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Abhijeet took the glass and gulped water in one go. After coming out from shock he said –
Tum yahan?
Daya – Han… main yahan… subeh grocery store pe tumhari aawaz suni thi… bs phunch gya ghar.
Daya sat on the sofa and signalled him to sit through eyes only. He sat there not knowing what to say or ask. For some moments there was complete silence. Abhijeet was waiting for him to start the conversation while Daya was waiting for Abhijeet to say something. When he seeing Daya so much calm and silent he himself started the conversation.
Abhijeet (fidgeting with his fingers, low tone) – Tumne mujhe maaf kr diya?
Daya (calmly) – Kis liye?
Abhijeet turned his head down but didn't say anything. Daya looked at him and said in calm voice –
Shreya ko letter na dene ke liye ya phir meri ankho mein dekh kr jhooth bolne ke liye ya phir bina kuch btaye sb kuch chod kr ek stupid sa email likh kr bhag jaane ke liye.
Shreya ko letter na dene ke liye toh main kbhi tumse naraaz nhi tha… tumhi ne kaha tha na k koi majboori h jiski vajeh se tum mujhe kuch nhi bta skte…naraaz tha toh is baat ke liye k tumne meri ankhon mein dekh kr jhooth bola tha… Han meri khushi ke liye hi sahi… pr bola toh tha na...
He stood up and went near the open window turning his back towards Abhijeet and continued in same tone –
Yaad h Boss… jb mujhe goli lgi thi aur main kidnapped tha… mere man mein ek hi khyaal tha k tum kaise hoge… kahin meri tareh tum bhi un logon k changul mein toh nhi phas gye… yaad h maine bureau mein phone kiya tha (giraftaar series) jb tumhari aawaz phone pr suni na… mere dil ko sukoon aagya k tum sahi salamat ho… tum theek ho toh mujhe bhi kuch nhi hoga… mera sara gussa usi ek pal mein nikal gya tha… saari narazgi khtm hogyi thi… jb tum mujhe dhondhne aaye the… jis tareh se tum mera naam lekr chillaye the… tumhari tadap mujhe mehsoos hui thi… voh log us waqt mujhe wahan se le ja rhe the… tumhari aawaz maine suni thi pr main jawaab nhi de paya tha… rescue hone baad main mauka dhondh rha tha tumse baat krne ka… tumse maafi mangne ka… apni galti pr bhut pachtawa tha mujhe… maine apni 15 saal ki pkki dosti kuch mahino ke ek kache rishte ke liye daanw pr lga di… pehli bar samajh nhi aa rha tha k tumhe kaise mnaunga… kaise tumse maafi mangu… aur phir tum chale gye bina kuch kahe… Han is baat se naraaz hun main Abhi.
Abhijeet (low tone) – Mere pass kuch nhi tha kehne ke liye…
The two fell silent after that.
Abhijeet – Sb log kaise h?
Daya – Tumhe yaad kr rhe h… hr roz yhi dua krte h k unke Abhijeet sir laut aaye.
Abhijeet (stood up) – Ye mumkin nhi h Daya.
Daya (shocked) – Kyu mumkin nhi h Abhijeet? Sb log sharminda h… maafi mangna chahte h tumse… Abhi 1 saal hogya h yr… ab wapas chlo.
Abhijeet (helpless tone while moving away) – Daya
Daya – Kya Daya… tum btao kya problem h?
Abhijeet – Bhut der hogyi h yr… ab kya wapas jana
Daya – Toh phir kyu gye the sb ko chod kr han… kyu nhi baat ki ek bar bhi? Ek bar bhi nhi socha kisi ka?
Abhijeet (frustrated tone) – Han nahi socha kisi ka maine… kuch nhi socha… Main us halat mein hi nhi tha k main kuch soch pata… bs bhag jana chahta tha wahan se… toh bhag gya… nhi thi meri haalat k main kuch bhi sochta ya kisi se bhi baat krta.
Daya – Janta hun… dekha tha maine (referring to Abhijeet's living room cctv video…chapter 1)
Abhijeet (same tone) – Toh kyu pooch rhe ho… jb tamasha dekha tha toh kya poochna baaki h.
