Since I messed up a bit in the story, I want to clear some things up.
When I said Rhode Island, I meant Staten Island. I apologize. And when I signed off as dragonqueen320, I had a different pen name than I do now. Now it is MidnightPhoenix320.
I got a PM from a reader who had really read my story carefully. Thank you.
I realize now that two years is a short period of time for one woman to produce two children—and for them to be running around later. I feel a little embarrassed to say this, but I don't remember who told me this. They also told me that many people they know call their mothers "mommy". This was the same person who read through my fic, and I would like to know who this was, so I can let them be known. And I could feel a little less guilty.
Thank you for reading, and please remember to LEAVE A REVIEW!
-MidnightPhoenix320