Chapter 3
/blab/= Naruto speaking to Kyuubi
blab= Kyuubi speaking to Naruto
Naruto's P.O.V.
Isn't that just peachy. I leave Konoha because everyone was avoiding me more than usual and then the straw that broke the camels' back – Sasuke pretended to love me.
Flashback
Authors' P.O.V.
Naruto went running into his house. He had heard someone scream from all the way across the village. It was masculine and came from his and Sasuke's home. The two had been a couple for only a few months and those few months were the best times of Naruto's life. Naruto burst into the room where the screams were coming from. What he saw, he would wish himself dead and it changed him forever.
"S. SASUKE?!" rang Naruto's voice. His voice was heard throughout the village. In it, one could hear total and complete betrayal. Naruto saw Sasuke in the arms of Iruka. Everyone, don't go 'ewwwwwwww!' on me here. I did this for a reason. I know Iruka isn't a pedophile. ((For those that don't know, pedophile means someone who sleeps with someone way too young for them. Like a fifteen-year age difference.)) Iruka is paired up with Kakashi anyway. -
"Mmmmmm...? Naruto? What are you doing here? Shouldn't you be dead in a ditch by now? I thought I told Sakura to kill you... oh well. Leave before I get pissed. You are such an idiot. Did you really think I loved you? HA! I was just using you to get rid of my... what were they called again?" Sasuke said. Then Iruka spoke up.
"They are called 'sexual frustrations', koibito. Naruto, you are just a burden to everyone. Why don't you everyone a favor and just drop dead?" Naruto – unable to believe that the two people he trusted the most betrayed him – immediately left the village. In the distance, one could see Konahomaru begging Naruto not to leave. As Naruto's shadow danced across the horizon, the fake Sasuke and Iruka changed form into those of Itachi and Orochimaru. Their evil laughter was heard loud and clear in the villages ears, but Naruto didn't hear one bit of it.
End Flashback
Sasuke's P.O.V.
I looked at the new comer coolly. I had no idea who it was, but, quite frankly, I didn't care. I turned to Sakura.
"Has the stranger caused any damage or done anything suspicious?" I asked.
"Yes, Hokage-sama. As you know, it is well over one-hundred degrees outside, and the stranger is wearing a black cloak, which attracts sunlight." The stranger broke in.
"No shit, Sherlock. Isn't that the most amazing discovery of the century. You're an idiot."
"Hold your tongue! Now Sakura, is there anything else?"
"YES! He called me by my name and he only heard my name from your mouth just now!" She yelled. She seemed quite afraid that she had a stalker. She had one once. Her husband killed him off quickly.
"Really now? Tell me, who are you?" I was plenty surprised to hear the stranger laugh. It reminded me a lot of Itachi. It made me wonder if it was really a new enemy in disguise.
"Now, now, Sasuke-kun, we all know that I won't tell you anything without a challenge." said the stranger. "Tomorrow at 2:00 PM, I will be holding a small tournament in the Forest of Death.
If I am given a challenging fight, I will reveal myself to you."
Thank you for reviewing! I honestly don't care if you leave me a message. If you just send a little thing that says 'MEEP!!!' I would appreciate it. It makes me happy to know that people even bothered to read this! So once again, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! I also want to thank my first 12 reviewers.
I would like to thank ghostninja85 for mentioning to me that I put in Naruto's really good hearing twice in the same paragraph. I messed up. An about that repeating crap, sorry, but I didn't really understand the ff.net thingy to put in a new chapter. This is my first fic, as you can tell from my bio, so I have to get used to not following my own rules for writing. I fixed that up... I think. Tell me if I fixed it. I plan on having a little Sasuke/Naruto and Gaara/Naruto in here. The pairings are really up to the reviewers but pairings that are final are as follows: Kakashi/Iruka Sakura/Lee
If anyone wants to be put in the story, just send me a message at Kiharusamayahoo.com with all of the characters information on it. This is crucial. I will need everything, including their attitude to the world. I will only accept the first five that I receive. When and if I get, them, I will put a note up on my next chapter to tell who they are. I will also include whatever information I get on that chapter. I know Naruto seems really powered up, but if you want, I can put him in tights, give him his own theme song, and give him powers that Spider-Man, Superman, and other freakishly strong people would kill for.
I also have to thank an anonymous reviewer on reminding me that I put up the same chapter twice. I had to go eat dinner, so I totally forgot about ghostninja85's review. PLEASE DON"T BE OFFENDED! When I eat, I'm like Naruto. When someone tries to talk to me, I'm like "Yup. That's great. Thanks for the compliment." And they'll be yelling at me for my lack of manners! --;;;;;;;; yes, I have a short attention span.
