Hey guys, I'm back again. The feedback I got was great. I just love it when people help me. And people answered my question. It was great. And to Rain Alchemist. I would like for you to be my beta reader but….. I have no idea how that works.TT, just tell me and we can do it for the rest of the chapters. I would like to thank my reviewers and since your feedback was so good, I think I'll try to pump 2000 words in this one and give reader response. I also want to thank my regulars.( My double reviewers) Review and enjoy.
Another day of training.
Naruto had awoken to the sound of screams going through the village."(Yawn), what's going on." Naruto asked groggily, getting up to see what all the ruckus was about. He walked over to his window and he saw ANBU jumping from building to building." I think it's coming from the Uchiha Estates." One of the ANBU guards called out to his partner." I wonder what's going on sensei?" Naruto questioned his teacher." Hmph, just stay sharp." The Kyuubi answered. Naruto went into the kitchen and boiled up some ramen. When it was ready about 10 minutes later, he felt a rush of energy coming towards him." What the heck is that?" Naruto creamed running towards the window. Naruto froze as a young man passed in front of him. Time seemed to stop as their eyes met and Naruto stared at his weird shaped pupils. Time sped up again, and the young man was on his way." Who was that?" Naruto asked aloud."Hmmm." The Kyuubi wondered as his mind thought of the situation." That was no regular Sharigan." The Kyuubi thought to himself, but stored that thought in the back of his mind." Don't worry about it kit, we got training to do." The Kyuubi told his student. Naruto gobbled up his ramen and ran to his training ground.
" Alright sensei, what's going on today?" Naruto asked his sensei." Today I'm going to add some weights to your daily exercise." The Kyuubi answered back at him. Naruto face scrunched up into a ball as he thought." B-but I don't have any weights or the money to buy them." Naruto told the Kyuubi." Hey, do you forget who you're dealing with here." The Kyuubi answered and Naruto body began to feel numb… then heavy… very heavy……THUD…." W-What the hell!" Naruto said through clenched teeth as he tried to push his body off the ground, he felt like a cement block." This my student, is 15 pounds worth of spirit weights." The Kyuubi answered with a grin on his face. Naruto's mouth opened wide. How could THIS be 15 pounds, Kyuubi heard his thought and answered them." 10 spirit pounds is about….. 100 pounds your human measurements." The Kyuubi informed his crushed students. Naruto used all his strength to pus his body of the floor and onto his back. He clenched his teeth and sat on his hands." That's the spirit kit." The Kyuubi encouraged his student. Naruto moved to his knees and slowly stood up before he could stand straight up." I-I did it." Naruto whispered with pride in his voice." Good job kit….. Now run 10 laps around Kohona."" Awww Sh-"
Naruto ignored the hateful glares of the villagers as he ran threw Kohona. At first it was curiosity for them, as the ninja kept falling into the ground face first, getting up, and running more. Then he would return, and their would be less tripping and a more determined face. And this was angering the villagers. On Narutos 4th trip around a villager stopped him." Hey demon, what are you doing running around here. This is a no demon zone." The man said and three of his buddies began to laugh as they approached him." Sensei, what do I do?" Naruto asked, but the Kyuubi did not answer. The first one punched him in the gut and knocked the wind out of Naruto."Omph." Naruto collapsed to the ground and went into the fetal position." KIT, GET UP RIGHT NOW!" The Kyuubi screamed. Naruto jumped into the air knocking one of them on the ground."S-sorry." Naruto muttered, and he turned tailed and ran. He continued to run until he collapsed from exhaustion."…. Kit, are you okay?" The Kyuubi asked, unsure of what to say. Naruto remained on the ground for awhile until he jumped up and made some hand signs." DEMON FOX JUTSU, SOUL BLADE!" Naruto said and the Kyuubi smirked at the color. It was a bright gold. Determination." What do you think?" Naruto asked aloud and he started to run again.
