Thnx for the reviews peoples! And yes, I will continue.. ; )
Lol, theses chapters have real short names...
Don't Cry
Chapt. 2- Found
No one was around... there was some kind of festival for the capture of the pirates. Hmph...Pintel didn't think that was such a great thing. But at least he could get in now without being caught.
He hurried down the path as quickly as he could as the sun started to set. God, he hoped he was all right. But, then he wondered how he would ever save him from his fate. For a moment, he was torn between going and possibly not saving him, or not going and just remembers the good times he had with him. But he quickly dismissed the latter choice and hurried on.
Coming to the door, he found a large padlock, chained to the handles, preventing him from getting in. Determined to find his friend, he hurried around to the side and looked through the barred windows. Finally, he found him! But then, Pintel wished he hadn't. Ragetti lay curled up on the hard floor, his back bloody.
"Ragetti?...Ragetti, is that you?" He asked, as loud as he dared to speak, for fear someone might hear him and capture him too. No answer came from his friend. He tried again, "Ragetti...Ragetti, answer me ya ol' fool!" Pintel starts to just give up, he must have come too late... but he decides to try on last time. "Ragetti, please say somthin'. What have they done to ya?"
"They beat us pirates..." Comes a voice from the next cell. Pintel had never met him before, must be from another ship... "They beat that poor lad there 'til he just fell to the floor unconscious. There mighty cruel to us, you better get away before someone spots you and throws you in too!" Pintel looked back up the road, then back into the dark, filthy cells and sighs... "I can't... I'm of no mind to leave him here." The man in laughs, "Well now, ya gettin' me out too? Mind as well, if you can get us out of here, you can do anything!" His cellmate laughs with him.
Just then, Pintel hears someone talking, just up the road. With one final look at his thin, beaten, and bleeding friend, he hurries around the building and off to hide again.
Ok, I don't think you know who these people are, do ya shiloah? So you might have found that "ol' fool" comment to be a little mean for him to say to poor Raggy. But it wasn't... don't worry. Pinters jokes around with Raggy bunches of times...
Hey, ya know... every time I say latter, I always think of a ladder...
Anyways, poor, poor Ragetti... starvin, beaten, and bleedin on that cold, hard floor... I know the suspense is killin ya as to what happens...
R&R please, so I can finish postin the story...