This is my first Fire Emblem story so please read and review and tell me if i should continue and whatnot.
On the outskirts of Gallia there lived a boy with his family. His father and a younger brother and sister. His father was the leader of a mercenary band he fought off bandits in the villages surrounding Gallia. One day would be a day the poor boy would never forget.
The boy was fishing at a nearby lake with a friend when all of the sudden loud screams were heard coming from his village. The boy's friend Ranulf said he would go see what was happening and told the boy to stay there. When Ranulf left the boy chose to go see what was happening so he ran to his house. He found his home in flames and he franticly searched for his family but they were nowhere in sight. The boy thought they were dead and broke into tears. One of the bandits saw the boy and wondered if he had any valuables on him. He went up and turned the boy around " give me all ur goods little boy." The boy had nothing on him so ha tried to make a break for it. The bandit got angry and started to chase after the boy. The boy found a spear on the ground and picked it up to try to defend himself but to no avail. The bandit struck the boy hard across his right eye which would cause the boy to lose eyesight in the eye. The boy was brought to his knees while the bandit prepared for the finishing blow when a loud roar was heard. The bandit looked around and saw a huge lion come at him and he screamed like a girl and ran for his life. The boy had passed out from the loss of blood in his face. The lion looked at the boy and changed into a human. Prince Chaneigis picked the small boy up and ordered the rest of his men to go back to Gallia.
From that day forward the boy's life would drastically change. He was raised by the prince as if he was his son. The boy wore an eye patch over his right eye and he would learn the ways of the lance by teaching himself. As the boy grew older he got better at the weapon and would help his friend Ranulf in fighting off bandits that raided villages. Chanegis now king was proud of the boy and how far he has come since that fateful day when he lost his family. He always kept a close watch on the boy and when the boy came to the age of 16 he gave him brand new armor with the Gallian symbol on the breastplate. The boy loved how his life turned out he only wished he had been strong enough to save his family so everyday he trained with his lance so that one day he could be as strong as his father Greil once was. Now the boy was 19 and the next day would change his life forever.
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