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When She Came: Chapter 4:
Ren's POV:
"Well, well," I said. "Look at this. It's Ace and his little snakes. Opps…….I mean Cobras."
Chris laughed and Eyeball punched him.
"HEY!" I ran up to Eyeball and kicked him.
"Don't hurt Chris!"
Ace and the Cobras laughed.
"Well, isn't that so cute," Ace said. "My cousin and Eyeball's brother. Who knew?"
That's it! I was getting angry. Who does Ace think he is? He comes and bothers me and my friends. Well, I wasn't gonna let him and his buddies beat the crap out of Chris and me. Not if I had anything to do with it.
"You know what Ace? You and your little gang of shits ain't gonna touch me and Chris."
Ace laughed. "Really? Well you got it wrong, cuz. We are gonnabeat the shit out of you and there ain't nothin' you can do."
"Oh yeah," I said. "Not if I have anything to do with it."
I ran and tackled Ace to the ground. I was so angry. I just kept punching him. That's when the fight went to hell. Eyeball and Chris were completely killing each other and Billy and Charlie were trying to get me off of Ace and after a while, they did.
"Let go of me," I was yelling.
Billy and Charlie were holding my arms. Ace got up and was smiling an evil smile at me. Eyeball had knocked Chris out and he was lying under the tree.
"Let me go Ace!"
"No!" Ace laughed. "You know I can knock you out in one shot, right? And if you say one more word, I will."
"One word," I said. "I'm sorry. I've gotta say three. Go….screw.…yourself"
It all happened so fast. In two seconds, Ace hit me and everything went black.
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