Sin: 50 REVIEWS! I'm so happy guys. I did not think my story would get this much feedback, but it did. I was going to release this chapter on Friday, but I'm going to push the date ahead, just for you guys. Also, thanks for all the help, I'll be doing reader responses again for my faithful reviewers…. TT I'm so happy. Review and enjoy.
A Lonely Soul
When the alarm clock rung in Naruto rooms he was already up getting dressed. " Up early kit." The Kyuubi said surprised my Narutos earliness." Well, this is the last day of training we have before the academy starts, and I wanted to get a full day of training in." Naruto told the Kyuubi while tying his boots up."…under…and over…. Done!" Naruto said aloud after completing his shoe tying. After the Kyuubi had insisted he should start eating healthy, he grabbed a muffin and walked out the door. He was walking to his usual training spot when a newspaper article caught his eye. It was on the front page. "ochiwa madsacar, 1 sussiver alrive." Naruto read before he swallowed the muffin." Uchiha massacre, 1 survivor alive, Uchiha Sasuke." Naruto said aloud. He knew who that guy was, He was always surrounded by the girls at the playground, not that he was ever allowed in though. " Come on kit, lets get going." The Kyuubi ordered and Naruto left thinking about the paper.
" Alright sensei, what kind of super cool jutsu am I going to learn today?" Naruto asked with a big smile on his face." Remember that jutsu you put down yesterday in that book of mine?" Kyuubi asked." You mean that wimpy little ball?" Naruto said back." That wimpy little ball is called the rasengan, and it crippled 2 of my legs when I fought the 4th Hokage." Kyuubi said remembering the pain in his legs." Wow, a jutsu that can hurt my sensei." Naruto thought in awe." Yep kit, and I'm going to teach it to you today." The Kyuubi said and Naruto stood up." Just tell me what to do sensei." Naruto said bracing himself for instructions." This technique takes extreme concentration, and I don't think your 5 year old brain can get it, but I have faith in your abilities." The Kyuubi said praising his student and Naruto smiled brightly." Alright kit, go into the water, we don't want to draw attention to ourselves." The Kyuubi said, and Naruto walked into the cold body of water." Alright kit put your hands in front of you." The Kyuubi instructed, and Naruto did so." Alright, put all your chakra and form it into a ball in front of you, and set it their." The Kyuubi said and Naruto formed a chakra ball in front of him." Now since this is your first time, I want you to spin the ball slowly, putting more chakra in it as you spin." The Kyuubi instructed. Naruto began to spin it slowly as possible, but the ball began to bend, and Naruto reacted by putting more chakra in it so he could balance it out. " Kit, your going to fast!" The Kyuubi said hastily as Narutos hands kept spinning the ball. Naruto did not know what to do with the ball in his hands so he jumped in the air.
" RASENGAN!" Naruto screamed, and he punched the water filled ground, and the water erupted around him."……." Their was a silence as Naruto watched the fish that were flung in the air fall back to the water."….. WOW, I DID ALL THAT!" Naruto said, and he began to run around in the water." Amazing, got it on his first try." The Kyuubi said, blocking his thoughts from Naruto. " Come on kit, lets take a break and go eat something." Naruto stopped dancing around and walked toward the village.
Now being hooked on muffins, Naruto walked inside the local bakery. " Ahhh." Naruto sighed out loud, as he took in the scent of the bread. The stares had begun again, but Naruto simply ignored them and went to the muffin aisle." Banana, blueberry." Naruto muttered as he went threw the different flavor." Hey demon, who said you can come in here?" A man asked, and Naruto shook his head, it was like déjà vu in this place." Sir, all I want is some muffins." Naruto said looking the man in the eye." Hey kit, this is the perfect time for me to teach you a new demon jutsu, soul eye jutsu." The Kyuubi said assessing the situation." How do I do that?" Naruto asked still looking at the man as he asked the Kyuubi in his head." Summon your chakra in your body and move it to your eyes." Naruto did so and he closed his eyes and swirled the chakra around in his head.
" Awwww, is the little demon going to cry!" The man said laughing, but stopped short when Naruto looked at his eyes. Naruto eyes had a gold glint to them, and were his pupil was, there was a tail of the nine tailed fox. Naruto opened his eyes and many senses hit him. He got dizzy, but recovered quickly. He looked at the man and saw a gray aura around him." He's afraid!" Naruto thought to himself. He walked toward the man and he scampered off." S-stay away demon." The man said and he ran off." W-why is he scared?" Naruto asked." Your eyes kit, the power of the soul eyes is a young power, but it gets stronger as you get stronger. Right now, you only have one tail of my nine, each one bringing a new power to you. As of now, you can only sense powerful emotions, that man had a strong sense of fear, which is why you could see his fear." The Kyuubi explained. Naruto simply picked up his muffins, went to the counter and paid for it, walked out of the bakery with one word to say."Cool."
