Well I'm up to 22 so that's good enough for me. Kinda dissappointed but I love the reveiws I got. Oh yeah poxmaker I don't have a problem with Sora's mom she just had to be a bitch for it to work into the story. The guy is just some random guy I made up. If you remeber Sora's mom was never home in my story so I guess she was with that guy but who knows. I don't.

Evil: Summer time again. ...So dull.

Kayla: Yeah and lonly ah at last only 7 more days

Tera: Till what

Kayla: Till I turn 15

Rain: Good for you Kay

Kayla: Smiles I'm making all my friends come over

Riku, Rain, and Rinzu: hug Kayla knocking her over

Kayla: Loved

Evil: Turns head to mushy

Kayla: Yea well anyway time to say things I don't want to say so here it goes

Idon'townhotguysnomatterhowmuchIwanttoandKairineedstobeshotintheheadbyabazooka.MeownsongsandallcharactersthatIspeaktoinANnotes. If you don't understand what I said then it really doesn't matter. Oh yeah the song lyrics are in the story litteraly.

Evil:On with the story

My thoughts 8...8 Lyrics 0...0

Riku's thoughts /.../

Sora's thoughts ;...;

Don't Hold Me Back

Wakka pulled Riku into the room, "Sora your awake already?" Sora smiled," It's hard to keep me down you know that." Wakka looked at Riku then to Sora, "Sora, you mom told Riku to give you a message that I'm sure you'll find funny." Sora looked at Riku, "Really now what could it be?" Riku looked into crimson eyes and for a second was depressed and missed the blue eyes that he once had. "Riku, You ok?" Riku nodded, "Sorry just thought of something else. Well your mom says you need to just die and get it over with and that your an ungrateful faggot." Riku bowed his head to look at his feet. "I have to go now Sora. My mom is probly mad by now." His voice seemed to be distant. Sora looked at him and nodded. "Ok Riku." Riku turned to leave the room before taking a deep breath. He ran back to Sora and kissed him quickly. Sora slid the rose into his hand before Riku turned and ran out. "He misses you." Wakka looked at Sora. Sora bowed his head. "I know. I know. I have to tell him." A slap filled the room. Selphie's hand was at Sora's cheek." I'm sorry master but you can't tell him. If you do she'll win." Sora felt a tear fall. "But he's in pain and it's all my fault. I can't stand to see him hurt." Wakka sighed," Master it isn't your fault. None of it was your fault." "Stop it. It was my fault if I would have listen the first time. If I would have just left him alone and married her he would have been safe. He's suffered and now he's going to get hurt and I don't want that. I can't stand it anymore." Sora jumped up from the bed before running out.

"MASTER" The three shouted at the retreating back. Sora ran until it became hard to breath. Tears fell down his face and mixed with the sweat that started to form. "Sora?" Sora jumped when his name was said. "Riku." Riku looked at him from the tree he was on. "Sora I'm sorry about eariler. In fact I'm sorry about everything." Riku jumped from the tree before pulling Sora in a tight embrace. "Riku, this is all my fault. I can't let it go on." Sora looked at the boy tears still falling. Riku wiped the tears away before claiming a kiss. Sora wrapped his arms around the smaller boy. "I love you Sora. Only you. Forever I promise." Sora nodded, "I know. This isn't the first time you've told me that. And I hope it's not the last." Riku nodded," I hope this isn't the end. She can't have you. I don't want anyone else to have you. But I have this feeling that there is only more heartbreak to come before we can be together without her." Sora nodded." We'll make it. We've waited to long for it to end when we're so close. Just hold on a little while longer. I know it hurts but please just a little bit longer and it'll be all over. I promise." Riku smiled slightly,"For you I'll wait forever Sora." He placed a kiss on his lover's lips before falling into a light sleep. Sora stroked Riku's hair softly before singing to him.

0"We all knew it would come. But I never knew it would hurt. I knew you'd screw up. You always do. Why can't I break free and run away run away run away. You can't see me. So just let me be. Break my chains and let me go. Don't hold me back." 0 Sora's thoughts kept switching back to past memories of him and Riku. Kila walked into the garden where Rinzu and Siran where sitting. "Good morning my Lord. And who is this?" She looked at Rinzu. Siran put his arm around Rinzu's waist. "He's someone that means everything to me. Now if you don't mind go away." Later that night Siran walked into the garden where Kila had Rinzu pinned down kissing him. 0 " Haven't I suffered enough. When all I wanted was you. Now I just want to run. But I can't move."0 Siran pushed Kila off of Rinzu who was crying in pain. "Siran!" the boy jumped and wrapped his arms around Siran. "I'm sorry. I'm sorry." Siran ran his hand through the boy's hair. "It's ok. Calm down it'll be ok." Kila walked away smiling,"No it won't. Soon you'll be alone." She laughed as she walked into the castle. The queen smiled as the girl walked in. "So you found a way to get rid of the pest?" Kila smiled. "Of course. He's a servent so he's not that strong. Give him a week." Siran covered his mouth to keep quiet. ;A week.; He ran back outside crying. 0"Now look what you did. Broke my wings and left me for dead. Just let me free. Don't hold me back." 0

