Lol, yes so I know this story is really sucky so I am open to suggestions to make it rock. Please review cuz I'm losing hope on this story. Its just not good…..
"Yes!" Melanie exclaimed and punched her fist into the air. "That was awesome, nice job!" Adrianna had just haltered Popcorn correctly after becoming friends with him. She high-fived Jen, her pair, and said "At this rate she could ride him soon, don't cha think?"
Jen nodded.
"Do they ride in the corral or out 'there'?" Melanie said and pointed to the playa with a giggle.
"Usually just in the corral but if they are good we can go out 'there'" She said copying Melanie's gesture with a laugh. It had been a long day. IT was about 7, their last session for the day. Sam and Jake were working together with Victoria, who was still trying to halter Penny.
"What should we have them do now?" Melanie asked.
"Lead the horse around I guess." Jen said, then told Adrianna to walk a couple laps with him. Jake walked over and said,
"Well Vicky's done so I guess they're done for the day, so we're gonna go." He eyed Melanie, telling her to go and get Chi p so they could scram. Melanie sighed, rolled her eyes and went to go get Chip.
"How….is she nice or-" Jake asked, but was cut off my Jen's laughter.
"She's fine, lots more fun that you. Now go, looks like she's almost done, you have to go and catch up."
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Melanie had trouble sleeping. She knew it was only a matter of time before her new family started asking her questions she couldn't answer and when that happened, she didn't know what she'd do. Telling the truth would only bring more questions she DIDN'T know the answers to.
Yeah, its really short, but no one ever reviews and no one likes it so I guess you guys have to deal. Unless you guys show more intrest I'm gonna stop this story, even though I have an idea.