By Old Fiat nFr
To the reviewers: I'm sorry about the grammar mistakes! English is my first language incase anyone was wandering about that. Lol, sorry! Yaelifivefour: may I ask what your first language is? Actually, the one thing that gave you away (not really, but I kind of guessed) was you are so polite! It's very nice. I like it. :)
To Ahotep: Oui, c'est une désastre. Vraiment? J'aime beaucoup des grandes villes. Parce-que (probable) j'ai habit de la campangne pour toute de ma existance. Sonya EST la fiancée de Inui. Lol.
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Chapter Ten:
Anastasiya picked up her ringing mobile. 'Hello? Momo is that you?'
'Yes, how are you doing? Kaido's not there is he?'
'No, what did you want to tell me?'
'Erm, you might not like to hear this…'
'Momo, I seriously doubt Kaido could have done anything nasty. He's really a sweet guy. Honestly, I think you must've just got him on a bad day when you decided to hate him.'
'Anastasiya…?' Momo told him about what had 'happened' with Tomoka.
'Oh! You're lying! Kaido would never do something like that! He's a gentleman!'
'Yeh, sure he is.'
'You're wrong Momo! He's a good boy!' Anastasiya thrust the phone onto the receiver and ran upstairs.
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KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: Oishi! U need a gurl. Lol
CockADoodleDoo: I wish u hadn chosen my screenname eiji.
KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: … do u already hav a gf? Lol
CockADoodleDoo: ma be. Y do u need 2 no?
KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: I cud get u 1 u no!
CockADoodleDoo: no eiji, I don want u 2 get me 1.
KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: lol, u do need 1! Dont worry oishi! Ill get u a very foxy 1. lol
CockADoodleDoo: eiji I already hav a gf! Will u stop bothering me about it pleez?
KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: ooooo, can I meet her?
CockADoodleDoo: ma b l8r, ive to go now. Me lil sis is screeming aboot barbis, toodles.
KikumaruBeamDanceMachine: can I play?
CockADoodleDoo: hha, not rite now.
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When Shusuke and his daddy got home Shusuke ran up to talk to Yumiko.
'Yumiko, I need to talk to you.'
'Oh? Please don't bother me about Taka. He's my boyfriend, it's not changing,' she looked annoyed as Shusuke walked into her room.
'Nee-san, it's just very hard for me with you dating him. Because he's one of my friends and when he's dating my sister it naturally makes me angry and-
'Oh wait; "anger" is your natural reaction? You know Shusuke this is why Yuta left. You never ever understood that there's a point when people need to live there own lives and you ought to leave them alone!'
'Yumiko, I–'
'You what? You're sorry that you've made sure that Yuta "felt at home" whereever he was? What do you call that?' she looked disgusted.
'Fraternal love.'
Yumiko gave a shrill laugh. 'Don't be pathetic Shusuke! Taka told me about this whole dating thing. You are going to FAIL! You know why? Because you're emotionally detached from everyone else!' She shoved Shusuke out of the room and slammed the door.
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'So, how'd it go?' Hazu sat down on Kaoru's bed.
'How'd what go?' the Viper was happy to see Hazu.
'Your date. Your girlfriend called a while ago to ask if you had gotten home or not. We talked for a bit. Is it that girl you fancied from ballet?'
'Yes,' Kaoru smiled. 'It was very nice. We ate dinner and then I walked her home.'
'Did you kiss her,' Hazu laughed.
'No,' Kaoru blushed. 'I didn't think to.'
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Hello! This is Old Fiat N.Fr!
I hope that you have liked this chapter. It's brought me much joy to write more in it. I'm sorry it's short but I rather felt like taking a break for a moment. I have a bunch of my mates coming over in a few days so I shall probably not have much time to write but I shall try me best!
Does anyone else think that Wayne Rooney looks like a potato? He's a good footballer and all that but he does look like a potato.
Please review and tell me what you thought of the chapter and what you think should happen!
-Old Fiat nFr