:silence:
DG: Why is it quiet in here?
Sess/Kag: ……
DG: looks at muses suspiciously: What are you bakas up to?
Sess/Kag: ……
DG: Ok let's start off with you Sessh…why are you back?
Sess: I was not informed that I'm not supposed to return…maybe I should leave
Kag: Please do…there's the door, use it
DG: What's your problem?
Kag: Isn't obvious? … The asshole of course!
Sess: Hpmf the feeling is mutual
DG: Fine you deal with quarrel kiddies but I'm going to the story….Ja
Beware of the Lime monster! This is you're official lime/lemon warning!...no lemons….yet, gomen hentai readers.
Disclaimer: Hmm…you'd think that if I owned Inuyasha and Co. that I'd be rich and not writing this. But since I am….I clearly have no say in the matter so leave me be!
No More Chances, No More Forgiveness
Chapter 12
Deceiving Eyes
How dare that wench? How dare she trick this Sesshomaru!
"Haha! Not so high or mighty now huh Fluffy" laughed Inuyasha.
Shortly after Kagome's departure the gang started to laugh of how much power their miko friend had over the taiyoukai. Inuyasha had stopped growling and in place, he was laughing the hardest out of everyone. Sesshomaru glared dangerously at Inuyasha, as his otouto continued to laugh harder. Inuyasha was laughing so hard, he was oblivious that the gang had moved away from him and behind stood another figure. When Inuyasha calmed down some what and was about to make aggravate Sesshomaru further, looking up where Sesshomaru once sat, only to find him not there. He then turned around, only to find himself held up inches off the ground from a tall figurine that looked up at him not to happy.
"You find something so amusing otouto?" Sesshomaru growled lowly in his icy voice.
Inuyasha smirked "Feh, the wench actually got you to do as she says, what an ass"
Sesshomaru's grip on Inuyasha's haori grew tighter. Sesshomaru knew that his otouto's taunting was true and was going to give a nice reward to the miko in return, after he took care of his pathetic hanyou of a brother. Sesshomaru heard his remark and smirked as he replied.
"She got me doing as she says, but it's a small price to pay especially with those lips of hers" he said coolly.
That shut him up. Inuyasha's eyes narrowed down at his brother angrily as he placed his hands over Sesshomaru's to get him back on the ground so he could kick his ass. He growl rumbled in his throat, vibrating Sesshomaru's hands. Sesshomaru was pleased with his results and scoffed as he tossed his brother aside of the trees and headed out to repay a visit to the miko.
Inuyasha jumped back up and was about to rush forward after Sesshomaru, that is if he could.
Miroku held out his staff on the ground as the hanyou ran forward only to have tripped over the staff on his way. Growling on the ground, Miroku placed his staff over Inuyasha to hold him down to have him hear him out.
"Inuyasha I think you should leave Kagome-sama be" he stated calmly.
"Nani! That ass is headed over to the spring where Kagome is and going to take advantage of the state she's in!" Inuyasha struggled to get Miroku's staff off him.
Miroku sighed, "Really Inuyasha, have you even thought this through? … I doubt Sesshomaru would lower himself as to rape Kagome-sama and if so I doubt she would let him…Furthermore if you were to go after him you would anger her even more as to see her undressed…yes Sesshomaru would also…but see here, she's still not over the Kikyo incident and adding this would just fuel the anger toward you even more"
Thinking over this for a few more minutes, Inuyasha stopped struggling against Miroku. He muttered colorful words to his aniki and to Miroku as Miroku let his hold over Inuyasha loosen allowing him to sit up. He crossed his arms angrily waiting for his friend to return.
Miroku sat back with Sango and grinned at his accomplish.
XOXOXO
Kagome looked to the cool spring and stretched happily. Looking around for any perverts or peeping toms, she slowly undressed and discarded her clothes to the side. Once undressed, she tipped her foot into the spring to test the temperature, if it was to her liking. The coldness of the water made contact to her skin, forcing her to retreat her foot instantly back. Kagome shivered of the feeling and wished it was a osen.