" Alright kit, you can rest for awhile." The Kyuubi instructed as he watched his student doing pushups under a tree. Naruto landed on his back and took a deep breathe." So sensei, what am I going to learn next?" Naruto asked." Well kit, I think I'm going to add another demon jutsu to your list. Stand up." The Kyuubi commanded and Naruto stood up stumbling, still not quiet used to the weights." Alright, the name of this jutsu is called Demon Shadow jutsu." The Kyuubi told his student." Demon Shadow, how does that work?" Naruto asked excitement running through his eyes." Well, you know how those creeps beat you up? Well this technique allows you to hide in the shadows." The Kyuubi explained." Hide in the shadows, you mean I can only do it when there is a shadow? Naruto asked." Just do it and find out." The Kyuubi instructed as he showed Naruto the hand signs in his head."…… DEMON FOX JUTSU, DEMON SHADOW!" Naruto screamed and black smoke began to climb his body." W-what the hell is going on?" Naruto asked aloud. The smoke covered him completely and he looked at his body.
" So…. What does it do again?" Naruto asked his sensei." You see that shadow the tree is making?" Kyuubi asked with a smirk on his face." Yea." Naruto replied." Walk to it." The Kyuubi commanded, and Naruto slowly walked toward the shadow. He knelt down to one knee and touched it." WHAT THE HELL!" Naruto screamed as his hand went through the shadow. Naruto got a little braver and put his whole body." What the hell, I'm inside the shadow… and I can see other shadows too." Naruto said walking around the dark abyss." Go to another shadow kit." The Kyuubi told his student and naruto walked to one about 10 yards away from him." Jump." Naruto jumped in the air, and found his self on the other side of the plain. He could see his jacket at the other tree." Do you understand now?" The Kyuubi said." Heheheh." Naruto giggled out loud.
" Concentrate kit." The Kyuubi screamed as Naruto kept falling in the water." Well who the hell do you think I am, I'm not Jesus!" Naruto screamed at his teacher." Ummm, maybe we'll save this for another day. It's getting cold." The Kyuubi said and Naruto got out of the water shivering. The Kyuubi sighed and used his chakra to warm Naruto's body." Thanks." Naruto said finally warming up." Well although you did not get this lesson on the first try, we still made some good progress, you're not even thinking about those weight now." Kyuubi said." I was." Naruto said with a scowl remembering the pressure on his body. Naruto just sat there looking at the stars for a while when he struck a question." Hey Kyuubi?" Naruto asked." Yea kit?" Kyuubi answered back." Do you know if I will ever get to be Hokage?" Naruto asked." Don't know kit, not a fortune teller, but I can tell you that you are on the right track. This is when the Fourth started training anyway." The Kyuubi said." You mean the 4th Hokage, the guy who sealed you in my tummy." Naruto said with a laugh." What's so funny kit." The Kyuubi asked getting irritated." You're in my tummy." Naruto said lifting his shirt and poking his seal." Grrr, stop that!" The Kyuubi commanded." Hahaha, But it's funny." Naruto said as he continued poking the seal until he exhausted himself from laughter.
Naruto was walking home when he saw a girl walking down the opposite way." Excuse me?" The voice stooped Naruto in his tracks. He looked at the girl for a moment." Umm yea?" Naruto asked back." Ummm, I was just walking back from the Uchiha estates, and I kinda got lost, do you know where the main road is?" The little girl asked. Naruto looked around until he saw a small strip of road." You walk down that path and take a right, that should get you to the main road." Naruto said and he turned to walk away." Hey wait, I did not get to ask your name." The girl asked." Don't worry about it, I'm no one important." Naruto said and he began to walk away. The girl pushed back her pink hair and followed the boy's instruction. (A/N the decision has not been made yet.)
Naruto fell on his bed with a plop and grabbed a book to read." Hey Kyuubi, what's this jutsu?" Naruto asked pointing at the picture." That's one of the Hokage's special techniques, although only 1 of the Hokages have been able to do it." The Kyuubi said and Naruto stared at the jutsu." Whatever." Naruto said as he put that book down for another one. That last justu was just a blue ball, it looked pathetic. If he wanted to be Hokage, He needed bigger and better jutsu." Kit, even the most basic jutsu can get you out of a tight spot…. How about tomorrow we work on that jutsu." The Kyuubi said." Awww, but it looks so weak." Naruto complained." Hmph, don't judge a book by its cover kit." The Kyuubi said and Naruto shrugged it off." Hey what's this book?" Naruto asked and his face went red from what was inside." WHAT KIND OF PERVERTED BOOK IS THIS!"
Sin: Alright guys, that was another chapter. Its time to do some reader responses and such. I will update the vote list and the soul blade list…… Review and Chapters will come.
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