Old Fiat (nFr)
To the reviewers: I hope to put in more of the Taka/Yumiko, they are good together I agree and Shusuke would be furious about it. Lol. Anyway, there will be Original Characters. Kunimitsu's Belgian girl… Linda Fiez (I know Fiez is a name from Northern France but whatever… she could be Walloon you know). Actually she probably will be Walloon because I don't speak a word of vlaams! Lol.
Ahotep: j'aime aussi la scène avec Kaidoh/Tomoka, c'est un peu horrible. Lol. Beaucoup des corrections! Lol, désolé encore. :)
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Chapter Four:
'Kaido! Right here now!' Kunimitsu looked like he was going to blow.
'Captain,' Kaoru came running over. 'May I please ask you why you have asked me over here?'
'You may,' he frowned. 'Echizen tells me you've been attempting… disreputable actions with young miss Tomoka.'
'It's a damn lie!' said Kaoru loudly. 'All I did was try and ask her out!'
Tezuka looked furious. 'You expect me to believe that tripe when Echizen and Tomoka have both already sworn that's what you were doing! You're a fool!'
'Echizen's a liar! Tomoka's weird!'
'Damn your impertinence! 300 laps Kaido, around the court!'
'But sir that'll take all practise!'
'I don't care. Your hydration will be Inui's new Super Dehydrant Juice. You'll make up for the practise you miss today later with a private coach, which you'll pay for. If you argue with me about this you're off the team for good. I do not appreciate this kind of behaviour from my regulars, Kaido, you should know that.' Kunimitsu walked off.
–1.30 months ago–
'Sakuno.'
'Ah! Oh, hi Ryoma-san,' she blushed. 'How was practise?'
'It was fine… Tezuka wants the regulars to find girlfriends,' He could feel his palms sweating, this was so weird. 'So will you be my girlfriend.'
'Erm, okay,' she smiled shyly.
'But I just want you to know that I'm not going out with you for any reason other than the tennis club! I don't like you or anything; all we're going to do on our dates is play tennis! None of that stupid mushy stuff! I hate that and if you try it then… I dunno, something bad will probably happen,' he sighed.
He had said it so fast that she could barely understand what he was saying. 'Okay,' she said, a little disappointed.
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'Hello!' said Shusuke. Oh yeh, this would be a great alliance, he could steal team secrets and have a hot date! 'How're you doing this evening?'
'Fine…?' said the ladies' Hyotei tennis team captain. 'What are you doing here?'
'Oh, just hanging,' he grinned. 'I'm friends with some of the people on the cricket team here. I just noticed how good you are at tennis, are you one of the starters?'
'…yes? I'm the captain,' she had no idea what the hell this short guy wearing a naval jumper and oxford bags was doing here. 'why?'
'Captain! Really? You are quite good, I was admiring you with the cricket team, you're the perfect lady in everyway,' he smiled.
'Thank you,' she rolled her eyes at the vice captain.
'Do you think you'd like to go the cinema with me sometime?' he opened his eyes for a moment to reveal icy-blue irises.
'Sure, what film?'
'Wind that Shakes the Barley, version originale at the local art cinema with subtitles in Japanese. 20h30, 8pm, on Saturday night, what say you?'
'Yeh, okay, I'll see there.'
'See you!' he waved good-bye. Oh yeh, thought he. I'm too sexy for my shirt, so sexy that it hurts… well, actually too cute. Too cute for my boots, so cute that… something…
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Old Fiat (nFr) on a hot (well humid) day here!
I just got back from a long cycle ride… very nice though.
Please tell me what you thought and what you think I should write next!
-Old Fiat (nFr)