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The First Fight
She started walking faster, but every time she turned around to see if
they were following her, to her dismay, they were. She broke into a run and
they still followed her making a scene of people being pushed aside for them to
get through. She made it to the end of the dock and found herself on the beach
backed against a large rock wall on the side of a hill. She was trapped with
the figures closing in on her.
"What do you want from me," she questioned them. A figure to her
right stepped forward.
"Where be William Miss. Turner," it asked her, and to her surprise,
she thought that she would have recognized it"s voice, but she didn't"
"Who wants to know," she asked.
No one answered her but they started closing in on her and she could only back
into the rock wall and hope that she could disappear within it.
"Who are you," she exclaimed.
They ignored her question as they had the others and continued to surround her.
There was no hope left.
"Show me who you are," she demanded.
"Leave 'er alone!"
All of the figures turned to look at a man, cloaked in brown, headed towards
them. As he came closer the figures edged out of the way except for two, the
one that had spoken to Elizabeth, and another, whom she assumed the leader. The
same figure that had spoken to her spoke to the man. The leader seemed not to
want to be identified.
"So you have come," it gestured towards the man in brown.
"I have," he replied.
"Are you ready to see your friends suffer," it asked the man.
"Not particularly, because unlike some people, I do not care to be
revealed for my true identity," the man shot at him as he pulled back his
hood to reveal himself; Captain Jack Sparrow.
"Jack," she said in awe. But this word she would learn to stop
saying with such emotion for the figures turned back to her and the leader,
still without saying a word, turned his back to Jack and walking toward
Elizabeth, took out his sword. Jack unsheathed his sword as well in a challenge
to the leader, and the leader stopped dead in his tracks. He turned back around
and advanced at Jack, but Jack was prepared and blocked him easily.
&&(&&(
Meanwhile Will returned from his delivery and opened the door to the
blacksmith's shop. He instantly noticed the quiet, emptiness of the shop
that brought an eerie feel.
"Elizabeth," he called, but no one answered.
He tried again this time shouting, "Elizabeth." Yet again, he
received no answer, and he ran out of the shop as fast as his legs could carry
him.
$&$$#$&
The leader and Jack moved along the beach in a heavy combat. She thought that
the figures seemed occupied enough to allow her to slip away, however, once she
took the chance, they noticed her, and they started to surround her as before.
She was trapped again and she didn't know how she should have handled her
situation so, she screamed. To her surprise, Jack took this as a cue and
backed up into the figures, and they moved. He and the leader still held their
combat until he had his back to Elizabeth.
!#!$()#$$&(&
He approached the docks at full speed, and there he met Commodore and his men.
"Where is your fiance Mr. Turner," Commodore asked him.
"I was hoping that you might have seen her," he answered then as an
after thought he added, "She comes to the docks every day."
Commodore stared at him for a moment before telling Will of what he had heard.
"The figures that go around hooded and cloaked have moved on to the
beach, no doubt with a captive." He and his men pushed their way through
the crowd of people followed by Will.
#$(#&&
The leader unexpectantly stabbed at him, and got his sword stuck in the rock.
He took the opportunity to grab Elizabeth, and they dove out of the way of the
figures and they both fell on the ground.
"Get away from here the first chance you get, find your fiance and stay
with him, I'll come find you," he commanded her. Then he felt a
sharp pain in his back, and turned over, the leader kicked him in the jaw, his
head snapped back and hit the ground. He tasted blood in his mouth, he
couldn't breath, white lights were before him. Two of the figures grabbed
him by both arms and dragged him to his feet, the leader punched him, and he
wobbled.
"Don't come after us, we'll come for you. For those whose
blood is known," the "speaking" figure told him, the leader
backhanded him and everything went black.
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