Hi this is my first fic so please be nice. Ok this first Chap. is just the Oc profiles
If you have any advice on how to make this fic better I welcome it.
Anyways on with the profile page!
Name: Buri Touracomb
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Description: Black hair, tawny brown eyes, average height about
5'1, skinny but is strong, and creamy complexion.
Wears: A red T-shirt, blue jeans, red and white shoes, a silver
locket, and black and red mesh gloves that go up to mid-arm.
Personality: Usually a calm quiet reader, but voices her opinion
to people she doesn't know. Judges people 10 mins. after meeting
them. Fights for what she thinks is right and doesn't give up. Is
very close to her little sister. Has a crush on Kai, but doen't plan
to admit it anytime soon.
Name: Thayet Touracomb
Gender: Female
Age: 11
Description: Black hair but dyed it red, ermerald green eyes, height
about 4'6, skinny but not as strong as her sister, and creamy
complexion.
Wears: A green T-shirt, blue capri pants, brown lace-up running
sandals, a silver charm bracelet, and blue mesh gloves that reach
her wrists.
Personality: More clever than most people think she can solve a lot
of problems people older than her couldn't, tries her best to be as
strong as her sister, but is more outgoing and apologizes if she does
even the slightest thing wrong. Likes Tyson and shows it, but Tyson
hasn't seemed to have noticed yet.
Review if this sounds interesting. Go ahead and critisize all you like, the critizism will only help
make this fic. better.