I don't know why my links don't work! I'm sorry, I really am. To those of you who STILL want to see them I'll send you a review reply or something with the direct link there...I hope that works. I feel bad now...
So I'll give you this great chapter to make up for it...hopefully
chp 11
Inuyasha arrived in the dead of night at the entrance to the caves. He found it to be a boarded up old mine. A perfect hiding place...
He went ot the trunk and looked at the arrange of weapons. He had a new belt for all these gadgets, a hook gun, a pistol, a communicator, a tracing device, smoke bombs, and a few other interesting knick knacks. He put them all neatly into pockets and clipped the Tetsusaiga to his hip. He began to tie his hair up into a high pony tail, but stopped...
He decided to let his hair fly freely, less pain to take out the ponytail holder. He clipped on his new arm cuffs, the titanium metal gleaming with a reflective surface. He painted his eyes with black streaks coming out from each bottom. He closed his eyes, mentally preparing himself for this. He finished his transformation by hiding a small knife inside the hidden pocket in his boot. He smiled, finally ready to take on this challenge.
His car made a weird noise, and he noticed the trunk opening on its own. The bottom half of the car opened up and slipped out like a drawer, revealing a rice rocket motorcycle...
On it was a note from Kagura...
Make your travels a little faster...
His sister in law was a huge help, such a blessing to him. He smiled and loaded the racer off the drawer. The bottom half slid back inside the car, transforming back into the original vehicle. Inuyasha swung his leg over the racer, and pressed in the ignition button. The racer lit up and he presed on the gas pedal. He immediately zoomed into the wooden barrier and shattered it on impact. He lifted his arm as to not get the splinters of wood caught in his eyes, and soon returned back to zooming down the tunnels.
When he came upon the first fork in the road he stopped. He sniffed the air, searching for Kagome's scent...
Left tunnel...
He traveled down the tunnel, and after a series of turning and sniffing, he came upon a storage warehouse...
He parked the racer, hopping off it and running into the old building. The dark room illuminated hazily by the yellow lights outside, but only barely. He used his acute eyes to see fairly well in the dark, and began to sniff out Kagome. Her scent was rather strong here so he decided to continue in his search. He walked deeped into the old building, fresh footprints evident in the old dust. He followed a set, and they lead him to a back room. A white light peeked out through the old wood, and he heard a soft mumbling sound. He slowly inched his way towards the room, careful not to squeek on the floorboards. He peeked in through a cut in the wood, he saw a bloody beat up figure tied up in the back. He looked for anyone who might be guarding the room, and opened the door. He looked down to find a beaten up man...
How naive could he be that he would find Kagome on the first try...
"Old man, are you ok?"
"Die..."
A knife shot out and nearly took off Inuyasha's left ear. Inuyasha immediately jumped back and unsheathed the Tetsusaiga. The 'old man' broke the ropes that bound him, and ripped off the fake skin...
"Killed an old man and wore his skin eh..."
The demon was a pathetic snake demon. But poison dripped frm his fangs...
If I get bit by that thing I'm dead...
Inuyasha backed away, holding the Tetsusaiga out in front of him...
This'll be a perfect time as ever to test out the Wind Scar...
He raised the sword over his head and swung it down,"Wind Scar!"
The bright shine of yellow light gleamed in his face. The demons dissinagrated on the spot...
He had truely master the Tetsusaiga. It gave him a crooked smile that gave him satasfactory in his work. He resheathed it and ran back outside, it was obvious enough to him that Kagome wasn't here...he just had wishful thining. He proped himself back up on the rice rocket and sped away...
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Kagome felt greedy hands rub agaisnt her thigh. She groaned in repulsivness, gritting her teeth as the demon traveled upward. She looked up, trying to get the tears forming in her eyes to fall backwards. No such luck...they rolled over her cheeks in long trails, falling onto the tattered cloth that cloaked her. She bit her lip as the demon greedily nipped at her collar bone, licking down to her breasts, trying to go past where the clother ended...
"Kagome...isn't that your name?"
She remained unresponsive...
"I asked you a question bitch...ANSWER IT!"
He backhanded her and spit and blood flew out of her mouth. She felt the sharp sting burn her cheek as he began to suck on her neck. She didn't dare move again, it was too painful for her...
"Kagome I wish that I could steal away your innocence right here and now..."
How did he know she was a virgin?
"Mhmmm...I knew...you smell like a virgin...I can't wait to steal that away from you..."
He grazed the skin between her legs through her panties. She gasped, the feelings inside her were utterly repulsed by this action. She felt a hard knot weld up in her throat, burning her from the inside.
Please...please save me...
She gasped inward, completely afraid of his touch. It almost stang her to be touched by something so filled with malice. He leaned in and licked her tears away...
"Don't worry, it will all be over soon..."
She bit so hard on her lip she tasted blood...
"Trust in me my dear..."
His sharp claws gentle sliced open her skin, leaving twin trails of blood to roam down her neck. He gently lapped up the blood, a certain greed in the way he touched her. He hastily began to slip off the remainder of her shirt, exposing her to him...