Daya – Kyunki tumne ek bar bhi mujhse baat krne ki nhi sochi…
Abhijeet (loud tone) – Kyu sochta… kaise sochta tumse baat krne ka… kis haq se tumse baat krne aata main Daya… tumne toh collegue keh kr saare haq khud hi wapas liye the na… Toh phir konsa haq reh gya tha mere pass… Jahan main khada hota tha wahan se tum muh mod kr chle jaate the… sb log ese taras bhri nigahon se dekhte the mujhe…
Daya came forward turned Abhijeet towards himself hugged him tightly for some moments and then said in a moist tone –
Ab toh haq hai na…Maaf krde na yr… andha hogya tha main… nhi dekh paya k apni pkki yaari ko ek kache rishte ki vajeh se tod rha hun… is baat ko maan hi nhi paya k tum bhi toh ek insaan ho jisse galti ho skti h… (tears falling) mere chehre pe ek muskaan laane ke liye tumne ek jhooth kya bol diya… main toh usee hi pakad ke baith gya… bhool gya tha k tumhari ya meri koi bhi galti hamari dosti se bdi nhi ho skti h… please yr maaf krde…
Abhijeet too hugged him tightly and let his tears fall on his best friend's shoulder. Both detached from this ever soothing hug and Daya held his hands and made him sit on sofa. He softly removed his tears and again held his hands not wanting to leave again and said –
Ek saal Abhi… ek saal se tumhe dhundh rha hun… Kitne khabri lgaye h… maaji ke ghar ke paas bhi ek khabri lgaya… kabhi kisi investigation ke liye doosre shahr gaya… kabhi main toh kabhi team mein se koi hr shahr mein tumhari talash ki h humne… hr waqt hme ye aas hoti thi k ab bureau ka darwaja khulega tum andar aaoge… ab phone ki ghanti bajegi phone uthayenge toh tum hoge… kabhi bureau aane mein late ho jate ya jldi aa jate toh lgta ab tum apne desk pr baithe miloge sbse… hmesha ki tareh.. hr raat voh aas tut jati… kitni bar toh Acp sir case ke beech mein tumhara naam le lete h… aaj tkk tumhara naam lete h… kehte h Abhijeet is aadmi ki kundli nikalo… Abhijeet isse sach tum uglwayo… phir khud hi chup ho jaate… hme kaam kro keh ke apne cabin mein chle jaate.
Salunkhe sir saamne se kuch nhi kehte… lekin jb bhi Acp sir hmare saath forensic lab jaate toh unse ankho hi ankho mein ishara krke poochte h k kuch pta chla… phir Acp sir ki ankhon ki udaasi dekh kr nazre nichi kr lete h… Apna Freddy usne bhi kya nhi kiya tumhe dhondhne ke liye… jb tum gye the 2 din tkk mere sath idhar udhar hr jageh tumhe dhundhta rha…aaj tkk Acp sir aur Salunkhe sir se naraaz h… aur khudse bhi… kehta h k main sir ka saath nhi de paya… agr maine hi sir ka saath diya hota toh aaj sir hmare saath hote… (laughing in tears) ab toh aatmao ki bhi baaten nhi krta. Team bhi kuch saamne se nhi kehti… lekin kabhi kbhar jb mauka mile… (he told him Rajat was incident)
While Daya was saying all this in teary voice… Abhijeet was also in tears. Someohow Daya's words were healing his wounds, his injured heart. Daya continued again –
Kya ek bar bhi tumhe hmari yaad nhi aayi Abhi… kabhi nhi socha wapas aane ka… tumhare dil ko hmari tadap ki aawaz nhi sunayi di… jawab do yr… Aaj kehdo jo bhi tumhare dil mein h yr… aaj kuch mt rkho… jo bhi apne dost se us waqt nhi keh paye aaj keh daalo Abhi… bolo…
Abhijeet – Kya jawab du yr… Us case ke baad mera dam ghut rha tha wahan… us din jb bureau gya toh kisi se nazre nhi mila paya… na team se na Acp sir se… Han janta hun k nazre voh churate h jo galti krte h… maine koi galti nhi ki thi… lekin fir bhi I felt so humiliated… (his voice choked) main apni nazre tkk nhi utha paya jb tkk bureau mein rha… kisi ki taraf dekhna bhi bojh lg rha tha… Acp sir ke saamne bhi nhi aana chahta tha main… tumhara dil pehle hi dukha chuka tha main… bs akela pd gya tha yr main… bhut akela kuch samajh nhi aaya… kuch socha bhi nhi… meri haalat hi nhi thi kuch bhi sochne ki… bs jo man mein kr liya…
Mujhe DIG sir ne kuch din pehle (before giraftaar series) ek undercover mission assign kiya tha… maine voh accept kr liya aur chla gya…mission bhut risky tha… socha tha k isse zinda nhi lautunga… ya phir shayd kuch din door rehne se ye takleef km ho jaye… lekin dekhte -2 ek saal beet gya… sb kuch peeche choot gya… jante ho Daya zindagi mein kbhi mujhe itna akelapan nhi lga… jitna us waqt lga tha…
Daya stood up from his sofa sat beside him pulled him in a strong side hug and said – Ab akele nhi ho. Ab kabhi akela nhi pdne dunga main tumhe.
