Ok, people a re starting to reveiw more. That makes me happy, although, i would essentially like to see everyon who reads it to reveiw. But so long as someone does, i shall continue to right for them.

Here's chapter 6


Chapter6

Zuko climbed the rope ladder that one of the Fire Navy soldiers had rolled down to his motorboat. (Not like one of those fancy speedboats that people had, but like the one we constantly see Zuko running around on) Fallowed by Iroh, then by his three bodyguards.

"What makes my stupid brother come to see his great sister, hmm? I hope you aren't here to steal the Avatar; he's mine. I'm going to actually bring him to father," said Zula standing with her wait on one leg, and her hands on her hips.

"No, I've actually come to offer my assistance. These three warriors are the best I have. I have ordered them to help protect the avatar from his friends coming to take him back." He gestured towards the three Fire Nation soldiers behind him.

"That won't be necessary Zuko," Doran walked up and stood beside her," this strapping young warrior has dealt with those pesky fools. They won't bother us again."

Zuko almost fell over backwards, the man next to her looked exactly like Sokuro, but he was more built, and looked more like a guerilla. " He did, did he? Well, at least allow us to stay here for the night, it is almost dark, and we have traveled all day to get here."

"Very well, just for the night, but after that, they have to leave, and go back into exile with you." Zula turned and walked away. Doran lingered, and looked at the tallest soldier, thinking he had seen something familiar, but the through out the idea, and fallowed her.


Down in the bunkroom, Sokurro and Sokka took off their clothes and changed into their normal outfits, on one side of a wire draped with a blanket, while Katara changed into her clothes on the other. (Ok, I just realized that I haven't described Sokuro/Doran yet…smacks himself in the head ok, I'll do it right now, sorry for any confusion.) Sokuro put on some Earth Nation robes, then hefted a silver breastplate, with a newly added golden water tribe insignia on it, and slipped that on over the robes. He strapped his sword to his waist, and pulled on silver gauntlets with the same golden insignia.

"Wow," said Katara, admiring the new armor," Isn't that heavy?"

Sokka rolled his eyes at his sister's flirting. What does she see in these kinds of guys, all a guy needs to impress her is to have a nice blade, some fancy armor, and something that makes them abnormally special, and she goes completely gah gah.

"No, it's a special armor made from a specific kind of silver. If I live through this, I'll tell you about it."

"Of course you'll live through this, don't talk like you won't," she kissed him on the lips for a few seconds, and then Sokka broke them up.

"Katara! That's enough, we're not pretending like he's your husband any more," Sokka said, trying to keep his voice down.

"Who says I'm pretending?"

"But… You…and him... OOOOOh boy, Aang's not going to like this when he finds out," stammered Sokka.

At least he's my own age you paranoid imbecile, thought Katara.

" Look, this isn't the place to discuss this, let's get going and save Aang," said Sokuro. He poked his head out of the door, and looked down the hallway. Nobody there, good. "Coast is clear guys. Let's go." He crept out into the hall, and down it to the last door. It had a huge padlock on it, so it had to be Aang's prison. Sokuro Bended some water out of a small vial, and formed it into a small lock pick. It took about five seconds to unlock the door, and they got inside quickly.

Aang was lying on a mattress, when they came in. he immediately shot up, and said, "Hi guys, Doran, I thought you said Katara and Sokka were dead."

"What? I haven't seen you since the town. You were unconscious when I changed my name, my name is Sokuro now."

"What, I just saw you an hour ago, you brought me this platter of fruit," he pointed at a silver platter of fruit.

"Aang, that other guy you saw was Doran, he is the evil person that has been fallowing Sokuro through the dimensions," explained Katara, kneeling next to Aang, "we're on a Fire Nation ship headed for the capitol. Zula is Zuko's sister."

"How do I know that you all aren't just a trick buy the other Doran?"

"What? I'll tell you how, look at my hilt, and tell me what you see."

"I see a sapphire, nothing special."

"Yes, but Doran has a ruby. Red is bad, Blue is good."

"Or red could be good, and blue could be evil." Argued Aang.

"And while we're at it, why don't we just say the water is really liquid silver, and the Sky is maroon. We don't have time to explain the gems, Katara grab Aang and lets go."

She grabbed Aang's arm, and pulled him towards the door, but as they were about to open it, Doran burst in.

"Well, well, well. Look what the cat dragged in. Two water tribe peasants, and a dimensionwalker. You should have stayed dead Sokuro."

