AN: Hello, this is my first Loki fan fiction. The story is kind of based off a French movie, called "Love Me If You Dare". It's about two lovers who dare each other to do crazy things.(The revised chapter!)

I did not own Matantei Loki Ragnarok, this is just a fan fiction, written by a crazed fan.

Note-This not a new chapter, but rather a revised one. I asked my sister(She spell checks my storys and looks for grammer problems.) if she thought this one was better, and she said the orignal was better. But, personally, I like this one better so I posted it. The first and second chapter is done, I'm just waiting a couple days to post them. I have already started chapter three. Any ways, I apologize for not updating. If you review, tell me if you like the orignal or the revised better.


Yamino grinned. He took out his brand new, fresh from the mail, mop out of it's box. To celebrate, he was going to clean out the cleaning supply closet. Just as he was taking all the items out, he paused. He heard a knock on the front door.

Now who could that be, he though. He glanced at the clock. It was a monday, and around the time that Mayura would be getting out of school.
Yamino laid down the mop, and walked to the door and opened it.

Sure enough, standing there was the ruby eyed, pink haired mystery-loving high schooler, Mayura.
In her hands was a decorative metal can, with a painting of a merry-go-round on it. Yamino's curious eyes scanned the can, wondering what it could be. "I'll go and make some tea." He announced in his kind voice.
Mayura smiled at him, and walked through the door, towards Loki's study.
Yamino had waited until the girl had walked through the door, then pulled it closed. He walked off into the kitchen.

Loki sat down his book. "3,2,1". The chibi God sighed.
"Good afternoon, Loki-kun! Are there any new cases?" Mayura asked in her genki voice.
Fenrir opened one eye lazily, and closed it.

Loki winced. "No new cases today, Mayura."
Mayura looked crestfallen, but then smiled brightly.
Loki stared at the previously described metal can curiously. "Mayura, what is that?" He asked.
Mayura grinned. "Isn't it mysterious?" She practically skipped over to his desk, and sat the object down. "I found in my dad's closet, with a note."
"Does your dad know that you have it?" Loki asked.
"Um... no." She awnsered, looking a little sheepish. "But it's mysterious isn't it?" Mayura asked.
Loki sighed.
"Think what it could have been used for! Maybe it stores spirits, another dimension, magical powder..."
Loki cut her rambling off. "You said it came with a note, what did it say?"
"Oh, I haven't read it yet."
Loki sweat dropped."Why?"
"I was too busy thinking about the mysteries this is related to!" She exclaimed happily.
"Ah, then why don't you read it now?"
"K." Mayura sat her book bag on Loki's desk, and unzipped a small pocket. She took a slightly yellowed, folded paper out. She unfolded it, and smoothed it out on the desk. Her crimson eyes quickly read over the writing, and passed it to Loki.
Loki read it as well. "So, it's a game?"

"Seems like it". Mayura said, a little deflated after she found out that the object wasn't linked to anything mysterious.
At that moment, Loki's son walked in, carrying a tray with two cups of tea.

"Thank you, Yamino-san." Mayura said gratefully, taking a sip of the tea.
"Yes, thank you, Yamino-kun." Loki said as he took a cup as well.
"Well, Loki-sama,if you don't need anything else, I'm going to clean out the supply closet."

Loki gave his son a amused look. "Okay".
Yamino turned and left the room.
"Well then",Loki said as he picked up the metal can,"game or not?"
Mayura looked surprised, but said, "Game".


AN/If you haven't noticed, I rewrote the first chapter. Hopefully it's better now. Well, please review. Also, what do you think Mayura should dare Loki?(I might use it in the story.)

(This is what the note said, if you don't remember from the first..)

One person may dare the other person, if the dared person completes the dare, they get the tin.

To dare a person, you must say "Game or not". If the person wants to do the dare, they say "game".

You can dare the person anything, it's up to the person if they decide to do it."