Disclaimer: I do not own any type of recognisable character from TROAD.
Well guess what my pet Tiger who lives in my computer, has made me write this so if It sucks then it's not my fault.
The adrenaline pumped through her body as she ran round and round the platform. Her body ached as the events from the past three days came to mind. All the pain and loss. All the people she met who had died because of this….this….creature and because of a mad organization who wanted to revive a species long thought dead.
She thought back to the people she had met, Bouchard, Carvier, Werner, Kurtis and many other people who had helped her through the past few days. As these thoughts rushed through her mind it just pushed her harder and faster. Eventually Lara Croft, World Famous Adventurer had her target insight. As a bolt of green energy raced towards her , she took a leap of faith as she grabbed onto the Sleepers foot and placed Eckhardt's glove onto the creature and let go as white bolts of light told her she had destroyed it.
Lara raced to get out of the lab as it started to crumble around her. As she left she heard the satisfying screams of Jochem Karel. Who ended up being the one behind this crazy idea to revive the Cubiculum Nephilli. Even though he was nephilim, he was only half and that half did NOT contain immortality.
Lara ran to the arena where she had left Kurtis to attend to that ugly creature Boaz. She approached the middle of the arena only to find blood. All of a sudden something caught her eye. She ran over to it, to find it was the weird weapon used by Kurtis. As she picked it up it started to glow and pull her into the dark room in which Boaz emerged from.
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