"Katara, take my sword, and don't come for me even if the Soul Gem cracks." He un-strapped his sword and handed it to her. " And if we never see each other again, know that I loved you with all my heart. Now go." He spun his hands around in a circle, and a barrier appeared around Doran, who was trying to slash at the three who were running out of the room.

The door slammed shut and the padlock clicked. Sokuro dropped the barrier.

"How was that smart, giving away your only weapon, how do you plan to kill me?" asked Doran.

"It wasn't very, but there is more than one way to kill a person," Sokuro suddenly dropped his stance and concentrated intensely on Doran's eyes. Doran tried to cleave his opponent down the middle, but Sokuro sidestepped, but never lost eye contact.


"That guy is crazy!" yelled Sokka leading the way to the upper deck, "giving up his only weapon and locking the door be hind us."

"Sokka he'll be fine, he's been to countless worlds, and has many powers, he can hold his own, but now we have our own problems," said Katara pointing at the soldiers baring their path.

"Katara use the sword!" yelled a voice in her mind

Katara pulled out the sword, and it slashed through the dimension barrier. Before any of them could stop, they were on the other side.

"Quick slash again!" yelled the voice.

Katara ignored Sokka's protests and slashed a second barrier. The stairs up to the ship were right there, but she could see another dimension beginning to float over it.

"Run guys, we have to make it back to our dimension!" she yelled.

They all ran after it, and Katara decided to look back at the other rift, it was closing by its self. Katara lunged under neither the other dimension just as it was closing up her escape route.

"I'm calling Appa," said Aang pulling out his bison whistle, and blowing on it frantically.

"I hope he gets here quick, we've got company."


Sokuro dodged to the left, and the sword buried itself in between two sheets of metal." You still can't hit me with a sword of your own making, that's pathetic."

"I'll hit, once you are worn down, you can only dodge for so long." He pried the sword out of the metal, and swung it at Sokuro.

He dodged it again." You still haven't figured out what I'm doing? Your stupider than you look, and that insults me."

"What are you doing, aside from dodging every blow?"

"No, no, no, that would take the fun out of this." He took a moment to laugh, but closed his eyes. And at that moment, theflat of the bladehit him in the arm, shattering the bone. Rather than laughing, he screamed in pain, and his arm fell limp at his side.


Crrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaaacccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkk!

Katara looked around at everyone on deck, noone had been hurt, they were just standing around, the Fire nation soldiers in a circle around the three, and the three standing back to back. She then looked at the sword, and the sapphire had a huge jagged crack along it.

Flashback

Don't come back for me even if the Soul Gem cracks

/Flashback

Oh no, thought Katara to herself." Guys we have to hurry, Sokuro is in trouble."

"He said not to come for him, he has to finish this fight on his own," said Sokka, getting ready to attack the soldiers.

"We ready to kick some fire nation ass?" asked Aang abnormally out of character

"Ya, when you are Aang," replied Katara.

Katara and Sokka dropped into a waterbending stance, and bended a tornado of water out of the ocean on to the boat. The water centered over the Fire Nation soldiers, widened, and turned into ice. Aang nodded to Katara and they dropped they're arms. Twenty tons of ice came down on the soldiers, killing them instantly. As the it touched the deck, however, rather than smashing it to pieces, it turned back into water.

"What, I didn't even get to fight," complained Sokka as Appa soared overhead and landed next to the boat.

Aang and Sokka ran and jumped into the basket. Katara lingered, and then said, "Go on with out me, I'll make pillar of water when I'm done. "And with out a second thought, ran back down the staircase and down the hall.


"Hahaha, I have you beat, you can't win. Nothing you can do now will save you."

Blood trickled from his shoulder where pieces of shattered bone had pierced his skin. "You naive fool, that's what I wanted to happen, pain is raw energy, and raw energy can be channeled to do so many things. Something that normally would have killed me, will barely cause me pain now that I have this extra energy." He lifted up his good arm. "Good bye Doran, I 've hated you since the day you killed mom. Ishtaris samico!" yelled Sokuro, a black ball started to form in the palm of his hand. "Sokuro." The ball turned bright yellow, emitted a golden glow, and shot from his hand. Doran flew backwards, as the orb hit him in the chest. The orb was almost all the way through his chest, spilling blood across the floor, then the orb stopped spinning. When that happened, Katara broke down the door; she had frozen the hinges. Sokuro collapsed from exhaustion and his eye's started to darken.

"Don't die on me, i'll keep you safe," he heard her say as he lost consciousness.


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