A rustled to the bushes then sounded, alerting Kagome instantly as she squealed in surprise and jumped into the cold water to cover her nude form from sight. Once the water had settled, Kagome immediately started shaking and goose bumps formed on her skin from the ice cold water. She looked to her intruder to see Sesshomaru stepping out into the clearing of the spring with a smirk of satisfaction on his face.
"Y-you j-je-jerk" she covered her breasts from sight with her arms and to keep her a bit warm from the cold air as her teeth chattered angrily at Sesshomaru.
"Oh? And why's that dearest Kagome" sarcasm dripping from his voice, his eyes shimmering in laughter at the sight.
Trying to keep her teeth steady and her words sensible she said "Y-you fucking hentai! G-get out…o-or I-I'll pu-purify you, yo-you ass!"
Instead of obliging her request, he sat down on the grass and continued to stare at her.
"Sesshomaru!" She screeched angrily, as she advanced forward to get her towel.
Seeing her advancing to retrieve her clothing, Sesshomaru took it to his hands and kept it near him from her taking it.
"I believe this is called pay back miko" he smirked as she started to turn red, unsure if it was from embarrassment, anger, the cold, or all three.
Kagome gritted her teeth as she glared deadly at him "Give. Me. My. Clothes" she hissed.
Sesshomaru stood up from his spot. Kagome saw this and hoped he was going to hand her clothes over. But was sadly mistaken when he tossed the clothing away and took off his armor and swords. Kagome's eyes widened that it was budging when she caught on to what he was doing. Sesshomaru chuckled when he observed her reaction as he stripped off his white haori, landing next to his armor on the ground. His body grew hot, from just sitting there watching her, the fiery aura seeping off her, her delicious scent ebbing off her, her flushed red face, her naked form that he could clearly see from the see through clear water from bottom to top, all that turned him on.
Kagome gulped when he saw his well built chiseled chest and watched as his hands went to his hakamas next where a budge underneath was becoming visible. She epped as she shut her eyes and turned around, not wanting to see what was underneath or fear of not being able to keep her eyes away from the sight that was to come. Kagome tried to calm down her heart that was beating quickly and the once ice cold water sudden became warm to her from the heat embaying her. She felt her lower half of her body start to heat up and tried to stop it by shutting her legs together.
Sesshomaru removed the last of his clothing and joined her into the spring, not affected by the cold depths when all he felt was the heat surrounding him and red flashing back and forth as he closed in, on the miko. And if there were any sense of dignity or pride left in his mind, it was gone as he stood right behind her breathing heavily as to keep his demon form from coming out.
Kagome felt the ripples of the water and a splash indicting he was in the spring. Not needing to turn around, she felt his warm breath over her. She didn't dare move, with her in this state and him in his, both naked in this case. All she could do is wait for him to do something, hopefully that something was get out the spring and leave her alone. But that didn't seem to be an option when he gripped his strong arms around her and pulled her back to his chest. Kagome gasped a little when she felt his warm body, not slightly cold any more unlike before. She then started shivering, not from the water, but when she felt a certain hard part from his body poking behind her as he bent down and breathed into her ear and inhaled her scent. Oh kami help me!
XOXOXO
"Is it time brother?"
"Patience…remember, you take the ningens and I'll take care of the hanyou and miko"
"Hai…but when?"
His dark orbs settled down on the frustrating hanyou. Watching closely at his actions, the hanyou finally snap, he grinned.
"Now" Genkaku smirked as he stepped out of the shadows.
XOXOXO
Inuyasha was getting impatient by the minute. He jumped up from where he sat and started pacing waiting for the return of her brother and his miko friend who were gonna about 30 minutes now. Sango, Miroku, and Shippou watched him pace back and forth and were now dizzy from just looking at him.
"Inuyasha you're making me sick, sit your ass down" Sango snarled.