Abhijeet again hugged him and cried on his shoulder like shedding all the pain away. His wounds were healing. His emptyness was filling with life again. The shine in his eyes and voice is coming back. The magical touch of a best frind is working. After seperating from the ever loving ever comforting hug, he asked –
Kuch khaoge?
Daya (smiled) – Tumhare haath ka khana main na khau ye ho skta h kya?
Abhijeet – Bnata hun kuch…
Daya – Main bhi help krunga… saath mil ke bnate h kuch… phir saath baith k khayenge.
Abhijeet nodded. Both started cooking together while Abhijeet was telling him about the mission he just completed. They had their dinner together. After that they went to the terrace with hot coffee. They chatted for hours and then came downstairs and went to their rooms to sleep. After confirming Abhijeet's sleep, Daya came to his room locked it and secretely called Acp sir.
On Call –
Hello!... Daya itni raat gye… tum theek ho na… sb theek h wahan?
Daya (looked at the clock showing 2:47 AM so said in embarassed tone) – I am sorry sir… maine waqt dekha hi nhi.
Acp Pradyuman (sensing something in his voice said in a soft tone) – It's Ok Daya… kaho kya baat h.
Daya (moist tone) – Voh mil gya h Sir.
Acp Pradyuman (shocked and happy tone) – KYA!
Daya – Han sir… voh Pune mein h.
Acp Pradyuman (eager tone) – Daya voh theek h na?
Daya – Han sir… theek h voh.
Acp Pradyuman (relaxed tone) – Thank God!
Daya narrated him about the mission given to him by DIG sir, how he found him. Acp Pradyuman said –
Daya hum log subeh aate h wahan… tum usee kuch nhi btana… aur kahin jaane bhi nhi dena.
Daya (stopping him) – Sir!
Acp Pradyuman – Han Daya… kya baat h?
Daya – Sir aap please usse pyar se deal kriyega… jb main yahan aaya toh socha tha k bhut gussa krunga us pr… lekin main usee dekhte hi smjh gya k voh ab bhi andar se utna hi toota hua h jitna us waqt tha… uske gham bhre nhi h sir… itne lambe waqt ki tanhai ne shayd aur gehre kr diye h… main usee is haal mein dekhkr us pr gussa kr hi nhi paya.
Acp Pradyuman - Chinta mt kro Daya aur so jao ab... kll sb theek hoga.
Daya agreed and after wishing him good night he slept. Next morning at 7AM Daya could be seen sitting in the living room reading a newspaper while Abhijeet went to get fresh. Suddenly door bell rang. Knowing who could be the visitor, Daya smilingly opened the door. Team came inside with happy faces and moist eyes. Hearing the door bell Abhijeet too came outside and got shocked to see the whole team waiting for him. Though he expected them to be here but not this soon. He glared at Daya. But Daya hid his eyes. Acp came forward and stood in front of Abhijeet. He stared directly in his eyes while Abhijeet just gazed down. Next thing was so unexpected for him. Acp hugged him tightly with a teary whisper –
Abhijeet!