Rinzu saw his lover flee from the castle and he followed. His chest felt heavy as he caught up. "Siran? What's wrong?" He wiped a tear from the older boy's face. Siran covered Rinzu's hand with his own. "I don't want to lose you. I can't lose you." More tears fell. "What do you mean lose me?" Siran took a breath. "In a week I'll lose you. That's what they said. Kila is a witch. I've seen the spell books in her room. Tell me love how are you feeling?" Rinzu looked at him. "I'm feeling a little sick. My chest hurts and it's kinda hard to breath." Rinzu felt his own tears start. /I'm going to die. But I don't want to leave him alone, I can't die please God no./ Siran pulled Rinzu into his arms. "Your seventh birthday is tommorow isn't it?" Rinzu nodded. "Tommorow meet me here and we'll do something special for your birthday. I promise." Rinzu nodded and with a kiss they parted. 0"I'm going over the edge. Once I hit the ground you'll be gone. death is my savior you are my hell. So why is Hell so tempting?" 0 The next day passed quickly and that night Rinzu ran to meet Siran who was there waiting for him. They kissed before Siran handed Rinzu a small white rose."Rinzu, before I lose you I want a piece of you to be with me always." Rinzu smiled sweetly before placing a kiss on the older boy's lips. "Anything for us to be together even after death." /I don't want to go but do I have a choice/ Siran smiled and pulles the boy close. "I'll make you mine forever." He kissed Rinzu's neck before biting gently at his throat.

They ran to a old stable that had been aboandoned for years. Siran pulled the rags that Rinzu was forced to wear off. He admired the pale flesh of his young lover. He ran his hands over Rinzu's bare chest causing said boy to shiver in anticipation. Siran took his time licking down Rinzu's body stopping at his nipples. He licked and sucked and did the same to the other until both were peaks. Rinzu moaned as Siran removed his pants. Siran bit into Rinzu's shoulder as he removed his own clothes. The night seemed to stop as the two boy's made love. Rinzu and Siran moaned each other's name as they went over the edge for the first time. Siran fell next to his lover as Rinzu laid his head down on his chest. "I love you." Rinzu smiled" I love you to." By the end of the week Siran was kneeling beside Rinzu. Rinzu smiled,"I guess this goodbye." Siran smiled despite the tears. "Only for a little while. One day we'll be together I promise you." Rinzu's smile faded as his body became weaker. "Don't cry you knew that it would happen. When you get lonly just think about me." His breathing became more shallow."Goodbye my prince. Till next time can I have just one more kiss?" Siran nodded and kissed the boy softly. Rinzu smiled in his mind before the world went black. Siran looked at his lover before the tears took him. "I'll wait for you. I promise." 0 Now your gone. Break my chains. Break my wings. Falling over the edge. Don't hold me back.0

Sora kissed Riku's forehead before a tear fell onto his lover's face. Riku's eyes opened slightly. "Sora?" Sora smiled and pulled his lover closer. "I love you. Please don't go. Not again." Tears came forcefully now as Sora buried his head in Riku's shoulder. "I won't die this time. You just have to be strong Sora even if I'm not. Please don't give up no matter what." Sora nodded unable to speak. The night dragged on and the sun met the two boys curled up together asleep. Tidus was the first to find them. "Riku, Sora wake up you guys." Sora mummbled something and Riku punched out at Tidus. Tidus fell back, "You'd almost think everything was back to normal." Selphie sat next to Tidus, "Everything will go back to normal just give it time. First Kairi's needs to go. Preferably on a one way track to Hell." Tidus looked at Selphie, "You've never cursed before." Selphie smiled, "I've never been more mad at Kairi before either." Wakka finally showed up. "What's so funny now you two?" The two smaller lovers laid a head on each of Wakka's shoulders. "We're just dreaming of a day when Kairi is no longer a problem." Wakka nodded, "That'll be the best day of their lives." He pointed to Riku and Sora.

Riku rolled over on top of Sora causeing Sora to open his eyes. Riku snuggled into Sora's chest lovingly. Sora ran a hand through his lover's hair. "I love you." "mummble you too." Sora laughed. "I can't understand you." Riku lifted his head" I said I love you two." He tackled the taller boy and placed a passion filled kiss on his lover's lips. Sora ran a hand up Riku's shirt causeing said boy to moan. "Get a room you two!" Wakka's voice drew them out of their little dream.Sora flipped Wakka off before standing. He held his hand out which Riku took. "I'm gonna kill you Wakka!" Riku ran up to where Wakka was. Wakka stood and ran the other way ,"That's if you can catch me ya!" "Selphie, Tidus help me catch him please?" The two nodded and got up to chase their lover. "Trators!" Wakka yelled as he was tackled to the ground. Sora watched as the four fought their battle.;How long Kairi. How long before you try to break this happiness that I've found? It won't last long Sora. I will make you mine.; Sora smirked Kairi still didn't know about him and still didn't know that he could read her thoughts. "Kairi, You won't win not when I have so much at stake. I can't lose this one chance I have to be happy. If I do then I've broken every promise I've ever made to him and I won't do that." Sora smiled as Selphie, Tidus, and Riku jumped on Wakka. Wakka screamed when he went down laughing the whole time. Sora smiled before turning away walking off into the fog that had begun to settle. A wilted white rose fell from the tree Riku had sat in the night before. The pedels falling from the stem as the rose fell leaving nothing but a bare stem.

Kayla: So close to my birthday. But today I have to send my sympathy out to two of my friends who mom died today. You guys are in my prayers.

Evil: poor Chris and Lauren. I hope they're ok

Rain: I thought you didn't have a heart unless it came to DK and your baby Aden.

Evil: I have a lot of sympathy

Riku: Lay of Rain Evil's really is nice.

Evil: Thank you

Rain: Whatever I value my life so I'm gonna shut up before I piss the docter off.

Riku and Rinzu: BBTNT