Inuyasha growled "That's it! They've been gone far too long! I'm going!"
Before Miroku or Sango could hold him down to stop him, he jumped up in the tree and leaped out into the darkness of the forest.
"This isn't good Sango-koi" Miroku sighed.
"We warned him Miroku…and-"
Before she could finish she turned quickly and her hand flew connecting to his face.
"Baka houshi" she scowled moving away from him.
Miroku laughed nervously as he rubbed his cheek with care.
XOXOXO
Inuyasha was getting angrier by the minute as thoughts flew in his head of what his brother and his Kagome were doing. He began to see red but as he neared the spring he spotted a glimpse of looked to be Kagome. Huh? Kagome?
Turning away from the spring and followed Kagome in the shadows, as she quickly walked away from camp. Where are you going?
Looking over at the corner of his eye, he grinned when he saw the hanyou following close by in the trees. Excellent…that's a good inu, follow your bitch.
So concerned of where Kagome was going, Inuyasha didn't notice that he passed through a barrier on the way. All he noticed was Kagome walking further away from camp and the air getting foggier by the minute.
Just when he was about tired of following and was going to reveal himself, he saw her quicken her pace into a run into a clearing. The air was then clear and he landed behind some trees that covered him from sight, but a good view of where she was at. He looked up from her and about growled when he saw who she was meeting. He listened carefully and made sure he didn't make any sounds of movement to show he was close by.
"I just checked them…they still think we're at the spring" she grinned.
"That's a good bitch…are you sure about this?"
Kagome leaned up from his chest and kissed him deeply onto his lips.
"Does that answer your question" she whispered against his lips.
"Hai…Kagome-koi"
"He had his chance and lost it to his clay bitch…he can have her for all I care…all I want is you….Sesshomaru"
Inuyasha felt a sharp pain to his chest as Kagome whispered to his aniki once more before catching his lips once more and deepened it further. He watched as his heart break piece by piece as she unclothed him from his haori, never breaking the kiss. He responded the same as he lifted up her shirt. They paused to take a breath and Inuyasha sworn his brother looked up at him and grinned to him to where he hid before going back to his passionate love to Kagome.
XOXOXO
-Lime-
"Sesshomaru" Kagome swallowed hard when she felt his hands caressing her stomach and nuzzling her hair.
"Hmm" he deeply inhaled her scent.
"Don't do this please…Inuyasha might-"
Before she could finish Sesshomaru turned her sharply to face him. Kagome gasped as she looked up to his pink eyes as he growled lowly with his arms still intact with her waist.
"Why do you still stay loyal to the hanyou…after what he has said and done to you…you're still loyal to him?"
Kagome gulped as she kept her eyes on Sesshomaru "I'm not doing this just for him Sesshomaru…you…me…we might regret this afterwards" she whispered.
When Kagome tried to back away, Sesshomaru held his grip on her waist tighter and pulled her closer to him. He kept one hand to her waist and the other pulled her chin up to look into her smoky blue eyes.
"Do you know how long I've suffered from you? Huh! Do you?" he hissed as he leaned down and said into her ear.
Kagome shook her head no, brushing the silky strands of hair along.
"Answer me bitch" he growled pulling her chin up once more.
Kagome looked into his lingering golden amber eyes with her smoky orbs glassed with sliver in her eyes from the tears. She blinked away the tears and answered.
"Iie"
Sesshomaru growled "Well then I'll show you!"
Sesshomaru thrust his hard member near her core to show her how hard he was. Kagome bit back a moan and felt the warmth in her lower region grow hotter when she felt it so close. Sesshomaru grinned and thrust once more and this time heard a moan to his satisfaction.
"Kagome…I can feel you…I smell you…you're enjoying this" he taunted as his hands went wondering around her body.
Kagome closed her eyes and felt his hand leave her waist and went lower, as the other that was on her chin went to her chest. I shouldn't be doing! This is Inuyasha's goddamn brother for heaven sakes!