"You're better than even I imagined..."
She felt a world of pain come to her as she was exposed to him. She felt so angry and so betrayed that he took advantage of her like this. Please Silver Scar...please...
The Black Raper looked up from Kagome, sensing something...
"That damned hanyou..."
Kagoem felt a surge of shock run through her body as the Black Raper thrusted her up against a wall and mercilessly beat her. She screamed a high pitch scream that echoes throughout the tunnels. She felt a fist jam into her gut, sending a hurl of blood streaming out of her stomach. She fell to the floor with a thud, darkness taking over her vision...
"You bastard!"
She heard the voice of an angel...
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Inuyasha got there in the nick of time. He panted as he held up the Tetsusaiga, raising the blade towards Naraku's neck...
"You are finished!"
"You think a pathetic hanyou like you can stop me?"
"Damn right I can..."
He lashed out at Naraku, wounding him in the side. Naraku growled and sent a stream of poisen towards Kagome. Inuyasha jumped towards her, protecting her from the blast with the tetsusaiga. He faced Naraku with Kagome behind him, eyes set in a determined glare...
"WIND SCAR!"
Inuyasha screamed it as he sliced through the air. Naraku smiled, raising his arms. A barrier formed and the attack was blocked quite easily...
"I told you...you cannot have the priveledge to touch me..."
He sent a tentacle out at Inuyasha who sliced it off with the Tetsusaiga...
"GO TO HELL!"
Inuyasha jumped up and tried to slam the Tetsusaiga down on the barrier, Naraku just laughed at his pittiful attempts to harm him. He smiled and sent a miasma all round him, and disappeared without a trace. Inuyasha shielded his mouth and went to pick up Kagome, shielding her as well. He picked her up and raced out of the building, running towards the rice rocket.
He quickly wrapped her up in a blanket and floored the gas. As he raced away he heard an explosion coming from behind him...
Oh shit...
He continued to floor it as he smelt burning flames and smoke traveling behind him. He knew he was only about a mile away from the entrance, he might be able to out race it. He sensed the flames traveling behind him, their heat starting to burn in his throat. He felt his adrenaline pulse as the hot flames creeped closer and closer to him. The heat stung his back as the wind cooled his face. He stole a glance at Kagome, knocked out cold by Naraku's blow, but still beautiful in reprise. He had to get her back to safety. He had to protect her...
500 feet to the entrance...
He felt the heat burning h0si back, feeling like it would set it afire any second. He felt sweat cape his brow, hot and sticky sweet...
400...
He could see the light from the flames in his rear view mirror. He wrapped Kagome protectively in his arm, holding her close.
300...
The flames were visible now, burning, licking eveything up in flames. He felt the heat now like cloth to an iron. He begged his bike not to melt or set afire...
150...
He felt his body start to weaken, would he last under the stress and heat?
100...
The flames were licking his wheels now, but he could see the light of the entrance...
50...
He felt Kagome begin to stir in his arms. Please not yet!
10...
Please hold up...
5...
Alomost there...
To finally reach the entrance was a breath of fresh air litterally. He almost crashed the bike into the car, but was able to swirve out of the way at the last minute. He watched the flames burn out of the cave entrance, burning up into nothing...
Finally...we're safe...
He looked down at Kagome, who still hadn't quite woken up. He cupped her head in his arms, bringing her face closer to him.
"Oh Kagome, don't scare me like that again..."
He wrapped his arms around her tightly, holding her as lose to him as possible. His heart was in so much relief to have her back again, he almost let tears slip from his eyes...
She began to wriggle a bit, and he let go of his firm grasp on her. He let her lean back, and watched her gorgeous brown eyes flutter open. She smiled when they set focus on his face, a relief that made his heart soar.
"You came for me..."
"Of course..."
She leaned up towards him and placed her velvet lips on his cheek, laying soft butterfly kisses on his rough face. Her lips searhed until they made contact with his lips. He felt her kiss with such a need that he couldn't help but kiss back. She tangled his fingers in his hair, trying to bring him closer to her than before. He softly broke the kiss, looking over her body...
"Kagome, you need to get to a hospital..."
"I don't want you to leave me..."
"I wouldn't dream of it..."
He placed one more kiss on her forehead, and loaded her into his car. She fell asleep in the backseat, her soft breathing giving him comfort the whole way home...
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Twilight...again...
Kagome looked up at the fading sky remembering her hero. Remembering her love...
She hadn't been able to get a hold of Inuyasha for 5 days now, she was worried. She had wishful thinking in believing that if she screamed...he'd come. She felt her eyes grow glazed with tears, and held her hand to her heart. She tried to visualize him, to see him in all his glory. Watch his silver hair flow behind him with elegance, his golden eyes burn inside her soul. She felt silver tears fall down her cheeks as the final moments of dusk setted into night.
She screamed...
