Just want to clear things up.
Lately I've been getting lots of replies for my story is this wrong or right. Yeah I was pleased about all the replies but then when I read them they were good but something was stopping them from being the perfect reviews.
Cheyenne: Hi I'm Cheyenne. I gave Zoey some info on how to make her story a bit more…unusual. I bet some of you guys out there have mums who collect old newspapers, well we're both sharing the same problem.
Piles of newspaper on the floor, shesh. What do you need them for? Well I was looking through one of the newspapers and you know those little cartoon strips, yeah well I read them and caught site of something that might help my pal, pal with her story.
It wasn't a very old newspaper. But anyway the strip was about a man and guy and wife. The wife finds him kissing someone in the closet, so she slaps all the girls he knows.
Then he tells the guy that he's seeing someone else or something like that. Then the guy has a fight and the man tries to whore his way out of the situation by kissing him on the nose. So they leave him to die in the closet.
Me: Thank you Cheyenne for clearing this up for me. So as you can see this is nothing to do with JackSpicer6 or something (sorry if I got your name wrong.)
But thanks for the replies and hopefully now I won't have any more stuff to do with that subject.
Thanks for reading my story.
Signed Zoey
P.S BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!