teleported behind Lloyd and stabbed her staff into his body.
"Face it! Defeat is inevitable. We're going to send you to hell!"
Colette ran up behind the Raine clone and struck her chakrams twice and spun her chakrams multiple times and unleashed a toy hammer, "Whirlwind Rush! Pow Hammer!" However, the Raine clone used her Overlimit charge and knocked back Colette sending another Pow Hammer by accident. That gave her enough time to unleash her spell.
A rainbow glyph started to surround the battlefield, "Life be thy sustenance and destroy the enemy…Sacred Light!" The glyph exploded knocking everyone back. And if that wasn't enough, the Genis clone used his Overlimit charge to use his spell.
Three turquoise glyphs and a middle glyph appeared and lightning strikes targeted the middle circle and a massive sword struck the circle and exploded, "Indignation Judgment!" Everyone collapsed and fell down and hardly any energy to get up, except for Raine. She used her Overlimit charge and she used her powerful spell.
"Dancing spirits in thy sky, form a chorus to destroy evil, Fairy's Circle." Four fairies are spinning around forming a sea green Revitalize glyph, "Gods of the heavens, grant us your protection, and punish all who oppose us!" The glyph started to erupt substantially healing her allies and hurting the clones. After that, the clones started to disintegrate and they were destroyed leaving behind two more jewels. One had the design of the Heart of Chaos and the other was the Disaster. "Everyone, are you all right?"
"We're all fine." Colette explained while rubbing her head.
"What're you guys doing here?" Genis asked.
Everyone explained everything again to them about having to get back the whole group and going to a floating city to see Kratos about the Devil's Arms and Nebilim.
"Did Kratos tell something else more specific?" asked Genis.
"Nope. That's pretty much it." Lloyd then noticed the jewels on the ground. "Hey, these are the jewels that we got from the Regal and Presea clones." Lloyd picked them up and noticed the designs.
"Wow. That one looks like Raine's Heart of Chaos and my Disaster." Genis explained.
"Well, we should leave to find Zelos and Sheena, which ever is easier. By the way, does anyone know what these jewels actually do?" Colette asked.
"It appears we won't know its function until later." Presea said.
The woman at the oracle in the mysterious world shone her hand at the circle filling two out of the nine spaces in the circle glowing turquoise and filled four out of nine in total. The woman was Martel's close friend and had long green hair and blue eyes and perfect skin and a long beautiful dress similar to Martel's.
Mene se kraunu trese
Kraunu se trenu na menuse
Please review. I was rushing here to get all the characters fast and get on with the story. Oh, and in case you're wondering, the gibberish is the song that Tear from Tales of the Abyss sings while chanting Nightmare and Force Field. I couldn't really hear her clearly so I was guessing at what she was singing.