Sesshomaru groped her right breast and gave it a squeeze. Kagome's breath was stuck in her throat of the sensation and felt her nipples grow hard. Sesshomaru's left hand which was near the core rubbed her upper thighs and could feel the seeping of her arousal. He grinned and bent down to calm her lips. He kissed long and hard, licking her lips as she moaned lightly into his mouth when he pinched the hard nipple. Must…stop…ugh! Loosing…control!
Taking this opportunity he launched his tongue into her mouth and explored her mouth. She was now hot and she was breathing heavily. Forget Inuyasha! I'm in heaven!
Ending any thoughts to stop Sesshomaru from the sensation, she kissed back with equal force and her arms snaked their way around his neck, pulling him deeper into the kiss. Removing the hand from her right breast, he gave attention to the neglected one giving the same attention. She sighed into his mouth as his hand pinched gently. The left hand now closer to its goal, rubbed the lips teasingly, not entering yet. She moaned in disappointment as Sesshomaru grinned; bring his right hand back to her waist once more to introduce his painfully erected member. He thrusted so close to her wet core that she gasped and came back to reality.
She pulled him away as he growled unhappily as she shook her head no.
"I can't do this Sesshomaru" she mumbled as she stepped back.
-End lime…you can come out now-
XOXOXO
Sango and Miroku were the only ones up. Shippou had fallen asleep with Kirara, curled in a ball by the fire. The two sighed at how long the brothers and Kagome were taking. Sango watched as the fire grew down.
"I'll get more firewood" she sighed, standing up.
She then headed toward the forest, gathering wood for their dying fire. As she went along, she heard a moan near by. Curiosity get the better of her as she went over to the bushes and saw a sekushi young man to her eyes on the ground. The youg ningen looked to be 19 with long wavy brown hair, tan skin tone, fairly nice chest, and a missing hand?
"Oh! Daijoubu!" she said kneeling down, getting a look over him for any wounds.
"Ugh" the young man groaned opening his eyes and looking up at Sango. "Am I in heaven already? Are you a tenshi?" he mumbled.
Sango blushed of the compliment "Iie…you fainted, you're still very much alive" she smiled.
The young man chuckled "That's even better"
Sango's face flushed as she looked into his chestnut orbs. "Come, I'll take you to my camp it's not far from here"
"Arigato megami-san" he muttered as Sango wrapped his arm around her neck and helped him up as they walked to camp.
When they arrived, Miroku looked up and raised an eyebrow at the newcomer.
"I found him on the ground when I was looking for firewood" she answered leaning him back on a tree, by the fire.
"I see…what happened good sir?"
"Yes and what's your name?" Sango asked sitting next to him, too close for Miroku's comfort.
"Watashi wa Ryu and I am a lonely traveler" he answered.
Miroku eyed him suspiciously "Hai…so you travel alone…with no supplies or weapons to survive?"
Ryu looked up to Miroku and nodded "I depend on my strength against my enemies no need for weapons…as for supplies…I …kind of ran from a gang of youkai and dropped my food" he sheepishly said.
Sango nodded and gave him some ramen that she had just finished cooking. Miroku narrowed his eyes on him looking him over. He sensed a bad jaki from him, but looked harmless, especially with that one hand.
"Ano…what happened to your hand?" Sango took his arm and inspected it.
"Ah…it was cut in battle unexpected, sadly" he sighed putting his hand over hers.
Miroku felt the need to pull his other hand off from his Sango. He knew the so called Ryu was lying but Sango had taken a liking to the imposter.
"If your hand was cut in battle…then why is it cut so neatly"
Sango glared at Miroku when she saw Ryu sadly bending down his head "Miroku! He said it was cut off in battle that's good enough! Stop instigating him"
Ryu put his hand that was on Sango's to silence the quarrel "Not at all my dear…" Miroku nearly growled when he said that "The answer to your question…Miroku….is that in a hand to hand combat with a ningen, it was cut off from their weapon" he sighed.