Abhijeet never imagined he would hug him. He was still in shock that he didn't hug him back. But Acp didn't let him go. Instead two tear drops fell on Abhijeet's shoulder. Realising this Abhijeet's eyes turned teary too. Without wasting another moment he too hugged him and let his tear fall. Then he remembered all that happened and he loosened the hug. Acp too seperated from hug and looked at him. Abhijeet asked while composing himself and turning his gaze away –
Aap sab yahan?
Acp Pradyuman – Ab bhi pooch rhe ho… kitna dhundha h humne tumhe Abhijeet. Ab tum hmare saath wapas chloge.
Abhijeet (angry voice) – Lekin kyu? Acha hi tha na… Aapne toh galti ki thi mujhe zimmedari de ke… maine sudhar di aapki galti… ab kyu firse galti dohrana chahte h aap.
Acp Pradyuman (moist tone) – Han galti ki thi… (Abhijeet shocked) Tumhe jaane dene ki galti… ab usee sudharne aaya hun. Tumhe wapas le jakr. Abhijeet main janta hun k mujhse bhut badi galti hui thi… maine tumhare dil ko thes phunchai… balki tumhara dil toda hum sbne… mujhe andaza h is baat ka.
Abhijeet (angry and loud) – Jhooth! Koi andaza nhi h aapko. Aapki yadasht nhi gyi thi… Aap pr apne hi dost pr goli chlane ka ilzaam nhi lga tha… aapko ek junior officer ne bhare restaurent mein sbke saamne arrest nhi kiya tha… yadasht jaane ke taane apko nhi sunne pade the sir…Voh dart lgne ke baad dhundhli nazro ladkhadate kadmo aur sar dard ke saath aapko akele apni begunahi ka saboot nhi dhundhna pda tha… (Acp turned his head down and closed his eyes) aap kuch nhi smjhte… kbhi smjh hi nhi skte… jo humiliation maine face hi k… apne hi saathiyon ke beech sar jhuka ke hathkadi pehn khade nhi rehna pda aapko. (Team looked at him in pain) Aapko DCP ne yadasht ke liye injection aur electric shocks lene ko nhi kaha tha… Voh DCP… (loudly) you don't give a damn about him sir… But I do… I do care what my senior has to say about me. Aapko kalank aur gandi machli jaise shabdon se nhi nawaza gya tha… ye jo shabad mujhe inaam mein mile h na sir… yadasht chli jaye phir se toh kya kahen… vrna main ye sb marte dam tkk nhi bhool skta… kabhi nhi.
Salunkhe (in guilty tone) – Abhijeet… main bhut sharminda hun apne kiye pr.
Abhijeet (sarcastic tone) – Sirf tb tkk jb tkk koi naya ilzaam mere sar nhi lgta.
Salunkhe (same tone) – Nhi Abhijeet esa bilkul nhi h…
Abhijeet – Gaurentee lete h aap is baat ki.
Salunkhe (soft tone) – Koshish toh kr skta hun main… Aur koshish krne walon ko ek mauka toh milna chahiye na yr.
Abhijeet was silent hearing this. He turned his face away.
Acp Pradyuman (Guilty tone) – Abhijeet… Main janta hun maine kuch nhi saha h… sirf tumne saha h… main apne kiye pr sach mein bhut sharminda hun… aaj jb bhi us case ko yaad krta hun toh mujhe sirf apni galtiyan nazar aati h… (Abhijeet's heart was melting with his guilty tone) Han main manta hun k maine us waqt tum pr bhrosa nhi kiya tha… agr kr leta toh aaj ye naubat hi nhi aati… Mujhe atleast tum pr bhrosa krke sb kuch sach btana chahiye tha… Mujhe Salunkhe aur Shreya ko rokna chahiye tha… Galti hui h mujhse… bhut badi galti… tumhara dil todne ki galti… tumhari self respect ko thes phunchane ki galti… Us galti pr mujhe bhut pachtawa h Abhijeet… jb tkk tum mujhe maaf nhi kr dete… main apne aap ko kabhi maaf nhi kr paunga… Lekin mujhe apni galti ko sudharna h… isliye maine ek faisla liya h… (Abhijeet looked at him) Main CID chod rha hun…
Abhijeet (shocked) – WHAT!
