Old Fiat (nFr)
To the reviewers:
Yaelifivefour: yes, so do I. He's kind of amusing when he's unhappy. Well, Inui you may discover in this chapter has a quite interesting… thing… going… on. Yes. Oishi, yes, he does have a lot of options, however he may be too too nice to ask out a girl just for the team. … Or does he already have crush? Kaido… I'm going to postpone this as long as possi, but probably in this chapter… lol.
Merissala: I am very very sorry! He didn't seem that ooc to me but I'm not very good with that kind of thing. I think the last bit, the last scene, mit taka/yumiko, was understandable though. Because Shusuke's very protective (of those close to him) and sometimes one can't be cool all the time. I know because I am one of those creepy people who doesn't like to show emotion. Anyway, please enjoy and I am exceptionally sorry about the ooc-ness… I did not intend it to be such… I didn't even know it was… :(
To Ahotep: êtes-vous? (je pense c'est correct…). Je continuerai avec Taka/Yumiko. :)
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Chapter Seven:
Shusuke just sat there in his room. He felt betrayed by Taka…this wasn't normal. Yumiko had been a jerk… telling him to go away and everything. He turned to the computer.
Tennisboy007: shushu where r u?
He sighed and typed a quick reply:
Fashion4ever: hell
He took out his photo album and looked at some pictures of Yuta, Kunimitsu, and him at the Cap Gris Nez in France.
Tennisboy007: ive bn writing u all nite, wats wrong?
Fashion4ever: nothing much, yumiko n taka were kissing, so I lost it, I h8 dis plan dat ryuzaki cooked up, im not gay, neither r u, we no dat so y do we need 2 prove it 2 t rest of t world?
Tennisboy007: I dunno, do u hav a gf yet?
Fashion4ever: yeh, but im not really sure about her yet.
Tennisboy007: mayb ppl wud think ur less gay if u changed ur screenname lol
Fashion4ever: jerk
Fashion4ever: it wuz just a dumb party anyway, I don't really care if ppl think im gay or not, I kno im not, u kno ur not, init dat enuff?
Tennisboy007: I guess not. w/e tho, I don't really care dat much
Fashion4ever: u don't hav an older sis n lech traitorous m8s
Fashion4ever: also u already had a gf
Foxyeurochick: hello kuni!
Tennisboy007: Linda!
Foxyeurochick: whos fashion4ever?
Fashion4ever: me
Foxyeurochick: no duh, but who the hell r u?
Tennisboy007: hes just 1 of me m8s
Tennisboy007: also called 'shushu'
Foxyeurochick: … is shushu a girl?
Tennisboy007: yes, jk.
Fashion4ever: no.. grr.. im a boy shushushusuke
Foxyeurochick: lol, soz, jus wit dat screenname I thought u were a girl
Tennisboy007: lol
Fashion4ever: u ppl r mean! Jk, r u kuni-chan's Belgian?
Foxyeurochick: im his gf
Fashion4ever: o, cool, well could u go away? Kuni n I r having a private discussion
Tennisboy007: shushu! Let her stay!
Fashion4ever: no
Foxyeurochick: bout wat?
Tennisboy007: nothing
Tennisboy007: it dusnt mattr
Fashion4ever: wtf?
Tennisboy007: go away shushu
Fashion4ever: :p y should I?
Tennisboy007: b/c I say so.
Fashion4ever: w/e, laterz –shushu
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'Must find date for tonight or Momo will destroy me,' Kaoru looked at the address in his hand. He was running quickly but suddenly stopped as he arrived at the correct house.
He rang the doorbell once and waited until a pretty blonde girl answered the door.
She looked at him for a few moments then said. 'Oh! You're Kaido from ballet class! Do you want to come inside?'
'No!' Kaido said, loudly. 'I want to ask you on a date!'
'Why?' she looked taken-aback.
'Because,' he stopped, was this what had frightened Tomoka? He decided to use more words. 'I think it is the right time to express to you my deep, undying affection for you and only you.'
