To My MUSES:

The-Wind-Dragon-Caller - Thank you SOOO much for your review. My mom is from New York so I know what you mean. It was so nice to know how much you like this story. I was thinking on giving up because I'm always blocked but with help for reviews, I got ideas.!

Spaugs- Erik isn't sure if he likes Dawn or not. You have to remember that the only person he ever kissed was Christine, so even though he said he kissed her to shut her up he probable does like her and doesn't want to admit it. It was a very intimate kiss, but Erik's a romantic. HEHE!

lexi- You are SOO great! You are always reviewing and you even answer my e-mails! I REALLY hope you enjoy this chapter and YOU ROCK! Thanks for everything!

EtherealSinger- Your so funny! Thanks for the review and I hope you like this chapter! I was blocked so it took me a while!

I also like the word wozy! My friend and partner in crime helps me alot with my stories so I have to thank her! She writes really funny stories. Her name is Galasriniel

simi- I'm glad you enjoyed it! I know ts been a while since I updated but I hope you aren't mad! I worked hard on this chapter and it was reading my reviews that made me start another chapter!

Aerama- Thanks for always reviewing! You and Lexi rock! Hope you like what I wrote and everyone should R&R her fic called Lunar White(no flames please!)!

A/N: I have just found out that I will be costume apprentice and next year I will be costume director for my school! THAT ROCKS! I get points towards my schooljacket and it will have a theater patch! I'M SOO EXCITED!JUMPS UP AND DOWN I just had to tell people...

NOW ON WITH THE STORY!

Odious Guy or Odious Gerbil?

Dawn was fuming as she made her way to the costume shop. Not only was that man-no he's not a man...that...that...GERBIL...that works... not only was that gerbil threatening to kill her if she tells anyone about the mirror, but he was also a nincompoop!

"You don't know what dangers lie in my labyrinth," Dawn mumbled to herself mimicing Erik's tone of voice.

"Its messy, and dusty, and reeks of male! That right there is reason enough for me to stay away!"

"You know talking to yourself is the frist sign of insanity."

"what do you want, Fay?"

"Mme. Giry needed you to finish some of the costumes but no one could find you. Where were you?"

"On a nice tropical island having a chat with my friend Mr. Dolly Llama (Not to be confused with Dahli llama),

You?"

"Right...anywho I'm going to go polish my rock collection while you go do your thingy."

"Lazy bum"

"your point?"

"You will help out around here wither you like it or not!"

"You can't make me!"

"Wanna bet?"

"Whatcha gonna do about it?"

"Wanna know what I'm going to do...I'm going to go...to...DADDY!"

Both girls ran down the hall towards their fathers office.

"Don't you dare!"

"DADDY! PAPA!PAPI!(A/N: she says dad in English, French, and Spanish)" Dawn was almost to the door when she was knocked to the floor. The door in front of them opened to reveal their father looking down at them with an expression of mixed amusment and anger.

"What is the meaning of this?"

"We were playing around and wanted to know if you wanted to join us!" Dawn quickly lied. She had no intention of really going to her father she just wanted Fay to chase her.

"I am busy and you shouldn't be playing around at all! I expect better from my daughters, no go and help Mme. Giry she has been frantic searching for you! And Fay go and...I don't know clean your room!"

"yes, papa." they replied in unison. Their father shook his head and shut the door.

Fay made her way towards her room mumbling about stupid sisters while Dawn headed to the fitting room.

Dawn was pulled into another room by Mme. Giry half-way down the hall.

"Were you with Erik?" was the first thing Mme. Giry asked, fear and anger clearly written on her face.

Sorry to make this chapter short, but its all I got for the time being. I really don't have a plot so before I write my next chapter I need your help.

Frist: Should I bring in another charcter or Christine?

Second: I need other names that go with O.G. Its for something I have planned for the next time she meets Erik, but so far all I got is Odious Guy and Odious Gerbil. PLEASE give me names!

THANKS!