Acp Pradyuman – Han Abhijeet… CID mein reh kr maine apne sabse trusted officer aur bete ko khoya h sirf usee dukh phunchaya h… isliye ab main CID ka hissa nhi rehna chahta… so that main fir kabhi tumhe shaq ki nigaah se na dekh saku.
Abhijeet (still in shock) – Sir!
Acp took out his Gun and put it on table. He then took put his badge and when about to put it on table a strong grip of hand stopped him. He looked up and found Abhijeet was standing there with teary eyes and his hand was stopping him from leaving the badge. Abhijeet said in teary tone –
Ye aap kya kr rhe h Sir! Please aap esa nhi kr skte.
Acp Pradyuman – kyu nhi kr skta… jb tumhara dil dukha skta hun toh ye bhi kr skta hun.
Abhijeet (same tone and in tension) – Nhi Sir… aap esa kuch nhi krenge… Aapki zrorat h CID bureau ko… is desh ko… aapne hi toh hath pakad kr investigation krna sikhaya h… khatron se ldna sikhaya h… aaj aapki vajeh se hi toh main CID mein hun sir…
Acp Pradyuman – Aur tumhari vajeh se main zinda hun… tumne bhi toh kitni bar meri jaan bachayi h… kitni baar jb HQ ne ya DCP ne mujh pr shak kiya h toh hmesha meri dhaal bnke khade rhe ho… tumhari bhi zrorat h mujhe… hmare bureau ko… hmare CID pariwaar ko…. Tum sb chod skte ho toh main kyu nhi.
Freddy (serious tone) – Aur main bhi CID chod rha hun…
Abhijeet (again shocked) – Freddy!
Freddy – Han sir… maine bhi aapka saath nhi diya tha… meri galti thi… aapne hmesha hum sbka bhut saath diya h…lekin humne kya kiya… aapke mushkil waqt mein hum log chup reh gye… main bhi apni galti sudharna chahta hun… He too took out his badge and gun and placed it on table and relaxly sit on sofa.
Abhijeet (angry tone) – Aur CID chod kr kya kroge han? Manisha Bhabhi ka socha h bolne se pehle.
Freddy – Sir jb main usee btaunga k main kyu CID chod rha hun… voh bhut khush hogi… Voh apne liye job dhundh legi… main ghar ke kaam kr lunga… problem solved.
Purvi – Main bhi CID chod dungi sir.
Rajat – Main Bhi.
Pankaj – Main Bhi.
Sachin – Main Bhi.
Vivek – Main Bhi.
They all put their badges on table and sat on sofa relaxly. Abhijeet in angry tone –
Ye kya laga rkha h sbne han? Sb ke sb CID chod doge… Kaam kon krega…
Daya – Boss HQ naye officers recruit kr lega…
Abhijeet (same tone) – Lekin maine CID kb chodi h Daya… tum jante ho main undercover mission pr tha.
Daya – Boss… tum agr wapas nhi aaoge toh yaha se koi nhi jayega.
Abhijeet (to Acp) – Sir aap in sab ko kuch smjhate kyu nhi (in irritated tone) Aap kya samjhayenge… aapne hi toh CID chodo abhiyaan shuru kiya h… (Acp feels sooth hearing such tone after ages) Aap esa kaise kr skte h sir.
Freddy – Aap hi ne kaha tha na sir… aap wapas nhi ayenge… toh theek h hum bhi nhi jayenge. (Abhijeet was silent after this) Laut aayiye na sir… please. Hume maaf kr digiye please.
Abhijeet (loud and teary tone) – Chlunga main wapas sbke saath… Bs khush ab. Main bhi nhi reh skta hun tum sb ke bina… (looking at Acp) Sir ke bina… (looking at Daya) Apne sabse ache dost ke bina… Ye ek saal akele kaise rha hun main hi janta hun… nhi reh skta main bhi tum sb ke bina… bhut yaad kiya h maine bhi tum sbko… haan main naraaz tha sbse… lekin ab nhi hun… Abhijeet came towards Acp and gave him his gun back with teary eyes. Acp hugged him and asked – Tumne mujhe maaf…interuppted
Abhijeet – Please sir… mere dil se sara dard nikal gya h… aap bhi sb bhool jayiye sir.
Team came forward and shared a group hug.
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