Hi! Thanks sooooooooo much 4 reading this! It is my 1st serious story (I usually write humor). So yeah thanks & please review!
Temari bit the end of her eraser. She was trying to finish some homework. That's when she heard someone crying. She looked behind her. It was coming from the door. Temari got up, walked over to the door and peaked into the hall. There was no one. She heard it get louder. All the way down the hall, Temari put her ear against the door. That's where it was coming from. She tried the door. It was locked. She got down on her knees and peered through the keyhole. In the room there was a plain bed and plain walls. That's what all of the rooms in this building looked like though. But by the window, a girl with long blonde hair stood with her face in her hands. The girl looked several years younger. Temari was seventeen. The girl didn't even look fifteen yet.
Temari couldn't help but wonder why someone would put a child in a place like that. After a minute Temari decided she must have lost her parents or else why would they put her in an asylum? Suddenly the lock snapped and the door flew open. Temari stumbled to her feet. The girl stood in the doorway no longer crying. She now had a stern bitter face. The way she stood there reminded Temari of herself years ago. Long ago people judged her along with her little brother who was always discarded. So she would wear that same bitter face. What else could she do? Temari lost her parents a long time ago. She looked into the girl's sad face. Her eyes were red and blotted with tears. She also wore a sorry, regretful expression. While the girl stood boldly with her feet squared and hands on her hips, glaring at her. Temari backed away awkwardly.
"What are you crying over?" Temari asked trying to sound as gentle and kind as she could.
But the girl only glared at her more sourly.
"Your not very nice looking when your have such an upset face." Temari remarked.
Then just when she thought the girl's face couldn't get bitterer. It did. Pain, anger, and hatred laced her face. Her cheeks were wet but no tears fell anymore. Her eyes looked sad and far away.
"Tell me" Temari asked, "How does it feel to be alone now?"
The girl opened her mouth to answer. Temari knew that would work. She could tell, that like her, this girl had lost a lot. She didn't think she would ever get over this loss, Temari knew and smiled at her. The girl looked confused. And a bit of her sadness left her face.
"Forgot how to smile huh?" Temari asked.
"No." The girl said beginning to glare again.
"What happened? Why are you in a place like this?"
The girl's look softened and she opened her mouth to answer.