I wrote this for school and I just wanted to know what everyone thought of it cause I think its good but I need so input so please review and let me know what you think!!!! BTW its about ME.
Molly's Song
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly's song has got it going on
(BTW its about ME
Molly can I come over after school
We can hang around in the pool
When did you get back from your swimming meet
Are you there or in the kitchen try-ing to eat
You know you're not the shy girl that you used to be
Your all grown up, in love with chimpanzees!
Molly's song has got it going on
She's funny, smart, with her hair oh so long
Molly can't you see you have pretty smile like me
I know it might be wrong but I'm in love with Molly's song
(BTW its about ME)
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly's song has got it going on
Molly you to jam to music all night long
You can't sing but you have got it on
You're so loving with pets, I can tell you care
And the way you say "let's sit down right over there"
And you live in a world full of fantasy
But since your boy walked out
Your song could use a real hottie
Molly's song has got it going on
It's all I want and I've waited for so long
My Band can't you see your just not the song for me
I know it might be wrong but I'm in love with Molly's song
Molly's song has got it going on
It's all I want and I've waited for so long
This Love can't you see your just not the song for me
I know it might be wrong, I'm in love with Molly's song
Milkshake can't you see your just not the song for me
I know it might be wrong but I'm in love with Molly's song
So please review and tell me what you thought so I can work on it!!!!