Miroku eyed him warily still not convinced. Sango on the other hand comfort him and glared at Miroku saying 'are you happy now'. Miroku sighed as he sat back and watched the so called Ryu sit back and relax.
When Ryu was asleep, or so they thought, Miroku and Sango started chatting.
"Sango-koi I don't trust him…I sense a powerful jaki from him"
Sango rolled her eyes "Miroku stop being jealous there's nothing wrong with him"
Miroku made a serious face "Sango…remember the illusion brothers are still at large and he could be one of them. After all you did cut of him hand" he said matter-of-factly.
"There's nothing suspicious about him Miroku, now calm down" Sango said heatly as she sat by a tree near Ryu.
Miroku's eyes narrowed at Ryu once more and caught a glimpse of him shutting his eyes. He scowled as he stood up and walked toward the forest.
"I'm going to get the firewood" he said disappearing into the dark.
Sango sighed as she watched his body figure disappear into the darkness of the forest. She watched the flames and nearly jumped when Ryu spoke up.
"Is he always this uptight?" Ryu asked.
Sango looked up surprised he was awake and sighed once more "Don't mind him…he's a hentai" she smiled over to him.
Ryu turned to face Sango and nodded in understanding. It was then quiet from there.
XOXOXO
Inuyasha's eye reddened and was on the verge of killing everything, and that everything was Sesshomaru. With he's own eyes he watched wishing it wasn't true as Kagome's screamed Sesshomaru and his brother's moans, hoping this was all an nightmare and they were all fake. Not taking one more minute he ran off, needing to get away or fear of killing the one he loved.
He passed the barrier once more, everything behind him went back to darkness and silence, but to him the echoes of the screams and moaning echoed throughout his way back to camp.
When he reached camp, he jumped to his perch, not acknowledging their new visitor, or the missing of Miroku. Ryu and Sango looked up at Inuyasha, then at each and shrugged. Sango returned to silence of watching the fire as Ryu turned away smirking.
XOXOXO
Sesshomaru didn't take no for an answer as he grabbed her wrist and pulled her close once more for a rough kiss. Kagome struggled against his hold. Able to get one wrist loose, her hand flew back and flew across hitting sense into Sesshomaru. Snapping from demon mode back into his control, Sesshomaru winced at the pain and was about to yell for the reasons of Kagome hitting his person. It was then he observed that she was crying, her lips swollen, and her writs red from his harsh grip.
"Kagome I-" realizing what had happened.
Kagome shook her head no as she backed away and as she swam back to shore. She jumped into land, not caring if he saw her naked and grabbed her clothes. She ran in the forest, stopping when she close to camp, placed her clothes on even though she was still wet and walked back to camp red eyed.
Sesshomaru was still in the water. How could I loose control? He groaned as his harden member was still noticeable so he had to relieve himself sadly. Thinking of Kagome he masturbated as he rubbed his member up and down quickly trying to relieve himself as quickly as he can so he could tend to Kagome. Thinking of her body and ways of how she could please him with it he moaned her name, and it wasn't long before he spilled his seed. Disgusted of having to please himself he washed up and dressed as he headed back to camp.
Kagome headed to her sleeping bag silently crying. She too didn't acknowledge the newcomer. Sango looked at Kagome and was about to say something when Inuyasha spoke first.
"You're back early" he scowled.
"I don't want to deal with you now Inuyasha" she sniffled as she turned her back to him and everyone.
Sango was confused of what they were talking about, soon after Sesshomaru came into the camp.
"Hey shit head, what did you do to the wench, pleasing her one minute the next she bawling like a baby" Inuyasha sneered looking down at his brother.
"What is the nonsense you speak swine" Sesshomaru snarled.
"Don't play stupid asshole; all of Japan can hear you two"
Kagome stifled a sob as she tried to seek sleep, but it was hard with Inuyasha talking about it. How does he know?
"What the hell are you talking about Inuyasha!" Sango screeched tired of being in the background.
