One of the two people who reviewed told me this:
"My favorite part about the second chapter is how Flash and the girl sell videos for 5 bucks! That is so evil! This story reminds me of some of the Vigilante/Shining Knight fics that a few authors wrote. Even though I don't entirely agree with the whole Vig and Knight together thing, I could imagine the story having Shining Knight and Vig in it. You should try reading Happily Ever After. It is hilarious! I didn't write it though."
Spelling is corrected by-the-by, and I decided I'd just let everyone know the girl was me. I'm 15 and have every natural color…naturally…I like it but people keep asking how I get it died like that because my roots are brown then the strands go to whatever color. The girl in the previous chapter was my own creation Mikanna, or just Mi, who controls/creates water and fire. She's a clone too, but shhh, she doesn't know yet.
Know what yet? (Mikanna walks up from nowhere)
Ohhh…nothing… (I do a shifty eye motion and plays with my hands behind my back)
Come on Katie, tell me! (Mikanna gives me a pathetic look)
No… (I fake my stubbornness makes me not say it, but really it's my lack of nerves)
Why not? (Mikanna gives a more pathetic, resigned look)
It's a surprise? (I say shrugging hopelessly. Mikanna rolls her eyes and walks off) Boy that was close.
Anyways, stay tuned in for a sneak peek at "Junior League: The Initiations" Which will be coming in as soon as August 7th. Please read and review some of my other...uncompleted work, and all flames will be used for s'mores!
Besides, "Say something nice or nothing at all. If you do not heed this warning you'll get kicked upside your head FOOL!" I always say!