Author's notes: this is the original, everything came to me at night and I wrote it down (that's probably why I do my h.w. at 10 o'clock.). My friend and I changed a lot of the I's and you's to turn I into Itachi and you into Sasuke. My friend did a great editing job, even if she let out "you were a good brother". Oh, well it probably doesn't fit into the poem. Tell me what you think.
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I loved you,
You hated me.
Although you were a good friend,
You hated me.
You taught me two things:
To love and to hate.
You pushed me farther and farther,
And now, I'm walking on thin ice.
Forward, I fall,
Backward, I break.
It's hell on earth.
Unable to move, unable to feel,
With no way to show you how I feel.
I want to die.
But before I do,
Please take away this pain,
With the kiss that have I waited for all my life.
I'll be waiting for you,
Between the gates of hell,
And the gates of heaven.
If you cannot find me, look in your heart,
I'm always there.
I'll be waiting.
I love you.
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