Inuyasha jumped down from his tree "I'm talking about Kori ass and his bitch fucking all this time" he growled out.
"They what?" Sango yelled stirring Shippou and Kirara from their sleep.
"Fucked the whole night away, chickusho!" he hissed getting annoyed of having to repeat it over and over as much as he hated and pained to say it.
Sango looked to Kagome "Is this true?"
Kagome sat up "No intercourse" she sniffled, correcting him.
"Bitch, don't lie!" Inuyasha growled.
Sesshomaru looked sympatric at Kagome, then over to Inuyasha who he glared angrily at.
"Kagome speaks the truth no intercourse" he voiced.
"Fucking teme I know you're gonna agree with her since, damn it you fucked her!"
The brothers were now face to face about to wring each other's neck when Miroku came in.
"What's going on?" he asked placing down the wood he collected.
"Ask Sir Fuck-a-lot or his bitch" Inuyasha snarled as he jumped up to his tree once more tired of arguing.
Miroku turned to see Sesshomaru pissed off that he was close to turning into his demon form and Kagome who looked like crap with her disheveled wet hair, damp clothes, swollen lips, and puffy red eyes.
"Kagome-sama where have you been all this time?" he said calmly as he placed some of the firewood in the fire to keep it going.
Kagome hic upped as tried to answer "I was at the spring as I said and…" she said looking at Sesshomaru with sad eyes.
"Horse shit, you were never at the spring, you were far from camp fucking your brains out" Inuyasha crossed his arms still pissed.
Miroku narrowed his eyes on Inuyasha "How do you know?"
Inuyasha feh'd "I was there, front row seats"
Kagome glared at him "Inuyasha I didn't have sex with Sesshomaru"
"Don't lie to me Kagome! I was there! I heard, saw everything!" Inuyasha turned to her red in his eyes.
Sango looked horrified at the argument topic, Shippou and Kirara were still sleepy and eventually fell asleep, and Ryu was smirking the whole time, where no one took any notice him.
"Hanyou if I did take the miko why would she still be wet?" Sesshomaru said coldly.
Inuyasha glanced at Kagome and growled "She could've taken a quick bath to show she was at the spring and wash off that shit scent of you. And by the way, you did a horrible job; I can still smell the bastard's scent all over you"
Kagome breathed deeply and laid back down "Oyasumi minna"
"Heh, not gonna try fighting back huh, cause you know it's true" Inuyasha grinned at his victory.
"Iie, I'm not gonna try to reason with a blockhead like you" she sniffled.
And to think I stopped Sesshomaru from taking me, just because I didn't want to hurt Inuyasha. Kami, I should've jus let him be done with it.
Sesshomaru looked to Kagome and sighed. He doesn't deserve her loyalty.
"Ok minna, time to rest! We have a big day tomorrow" Sango tried to lessen the tension in the camp.
Miroku looked at Ryu seeing him smirking. He was to going to keep an eye on him as he sat diagonally from where Ryu sat. Sango sighed as she sat between Ryu in one side and Shippou and Kirara in the other. Inuyasha was perched up on top facing his aniki, where he sat near by Kagome's sleeping bag, where she cried silently. Sesshomaru, Inuyasha, and Ryu were the only ones who knew she was crying.
After a long while, everything was silent and everyone was asleep. Sesshomaru and Inuyasha's ears on high alert as for the ningens, kitsune, and neko were resting peacefully. All the while Ryu laid happily where he observed the downfall to the group, along with Genkaku in the distance not to far and a certain other where he had eyes everywhere.
XOXOXO
"Excellent….now for the real fun to start tomorrow" Naraku laughed maliciously as he gazed into the mirror.
