SASTUOk first the Inuyasha series takes place in Japan not China, and Hong Kong is in China so if she is visting Hong Kong she's to far away to be seeing Kagome.
Secondly for the love of all that is good and decent in this world get a beta reader, or at least use a spell checker! You'r grammer needs lots and lots of work.
Finaly, your charater is a Mary Sue, and that isn't a good thing. It means she has no real charater, flaws, or any thing at all. She's just like all the other Sues. I strongly sugest you find some one to help you with turning her in to a good, well thought out OC.
yea that is your letter kk?
1stKAGOME'S cousin not Kagome! stupid! and how exactly is she too far she came in by airplane!
2nd Who gives a shit if I mess up! Who died and made you the computer.
yea and finallywhat the hell is a Mary Sue! I dont care what losers like you say! yea and I strongly sugest that if you dont like the fucking story then dont read it! ok? yea...anything else?
and now if anyone else wants to complain about my story then just dont read it,it is that easy.Just exit out of the fucking page!