'Ha-ha!' she laughed. She turned to the inside. 'Simon! Come check this out!' A tall 15 year old (or around there) boy came over. He was much stronger and more attractive than Kaoru. 'Will you say that again?'
'Uh,' Kaoru just stood there and stared at Simon. 'Why do you want me to repeat it?'
'Because it's hysterical!' she continued to laugh. Kaoru continued to stand there. 'Fine,' she said. 'If you won't repeat it I will.' She told this boy Simon what Kaoru had said. They both started laughing.
'Sorry, you're too late!' Simon said through laughing. 'I've already confessed, no expressed, my deep, undying affection for her!' he nearly fell over from laughing.
Kaoru's face turned a deep scarlet and his eyes filled up with water.
'Oh! He's starting to cry!' Simon laughed harder.
Kaoru ran off. This was terrible, now he couldn't show Momo and he couldn't go back to ballet. He decided to go down to the water where he practised his swings. He saw a few small children playing there.
'Bugger off, all of you!' he screamed and they ran away. He sat down. Now he couldn't go to Kawamura Sushi and Momo would make fun of him because of his lack of 'animal magnetism' or whatever they call it. I wish I didn't suck so bad. He threw a rock in.
'Ow!'
Kaoru looked up. Sadaharu Inui emerged from the water rubbing a spot on the back of his head where Kaoru assumed the rock had hit. 'Are you okay Inui-senpai?' he ran down.
'I'm fine,' he looked at Kaoru whose face was still red and his eyes still wet. 'What's happened?'
'Nothing,' Kaoru turned away. 'Why are you snorkeling in such shallow water?'
'For fun,' Inui raised an eyebrow. 'What's happened?'
'I told you nothing!' yelled Kaoru.
Inui grabbed his wrists and pulled him over to the shore. 'This is a girl problem isn't it?'
'What do you mean girl problem?' Kaoru said, annoyed. 'I'm not a girl so why would I have girl problems?'
'No, I mean relationship troubles?' Inui wasn't laughing. Which was a total relief to Kaoru.
So he decided to tell Sadaharu all about Tomoka's stupid lie and the girl from ballet and Simon.
'Oh my,' said Inui, when he had finished. 'How very unfortunate for you.'
'Quite,' Kaoru wiped his nose on his wrist. 'Have you any advice? If I do more crunches will I get more dates?'
'No,' he looked a bit sad. 'Unfortunately I can't just give you different training and girls will like you. However, I have been doing some research on your part.'
'What do you mean?'
'I mean I know the chances you have with all your crushes,' Inui pulled an airtight plastic bag out of his pocket, opened it and took out his data notebook, which he proceeded to open. 'With Tomoka there was a 25 percent chance that she would date you, and if she did it would be to get closer to Ryoma-kohai. With this girl you just asked out, I believe her named is Mina, correct?' Kaoru nodded. 'There was a .5 percent chance of success. She's already dating someone else, and she's a jerk.' He pushed his glasses up his nose. 'But with the other one you like, Anastasiya, from ballet, you have a 95.5 percent chance of success.'
'She said that she had a crush on the instructor,' Kaoru looked at his wet shoes. 'Thanks anyway though, Inui.'
'She lied,' Inui laughed. 'She was trying to get you jealous.'
'She got her wish,' Kaoru sneered. 'So I should try her?'
'Yes,' Inui shut the data notebook.
'Who's your girlfriend?'
'I don't have a girlfriend,' Sadaharu's glasses flashed. 'I'm betrothed.'
'What?'
'Yes, to a greek girl,' he grinned broadly. 'That's why I don't have to bother with any of this dating stuff. I like her enough, she likes me fine, and I reckon we'll be fine together when we're older.'
'You're damn lucky.'
'Go ask Anastasiya out,' He stood up and replaced the data notebook in the bag. 'I need to go back to snorkeling.' He walked into the water and went under.
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Old Fiat (nFr) here!
Sorry this was long too. I did not mean it to be such. I'm guessing it was not very good either, so/so dialogue and only 2.5 scenes. I apologise.
Please read and review! I like them ever so much as I said before. :)
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