She waited for her savior in black, waited for him to come as he always had. She felt more tears roll as she saw the familiar shadow fall from the rooftop. She watched him step into the moonlight, her Silver Scar...
"Kagome..what happened."
She threw herself at him, crying into his chest.
"I need to know..."
"Know what."
"Who...you are..."
She looked up at him, tears brimming over her eyes. Their shinning brilliance capturing his attention, softening his heart. She nuzzled her face into his chest, trying to draw comfort from him...
"Please...I can't go on like this. Living a lie, loving you and him...I can't subject myself to such torture...Please...I have to know.."
"Kagome you dont understand..."
"No...I do."
He looked at her, a firey passion brewing inside him. She reached out and wrapped her arms around him as wet rain soaked them in a cool shower. She felt the fire hot need in his lips as he kissed her, trying to tell him she needed it as much as he did. She felt herself being lifted up and wrapped her legs around him. She felt him losing his balance, and he placed one hand on the brick wall behind him for support. Kagome broke away long enough to look into his eyes.
She reached out and wiped away the smudged make up under his eyes. He helped her, and slicked his bangs up to show his whole face.
Kagome's eyes widened...
"Inu..Inuyasha..."
"Kagome..."
She felt herself fall to the ground with him. The soaking wetness of their skins being pressed together was almost too much to bear for him. He had to sit down...
"Inuyasha...Why didn't you tell me..."
"I had to keep you away, keep you safe...but...I'm too selfish to do that..."
She felt him press his lips to hers capturing them in a trap no one could escape. She opened his chest gaurd, traveling kisses down the bare skin. She felt her chin being lifted up, and then her lips being captured once more. Her cold wet skin pressed against his warm chest, her breasts hardened at the tip, pressed so tightly against his skin. He couldn't help but travel downward, but she seemed not to care. When he finally reached those beautiful hardened breasts of hers, he couldn't help but sigh into her mouth. She merely wrapped her legs around him tighter, letting her hands tangle themselves in his long silvery locks.
He spoke between kisses,"I love ...you..."
"I...love you..more..."
"Never...not in...a million...years..."
"Every...day..."
She silenced him finally, their tounges battling it out against each other. He unbuttoned her blouse, trying to find the last button...
"Lets coninue..this...at my apartment..." He spoke it so needingly...
"Ok..."
He lifted her up, breaking the kiss. He carried her in his arms, traveling back to his apartment(it was the closest) and went in through the window he left opened.
"Oh Inuyasha..."
He answered her by tossing her on his bed, trailing hot kisses on her cold, wet, bare flesh...
"Inuyasha..."
"Kagome..."
He ripped open her blouse, not caring about the buttons anymore...
"I hope you don't mind..."
"No..I don't..."
He lifted her up enough to unclip her bra, and after a few minutes of complicated proceeduring, finally unclasped it. He burried his face into her breasts, nuzzling the soft mounds close to his cheek. She moaned, the glorious sould ringing through his ears. He gently moved up to the tip, suckling the still hardened end. She gasped and dug her fingers into his back. He carefully traced his fingers over her exposed chest, and gently began to remove her skirt...
He half expected her to reject him, but on the contrary, she guided his hands to the zipper. He gently slipped off the green skirt, leaving her clad in only her pink panties...
"Your...so gorgeous..."
He saw her face turn a slight shade of pink...
"Don't do that...you have nothing to be ashamed of..."
He reached down and placed her hand on his chest. She began to peel away the clothing that separated his bare skin from hers. She reached the bottom of his pants and shied away...
"Kagome, do you want this?"
He looked into her eyes, trying to understand their expression...
"Yes...I do..I'm just new to all this..."
He leaned in closer to her,"Me too, but know what..."
"What?"
"I couldn't want anything more..."
He nuzzled his face into her neck, as she began to peel off the pants...
He took off her panties...
Bare naked they lay against each other, waiting to give their most precious give to one another...
And neither one would ever regret it...
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Ok, I don't do all the way lemons. A. Because I don't write things I can't describe or haven't done B. becuase fanfiction doesn't allow it.
In most cases I would make the characters wait until marriage to "do it" But I decided that techniqually it would be quite hard to fit that into the story without Inuyasha being exposed, that I could make an acception.
Anyway EXTRA long for you guys since I felt like spoiling ya'll for soem wierd reason...
Even though I'm not getting NEAR the reviews i was getting previously. But I guess MAYBE IF I BRING IT TO YOUR ATTENTION it might be resolved...
Also if you still want the pictures please let me know and I will send you the link via review reply (I never use it, I don't know why its just akward for me...) But I guess I can face my fears for you guys!
OK PLEASE REVIEW! I beg of you, it so fuels me to write more. I would update everyday if I got ten reviews for each chapter. In fact thats what I'll do If I get ten reviews for this chapter I'll update the next day in stead of holding it off for reviews...
So I'm bribing you guys here, more reviewssooner updates(I'm a very fast writer)
So anyway I'll stop jabbling on and on and on...
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(WOAH! I just uploaded the chapter and it has over 3000 words 0.o)