Naruto was walking back to his training spot and sat down so he could finish his muffins in peace and quiet. He heard a shuffle and turned around to see a young girl spying on him behind a tree. He giggled to himself and activated his shadow fox jutsu and went into the shadows. He walked around till he found the shadow of the tree the girl was behind. The girl was lost in confusion. " He was just here, what happened to him?" The girl asked quietly." The girl shrieked when she felt a hand on her shoulder and fell on her butt." Oops, I'm sorry, I did not mean to scare you." Naruto said. The girl looked up in embarrassment at the boy she had been spying on. She was their earlier when he slammed his rasengan into the water and decided to follow him to see how he got so powerful.
" Why are you spying on me?" Naruto asked getting on one knee so he could look the girl in the eye. The girl backed away slowly." W-well, I-I was w-watching y-" Naruto could not take it anymore and began to walk away." Sheesh, she can't even talk straight." Naruto said going back to his tree and grabbing a muffin. He put some of his chakra in the muffin and went back and gave it to the girl." Here eat this." Naruto commanded, and the girl slowly took it and began to eat it. Naruto sat next to her and watched as she ate. He noticed her empty eyes and bluish hair. Naruto shook his head and stared forward.
The girl swallowed the food and smiled at Naruto." Thanks for the fo- Oh my!" The girl gasped. She wasn't stuttering." I guess my super muffin worked." Naruto said." You mean my super muffin kit." The Kyuubi said, glad that his idea worked." You should go home now, it's getting cold." Naruto said to the young girl, and she got up and dusted herself off. Naruto stood up and Hinata stared shyly at the ground." Thank you very much. My name is Hyuuga Hinata." She said doing a small bow, and Naruto began to walk away." Wait! Who are you?" Hinata asked." Don't worry about it, I'm no one important." Naruto said and he continued walking away, and Hinata watched till his figure disappeared.
Naruto was walking down the pier when he heard someone crying." I wonder who is crying?" Naruto asked his sensei. Naruto looked down to see a young boy crying while staring out at the sea." That's the last Uchiha kit." The Kyuubi answered back. Naruto stared at him for a while and began to walk down the pier and he sat next to the crying boy. The boy froze immediately but did not move away." What are you doing?" The boy asked crying." Just looking at the sea." Naruto said back and continued to look out at the sea. The boy was getting angry. Who did this boy think he was. He was the last Uchiha and if he wanted alone time, he could get it." Crying never helps." Naruto said and this brought the boy out of his trance." How do you know, you have no idea how it feels to be alone!" The boy said loudly." That's were you're wrong, my name is Uzimaki Naruto." The boy gasped at realizing who this boy was. His parents always talked about the boy. He suddenly felt sad. So sad, he did something against his nature." I'm sorry." The boy said looking away." Don't be sorry, be brave." Naruto told the boy." B-but it hurts." The boy responded back at him." I know, but do you think your family would want you crying all day, they would want you to get stronger." Naruto said looking at the boy.
" I guess you're right." The boy said and he stood up and wiped his tears away. The boy looked at Naruto and smiled." My name is Uchiha Sasuke, nice to meet you." Sasuke said and he put his hand out. Naruto looked shocked, but gladly shook his hand with a huge grin on his face. Naruto let go of his hands and started to walk away from the pier.
" Where are you going?" Sasuke asked." Home, first day of the academy is tomorrow." Naruto told him, and Sasuke smiled. He would see the boy tomorrow.
" Yawwwwnnnn, Kyuubi, what a day." Naruto said flopping on the bed." You really surprised me today kit, tomorrow you'll go to your first class and be introduced to a new level of education." The Kyuubi told him." You're still going to train me, right sensei?" Naruto asked." Of course kit, the academy goes to slow for your level of fighting." The Kyuubi answered, and Naruto smiled. He reached into the bag next to his body and frowned, he was out of muffins." Grrr." Naruto mumbled and rested his head back on the bed. He wondered how his first day was going to be and he smiled happily." Don't get too excited kit, tomorrow you'll be back in the real world, your world." Kyuubi said, and Naruto understood what he meant." Which is why I have to become Hokage!" Naruto said, and he got up and grabbed a book." That's the spirit kit." The Kyuubi said and read along side Naruto.
Sin: Another chapter completed folks. Tomorrow is the big day for Naruto, Will he be ready…. First The jutsu, then reader response. I'm so glad you guys are enjoying the story…..
Soul Blade Jutsu: Soul eye Jutsu:
Green: Confusion Gray: Fear
Red: Neutral
Purple: Understanding
Gold: Determination
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