Japanese Translations
Otouto-little brother
Aniki-big brother
Miko-priestess
Kami-god
Megami-goddess
Tenshi-angel
Ningen-human
Hanyou-half human/demon
Taiyoukai-demon lord
Inu-dog
Neko-cat
Kitsune-fox
Ryu-dragon
Minna-everyone
Iie-no
Hai-yes
Ano-um
Nani-what
Arigato-thank you
Daijoubu-are you ok
Chikusho-damn it
Watashi wa-my name is
Oyasumi-good night
Teme-bastard
Hentai-pervert
Jaki-evil energy
Osen-hot spring
Kori-ice
Koi-love
Sekushi-sexy
Break Skit
Sess: Done yet? I want my break
DG: No we're not. I still have reviews to be said which you readers can skip. As for you Sess, you can't have a break since you already had one.
Kag: Can I?
G: As long as you shut up
Kag: OK: leaves:
Sess: thank you lord! I thought she would never leave!
DG: Yea, yea, yea…hey look! I have 100 messages in my mailbox! YAY! ……hey wait…..Eh…most are for you Sess something about a wanted ad.
Sess: Eh: Reads: WANTED SESSHOMARU FOR 50 U.S. dollars….WHAT! I am not that cheap! I'm worth 10 times as much as that!
DG: rolls eyes: of course it's from your fan club…you baka 50 U.S. pay for you to be handed over to them….Hmmm…
Sess: Oh no you don't!
DG: DO the reviews with me and I'll reconsider.
Sess: ………… fine: Mutters: ……cheap authoress
DG: smirk: you can stop reading now readers; you don't have to read up to here so Ja!
-Reviews-
KP(Kimonopriness)-Will do!
Sess: Can we hurry this up; I want to get my hair done
DG: -- hair done? Stupid male Yura….yea sure, as soon as I answer my 36 reviews
Sess: SHIT!
Cring White Wolf-I am! I just finished updating as soon as I came home!
Sess: Yea, yea, yea something about finishing up, now come on!
DG: So impatient! How rude!
Sess: Shut up and answer!
Demonic Devils/allwitchesmustdie/LilAngel/AnimusPatronus/Fire Fox Kiana/Melissa/loves-winged-dark-angel/SubaruWings/shippogurl/Sakura Tenvaiga-She will, now come on!
DG: Hey! That's my line!
Sess; Shut up and finish the reviews!
DG: Okie…Thanks and Your welcome minna!
Hellspixie18-Yea I gotta get used to that
Sess: you didn't make a cliffy on this one did you?
DG: nope, ending it with Naraku speaking …so not really
Sess: NEXT!
Djdoodet- Hey I am NOT a stubborn child
DG: SESSH! Stop answering the reviews! I told you, you couldn't answer them anymore
Sess: You're so slow onna!
DG: I'll go as fast as I want so there: sticks tongue:
Sess: real mature
Rae-this chapter is shorter don't worry
Sess: And why's that?
DG: Sighh…I'm busy…and my brother's coming back today so I gotta update quick
Sess; whoopee
ShioriRose-Thanks! I just came up with the illusion people when I was looking around in my friend's dictionary
Sess; weren't you supposed to return that today?
DG: O.O; opps
CrazyTomboy-PLEASE! I need a beta! I don't have time revising it…so if you don't mind!
Sess: she offered idiot
DG: Sessh shut up or you'll never get to your hair stylist
Sess: Fine: growl:
Mori'quessir-Not really that good
Sess: Still learning yea, yea, yea, we get the point!
DG: growl:
Amanda-Aww thanks…
Sess: blah, blah, blah
DG: Stop hating
Sess: Ok, now can I go?
DG: Sure let me contact the fan girls first
Sess: Alright! I'll be good!
DG: good doggie!
SacheyoPriestess- Ooo you like fluffness? Me too!
Sess: gag:
DG: Of course here Sess will be doing the fluffy stuff: wink:
Sess: get away from me!
ILOVEInuyasha07-OOo evil! Me likey!
Sess: the power of Christ compels you: flicks holy water:
DG: sweat drop: Sess I think you need help
Sess: You onna are nuts…I'm fine!
