WHAT DO U THINK U R?RAYxTHAT HELL OF A BITCHxKAI?ARE U MAD?HOW COULD U EVER THINK THAT HILARY(look at her, look at her attitude, SHE SUCKS!)AND KAI AND RAY!DO U THINK KAI AND RAY ARE MAD THAT THEY WILL FALL FOR THAT HAG?NO WAY.IN GENERAL- YOUR STORY AND U SUCK.KAIxHILARYxRAY?hn.NO FUCKING WAY.I AM ONE OF THE GREATEST FANS OF KAI AND RAY.HOW COULD U DO THIS? UR SICK.REALLY.
It's just an anime series... don't get all mad about it, i understand your opinion in pairings, but you don't have to critize me and my fiction, there are reasons why put charachters in a list, if you like ReiXKai then check for that pairing, but if you knew from the begginning that it was HilaryReiKai, then why read it? To put people down? Some readers like this pairing some don't, but keep your critising to your self please. I know i'm a bad writer, but it's the reviews i get for this fiction that make me keep on writing, but you? all you do i bet is just critise authors don't you? It was really nice receiving your reveiw, thanks alot, really appreciate it.
NOTE: For those that were confused on the previous chapter, theres a reason why i made the guys barge in on them. I'll start writing the next chapter soon, thanks guys