HANDS OFF! A 2/5 story with some 5?-- I don't want to mess it up, where's the suspense?TheKNDare 16 (TND) and in highschool. Has a little 3/4! Rated M for sexual scenes. Please review I want to know ifthis storystinks. AND I don't own Kids Next Door.


"You can't be serious!" yelled Abby, "This stinks!"

Abby's body developed-- BIG TIME... She's 5'9'' and standing tall. She wore her hair out long and curly instead of braided. Abby is still and probably will forever be a tomboy. Her red hat gradually got old and too small for her but she never through it away. Abby always wore sneakers or flat shoes. People often annoy Abby by telling her that she should stop being a tomboy and be a model. But that's not Abby's style. Abby doesn't pay attention to boys that much, she's had a crush once or twice. But little does she know, is that she's very attractive and being hard to get has the boys practically grooling over her.

"This doesn't stink! YOU STINK!" yelled Junior. Since he's 16 and all, the name Hoagie had to go...

Uh oh.. Junior and Abby were going at it now...

Junior had gotten thinner from when he was younger. He grew to be 6'1''- so far. He was fit and very atheltic. There was no doubt that Junior was into the ladies just as much as the ladies were into him. He had brown hair-- it was kind of messy all of the time. Girls thought that it looked sexy. Junior is still into airplanes and still builds alot of things. He's extremely smart and is one of the top students in his class.

8 minutes later...

"Guys, guys, what's going on here! What's the problem!" questioned Nigel in an angry manner as he entered Abby's dark room. T.V. was still on and was the only source of light.

Nigel, still bald as ever, has grown to be 6'0"1/2. Him and Junior had been competing since the 7th grade about who was taller than the other. Junior is obviously winning. Nigel hasn't change a bit. He still wears red and wears the black sun glasses and is still ( can you believe this?) going out with Lizzie. They celebrated their 5 year anniversary about 3 months ago.

"ABBY STINKS THAT'S THE PROBLEM!" yelled Junior.

"I STINK? YOU DA ONE EATIN' CHESSE FRIES N' BLOWIN' UP DA BATHROOM EV'RY 5 MINUTES!" yelled Abby.

"HOW ABOUT YOU BOTH STINK!" yelled Nigel. Both Abby and Junior looked at Nigel in confusion, then to each other, then back at Nigel.

"Now that you've calmed down, WHAT IS THE CAUSE OF ALL THIS COMMOTION THAT, MIGHT I ADD, HAPPENED TO WAKE ME UP 3 AM IN THE MORNING! I'M A BUSY WORKING MAN-" Nigel was interrupted.

"Teenager," implied Junior.

"SHUTUP! WHY WERE YOU TOO FIGHTING? HAVE YOU NO CONCERN FOR ANYONE ELSE IN THIS HOUSE?" yelled Nigel.

"Ah Crud! Nigel! Why da hell ya screamin' so loud! SHUTUP! Have you no concern for anyone else in this house! I was sleeping man!" yelled W.B. Yup, that's what Wally prefers to be called. W.B. is more fit and atheltic than Junior. He grew to be 5'9'' surprisingly.W.B. grew out his hair to above shoulder height. Yeah, he's drop dead gorgeous. He and Kuki has been going out for 9 months now. He got way smarter-- but that just makes him average now.

"Hey! Don't blame me! It was Abby and Hoagie!" yelled Nigel.

"It's JUNIOR," yelled everyone but Nigel.

"JUST SHUTUP! SHUTUP, SHUTUP, SHUTUP!" yelled Nigel.

"NIGEL! YOU SHUTUP! IM TRYING TO GET SOME SLEEP!GRRRR!" Kuki yelled the loudest and she looked sort of scary. Everyone in the room looked terrified and backed away slowly. "Um...o-o-okk-k-k," said Nigel shaking. "Great! Goodnight everyone!" smiled Kuki as she went back to bed. W.B. followed her. I don't think they're going straight to bed...

Kuki was beautiful as always. She had long flowing hair with a happy yet scary personality. She grew to be 5'8''(actually 5'7'' 1/2). She's not into rainbow monkeys publicly ( but she is secretly-- only Abby knows). She's in love with W.B. and knows that he feels that same. Kuki loves fashion. Unlike Abby, she wears make-up, dresses, shirts, and heels. She and Abby are opposites and are the best of friends.

Nigel closed his eyes and took a deep breath, then let it out slowly.

"I just want to know how this all started," he said very calmly.

"I don't know what got into Junior. We were jus' chillin' watchin' da tube and when da show we were watchin' had finished, Junior came outta no where and snatched da remote. He changed it to some stink movie talkin' 'bout, 'Ooh! Yes, yes, yes! I'm definitely watchin' this!' and I was like, "Are you serious? This stinks!' and he came outta nowhere and yelled at me! He was so mad it was like I took food away from him!" said Abby.

Nigel turned to Junior, "Why did you yell at Abby like that?" he asked.

"'The Aviator' is my most favorite movie in the whole entire world! My whole life is based on that movie! Her saying that movie stinks was like someone saying that I stink and that I'm no good! It felt like someone just shot me in my head three times. It's like someone disrespecting the one thing or one person that you love to death and I wasn't about to sit back and let that happen."

Abby turned to Junior and stared at him. Junior wouldn't look at her, he continued looking at Nigel.

"Well now that both of you know what each of you has done wrong, please settle this now. I'm going to bed," and with that Nigel was gone and he left Abby and Junior alone.

It was really quiet for 5 minutes. "I didn't mean to crush your soul. I'm sorry," Abby managed to say.

Junior chuckled, "You didn't crush my soul and I'm sorry that I reacted that way, you have the right to have your own opinion."

"No, I shoulda neva said that it stunk especially because it was 'bout airplanes and flying and stuff," said Abby.

"No, you're not into airplanes and you have your own opinion, I should have never yelled at you like that," said Junior.

"No, but- ahh!" Abby accidentally tripped over something hard on the floor, the room was too dark to recognize it.

"Woah!" yelled Junior as Abby fell right onto him. He held her tight so that both of them wouldn't hit the ground. Abby was now in his arms. She looked up at him and he looked back at her. The darkness of the room and having Abby in his arms had Junior's hormones racing. Should he kiss her? Would she beat the crud out of him? They just continued to stare at each other until Junior couldn't take it anymore. Junior cautiously leaned in and kissed her.

Abby was surprised, she couldn't think at all. She was just enjoying the feeling of his soft lips pressing against hers. Suddenly a sensation shot throughout her body. Junior pushed his tongue into her mouth. Abby then put her arms around his neck. Junior's hormones were going wild when Abby's breasts tickled him on his chest. While their tongues were battling, Junior's hand moved onto Abby's ass. They both began moaning a little. Soon enough they both came to their senses.

Junior's thoughts: "Wait a second... I'm making out with Abby? What if she thinks I'm taking advantage?"

Abby's thoughts: "Hol up... what da hell am I doin'?"

They both broke away quickly simulteanously, as if it were planned. They looked at each other uncomfortablely.

"Um, what jus' happened?" asked Abby unsure of it herself.

"Um, I don't know... I guess we were just in the heat of the moment," said Junior nervously.

"Oh ok, makes sense... then I guess we should act like this never happened," said Abby.

"Yea.. ok..I'm ok with that," said Junior.


That was the end of chapter 1. I hoped you liked it. Please excuse the way they were acting through out this chapter...they're dumb.. Please review! Tell me did it stink? Was it ok?