DG: when Kagome's here
Sess: Wahh! I want my Kagome
DG: runs away:
Hermonine-I thought that was cute
Sess: Kagome: sobs: come back!
DG: Ah ya! Sess needs his pills! BRB!
Amber-DG is out for the moment…I'll be your host for the mean time!
Sess: Hmm noodles I know what you mean…I liked how Kaggy feed me….i want to do it again!
Irnai- wasn't it great? And DG happily accepts your belated greetings…when she comes back
Mimori-Your welcome, here's another chapter hope you like it!
Kikyo AKA the DEAD BITCH- According to DG's schedule…you'll get a lemon soon…in the next chapter or 2 and Kaggy's marrying me! I'll kill that hanyou and wolf!
DG: SESSH! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! NO! That's my schedule! Take your damn pills: forces pills into Sess's mouth:
Sess: AH! Damn onna! What was that for!
DG: growl: don't touch my stuff!
Inu-luver 4eva123- Wow you said all those stuff?
Sess: Don't remind me: groans:
DG: Aww you love Kaggy! How sweet! Anyway back to the review…I heard that hmmm can't put a number
Sess: infinity…
DG: Yea! It's not a number and it tells how many times: grins: good job Sess
Sess: groans:
Some who likes your fic- I'm back and here's the update!
Sess: I think I'm late for my appointment…
DG: Oh well!
Bird Airplane Plant Thing- Let see…thanks for the top 5 thing…thou I suck really, I'm just typing and don't know how it's really written like real writers here. Yes typos, everyone has them…no one's perfect. My frequent is 1 or 2 weeks tops. And the last question I don't know…only an idiot can answer that.
Sess: You mean Kaggy?
DG: looks at Sess suspiciously: Since when do you call Kagome Kaggy?
Sess: Uhh…I need another pill
Crest01-Gah gomen with the Japanese…I just like putting words in Japanese here and there
Sess: I pity you
DG: Me? You're Kag obsessed!
Sess: Since when!
DG: Since she left
Kitsune Diva- Kagome was evil? Since when?
Sess: And when did I leave?
DG: groan: my head hurts and fingers!
Lady Lenn- Wow lots like the ramen swapping
Sess: I still think that's nasty
DG: But you did it
Sess: Yea and I hate you for it
DG: You're welcome! And thanks for the greetings!
Sesluva- Yea she knows…yes she's getting bolder…yea Sess is a bad influence
Sess: No I'm not
DG: Are so!
Sess: Are not!
DG: SO!
Sess: NOT!
DG: Not
Sess: SO!
DG: Ok!
Sess: Huh…oh shit…you bloody demon
DG: Hahaha! You sound like Ron in Harry Potter! HAHAHA!
Zackire- Ok hopefully I made at least a couple of your requests…some I couldn't stop like the reviews since I love doing them
Sess: yea to her, not to anyone else
DG: I'm calling your fan club!
Sess: GAHH!
Miaka- That's good…thou that's a lot to read…but hey it's harder when you're writing it!
Sess: there's a simple cure to that you know
DG: What's that?
Sess: Quit or make it shorter
DG: I can't do that!
Sess: those are the only ones
DG: GAHH! You said it was easy
Sess: Yea for me: smirks:
Mimorinu- Gotcha! Thanks for the reminder!
Evil-Miyu- Okie no Sess in this one…I wanna talk one on one with you. I don't take anything you said as an insult but as a lesson. See I know I'm an amateur at this writing but I'm only 13 while others that are writing are 16 and above so there stories are obviously better since they're wiser than me so I'm pretty much a beginner, kay? I don't take anything bad from what you said. Actually I'm happy you wrote it. Criticism you know? You give the person advice if you see they need help or if they're doing something wrong. Nothing bad, just helping improve and I like that. True I got sugar coating reviews saying they like it, but I've known my share and I know it's not the best or perfect. I hope you read this and help me further with my story to improve better. Who knows…with your help, I can ace anything when I write essays and stories. : Grins: Anyway thanks lots!