Hah, thanks to all my reviewers. Such as AlchemistM, and TempleMaster17. Yeah, thanks for pointing out the mess-ups. But unfortunately, I can't put in paragraph breaks for some reason, it doesn't allow it. I'll do them, and then, after I submit it into FF, it takes them out. Perplexing. And the whole "Every time someone new speaks" thing, I do that, but not always. I think it detracts, because if you keep starting the paragraph with dialogue, it gets monotonous. ( at least in my opinion. ) But I still abide by the rule… most of the time. And as for the quotation thing, that's a weird habit I got for some unknown reason. Well, thanks for the help. And by the way, I'm just going into the 9th grade, and I read it in 8th, so I guess I'm ahead of the schedule. Heh, anyway, enough post-story rambling. Story time! But first and foremost, Disclaimer Time, so I don't get sued!
DISCLAIMER: I do not own legend of Zelda, so don't sue me. And if you do, be sure to keep an eye out for my ninjas.
Link growled at this lizard like figure wearing a robe, and took a menacing step towards him, but the lizard merely flicked it's tongue, and its topaz eyes twinkled. Link rushed at him, and swung his sword at him, fury fueling his strength. But the blade sank through a shadowy after-image, and the lizard was behind him. "What the hell?" He asked himself, as he swung once more at him, and the lizard disappeared again, and was behind him. But link expected him to be behind him, and put up his shield, and the lizards claw slammed into it, causing his claw to bounce off, giving Link his chance to strike. "Gotcha!" He yelled, and he thrust his blade through his lizard's chest, and twisted it just to spite the lizard's speed. "He wiped the blood from the blade. "Wonder how Rue's faring with the Sheik in there…" He said, leaving the room
"Holy shit!" Rue yelled, as he parried the swift dagger slashes, barely able to work in any of his slashes. "Why…are…you…so FAST!" He yelled, as he parried forcefully in her direction knocking her into recoil, and taking this opportunity to attack. One of her hands were unusable to attack, but she had the second blade in her left hand, and swung it at Rue, and it cut him in the side, and Rue blood splat against the floor, staining the gray cement a bright crimson. But, Rue managed to slam his blade handle into the side of her neck, and he caught her as she fell. "Damn Sheik. Maybe she'll be useful to the whole operation, if I talk to her about it." He said, clutching his wounded side, and throwing her over his shoulder, and walking back to the dorm room hallway.
Link was speedily making progression through the Prison Guards, downing one after another, all of them falling the same way the first did. But the only problem was… the place was humongous, and he didn't have a map, and he sure as hell couldn't stop and ask for directions. Or could he? Another group of them, at least five, charged at Link. Link, beginning to learn how to estimate the distance the could displace, force parried, and then brought down his blade through the first one with a vicious diagonal slash, cutting deep into his neck, and killing him almost instantly. Then, he realized one was right behind him, and elbowed him in the stomach, and came around with a quick energy spin, cutting him in half. Now there was three left. He charged at one, and he disappeared, and Link surprised the one behind the lizard that had just disappeared, and he drove his blade into his stomach, and then ripped it out his side. He turned to the remaining two, and charged at them, and was moving so fast from adrenaline, the lizard didn't even have time to disappear before Link's blade cut through him. The last lizard was up against the wall, and Link placed his blade at his throat. "Move, and you die." He said.
"How do you free the prisoners?" And the lizard hissed in laughter. "You fool, why'd you want to do that?" And Link breathed heavily. "I have reasons. And I want you to escort me to the room where I can do what I want. And if you screw around, or try to lead me into a trap, I will make your death… most painful." He said, and fear crept into his eyes. "Fine." And he began to lead Link around. He grabbed Link's wrist. Link pressed his blade to his back. "Explain what you're doing." He said, and the lizard cringed. "I need to show them I've captured you, or you'll be attacked." And Link stared at him. "Never knew you cared." And the lizard hissed. "I never wanted this job anyway. I always hated sending poor innocents here. Like you... Rue… and Cyra the Sheik. But the only reason I haven't left is for the sole fact I'm contributing to keeping the evil out of the world… but keeping a permanent evil in. Us." And Link nodded. "Well, lead the way. " he said, sheathing his blade.
Rue sat in the bedroom. He had tied up the girl, legs and feet, and made sure the knots were extra tight, anticipating the Sheikah's escape. " Had just also finished cleaning and dressing his wound as well. He then sat at the bedside, and waited for her to wake up. After 15 minutes, she stirred. Roz untied his headband to get a good look at her. He stood over her, his soft crimson eyes staring at her. Her amber-red eyes opened, and stared at him. Then she began to struggle. "OH SHIT! A pervert! And I'm all tied up!" She exclaimed, eyes beginning to tear up. Rue looked taken aback by this statement. " Um, no, I just don't feel like getting stabbed repeatedly by a crazy blonde. And the name's Rue. " He said, sitting down. "And you shouldn't put to much bank in the fact you consider yourself stunning beautiful to the point where a complete stranger would try having his way with you." And she frowned. "You sure have a way with words." She said, and Rue grinned a rare smile. "Yes, I know. But don't take it as an insult. Try it more as advice. Arrogance in a woman isn't a desirable quality in a woman. " He said, and she smiled. "What are you saying? And the name's Cyra." She said, and he grinned. "I'm just giving you advice, that's all… Now if you'll cooperate, I can promise we can break out of here." He said, and she nodded. " Sure, I'll cooperate. So what's your plan?" She asked, and Rue took in a deep breath and sat down across form her bed " Well…"
HAHAHAHAHAHA! CLIFFHANGER! Well, I made it much longer than usual, so be happy. And review as well. I'm expecting some more, adn you can be expecting more updates! Well, I'll be updating later.