-1TAKEN CH3
ATTENTION: I do not own any of the character affiliated with "The Fast and the Furious" motion picture, or anything else related to this story that might be copyrighted material. This is a fictitious story, and should not be taken as a real life event.
THIS STORY TAKES PLACE BEFORE THE MOVIE.
Greetings. I have decided to re-write this story. I went back and read my first verse of this story and came to this conclusion: My story writing skills sucked. So, Since I'm home sick for the next week, I'm going to re-write and update this story. Please enjoy, criticize, and comment.
RATED PG-13 FOR VIOLENCE AND LANGUAGE.
THIRD PERSON. SAN DIEGO.
Tran and his gang had the whole thing planned out. Johnny was going to make Dominic bow down on his knees. It wasn't the cars, or the house, or the garage that were Dominic's largest assets. It was his family and friends. And Letty was at the top of those lists. Tran grinned as he drove about the city with his boys. They knew the details of Letty's little errand. They even knew exactly when Letty was going to arrive. All they needed to do was follow her back to LA. Dominic had it coming.
THIRD PERSON. SAN DIEGO RESIDENCE. THE NEXT DAY. NOON.
Letty departed from her sisters house, heading towards the Auto Parts store. She yawned softly as she parked in the front, stepping out and heading towards the door. She noticed a Black Civic down the street. She had a bad feeling in the pit of her stomach. She thought she had seen that car before. She sighed softly as she thought to herself. That couldn't be a Tran car. What would Tran be going here? She shook off the feeling as she stepped inside. After taking about a half an hour to load everything in to her car, she got back on the road. She wished that he had brought a truck with her, since the car was filled to the rim with parts. She laughed softly to herself as she turned on the radio. She sped up as she headed up the on ramp and down the highway. It was just about dead, and she knew it would only get more dead as she traveled in between cities. Little did she know that somewhere behind her, a gang of Tran vehicles was watching her.
She yawned again as she continued to drive. She was about half way through her trip, traveling thorough a stretch a California that had a gang of luscious trees. She decided to take a quick detour, since she was ahead of schedule. She pulled off at the following off ramp, turning towards a side street at was surrounded by trees. She smiled as she grabbed her phone, dialing Dominic's number.
THIRD PERSON. THE DT GARAGE. BETWEEN NOON & TWO.
Dominic and the crew were busy as usual at the shop. Dominic was too busy thinking about Letty to work. He stood behind Jesse, listening to his new designs for Dom's car. Vince and Leon were busy talking about other shit. Dominic took a deep breath as she felt his phone vibrate in his pocket.
"Hold on a second Jesse. Be right back."
Dominic moved in to the office and sat down in the chair. She flipped open the phone as she grinned.
"Hey sexy. What's going on? Did everything go okay with the parts?"
"Yeah. I'm on my way back right now. I should be home soon. Just admiring the nice scenery of California."
She smiled as she looked in her rear mirror, noticing that black Civic from before, and a few bikers behind that. She held her breath. Tran. She knew this was bad. She was in trouble.
"B..Baby let me call you back in a minute.."
THIRD PERSON. LA HIGHWAY.
She didn't even give him a moment to respond before the closed the phone and threw it next to her. She tried to stay calm as she sped up. She looked back as the cars did the same thing, but they got closer and closer to her. She could feel her heart pounding in her chest as she care rammer her from behind. She screamed out as she held on to the wheel. The car swerved a bit, before to gripped it tightly.
"SON OF A BITCH YOU HIT ME!"
She pressed harder down on the petal as the glass from the back window of the car shattered. She screamed as she ducked swerving off the road and hitting in to a tree. It took her a minute to regain herself. Her vision was blurry as she sat up slowly, groaning. She lifted her hand to her forehead. Noticing a drop of blood. She heard the cars stop behind her as she flung open the door, crawling out slowly, holding her body with one arm, and bracing herself on the door with the other. Before she even had a second to look up, Johnny Tran came up in front of her, slamming her in the face with the end of his shotgun. She fell back on to the ground, holding her nose that was bleeding.
"Hey baby. Its good to see you again.."
He grinned as she looked over her body. Johnny had longed for Letty since the day he knew that she was Toretto's girl. Letty looked up at him as she moved back slowly.
"What the fuck do you want from me Tran! You better hope to God that Dominic doesn't…"
She turned her attention towards her phone that was vibrating in the passenger seat still. Johnny cocked the shotgun as he pointed it at her face. He reached in, grabbing the phone and grinning. It was Dom. He flipped it open, and put the phone to his ear.
"Hello Dominic. Nice to hear from you.."
Dominic's body went still as he heard the voice of Johnny. He fell back on the chair as he put one hand to his head.
"Where's Letty! I swear to God Johnny if you touch her, I will kill you. And this time I wont let you live."
"Don't worry Dominic. You have something I want, you I have something that you want. I'll contact you. Don't call this phone."
He hung up as he looked down at Letty. He grinned as he grabbed her, taking a needle out of his pocket and slamming it into her arm. She cried out as she slowly went unconscious. She was put in the back of the Civic.
"Dominic will pay for what he did.."
The cars sped off to an abandoned building between San Diego and LA. Dominic was left speechless, tears about to form his his eyes as she yelled out, slamming his fists on the desk. He began to shake as the guys came in. How was he going to save he women he loved?
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-Katy