Thanks for the confidence. I need support through this so I know people are actually reading this. Tell me if my chapter need anything or if I should get rid of anything. Flames I'll accept with open arms. But you'd better make sure that you have really good spelling, or else I'll rant at you about how you're spelling sucks and that you shouldn't criticize me. Everyone has his or her faults. I'm not perfect and neither are you people. Just take that into consideration before you flame me.
Also, summer vacation started for us today, and I will probably be updating a few times a week if I can manage. First, this Friday, I'm going to Kentucky for a while (I don't know how long) and my parents are getting divorced, so I'll be moving. But then I'll be updating!
Thanks for reading this. If I answered any of your questions, you're welcome. See you next chapter!!!
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( ( ) ) It's supposed to be a weird, mutated rabbit thing
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/blab/= Naruto speaking to Kyuubi
blab= Kyuubi speaking to Naruto
Naruto's P.O.V.
Isn't that just peachy. I leave Konoha because everyone was avoiding me more than usual and then the straw that broke the camels' back – Sasuke pretended to love me.
Flashback
Authors' P.O.V.
Naruto went running into his house. He had heard someone scream from all the way across the village. It was masculine and came from his and Sasuke's home. The two had been a couple for only a few months and those few months were the best times of Naruto's life. Naruto burst into the room where the screams were coming from. What he saw, he would wish himself dead and it changed him forever.
"S. SASUKE?!" rang Naruto's voice. His voice was heard throughout the village. In it, one could hear total and complete betrayal. Naruto saw Sasuke in the arms of Iruka. Everyone, don't go 'ewwwwwwww!' on me here. I did this for a reason. I know Iruka isn't a pedophile. ((For those that don't know, pedophile means someone who sleeps with someone way too young for them. Like a fifteen-year age difference.)) Iruka is paired up with Kakashi anyway. -
"Mmmmmm...? Naruto? What are you doing here? Shouldn't you be dead in a ditch by now? I thought I told Sakura to kill you... oh well. Leave before I get pissed. You are such an idiot. Did you really think I loved you? HA! I was just using you to get rid of my... what were they called again?" Sasuke said. Then Iruka spoke up.
"They are called 'sexual frustrations', koibito. Naruto, you are just a burden to everyone. Why don't you everyone a favor and just drop dead?" Naruto – unable to believe that the two people he trusted the most betrayed him – immediately left the village. In the distance, one could see Konahomaru begging Naruto not to leave. As Naruto's shadow danced across the horizon, the fake Sasuke and Iruka changed form into those of Itachi and Orochimaru. Their evil laughter was heard loud and clear in the villages ears, but Naruto didn't hear one bit of it.
End Flashback
Sasuke's P.O.V.
I looked at the new comer coolly. I had no idea who it was, but, quite frankly, I didn't care. I turned to Sakura.
"Has the stranger caused any damage or done anything suspicious?" I asked.
"Yes, Hokage-sama. As you know, it is well over one-hundred degrees outside, and the stranger is wearing a black cloak, which attracts sunlight." The stranger broke in.
"No shit, Sherlock. Isn't that the most amazing discovery of the century. You're an idiot."
"Hold your tongue! Now Sakura, is there anything else?"
"YES! He called me by my name and he only heard my name from your mouth just now!" She yelled. She seemed quite afraid that she had a stalker. She had one once. Her husband killed him off quickly.
"Really now? Tell me, who are you?" I was plenty surprised to hear the stranger laugh. It reminded me a lot of Itachi. It made me wonder if it was really a new enemy in disguise.
"Now, now, Sasuke-kun, we all know that I won't tell you anything without a challenge." said the stranger. "Tomorrow at 2:00 PM, I will be holding a small tournament in the Forest of Death.
If I am given a challenging fight, I will reveal myself to you."
Thank you for reviewing! I honestly don't care if you leave me a message. If you just send a little thing that says 'MEEP!!!' I would appreciate it. It makes me happy to know that people even bothered to read this! So once again, THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!! I also want to thank my first 12 reviewers.
I would like to thank ghostninja85 for mentioning to me that I put in Naruto's really good hearing twice in the same paragraph. I messed up. An about that repeating crap, sorry, but I didn't really understand the ff.net thingy to put in a new chapter. This is my first fic, as you can tell from my bio, so I have to get used to not following my own rules for writing. I fixed that up... I think. Tell me if I fixed it. I plan on having a little Sasuke/Naruto and Gaara/Naruto in here. The pairings are really up to the reviewers but pairings that are final are as follows: Kakashi/Iruka Sakura/Lee
If anyone wants to be put in the story, just send me a message at Kiharusamayahoo.com with all of the characters information on it. This is crucial. I will need everything, including their attitude to the world. I will only accept the first five that I receive. When and if I get, them, I will put a note up on my next chapter to tell who they are. I will also include whatever information I get on that chapter. I know Naruto seems really powered up, but if you want, I can put him in tights, give him his own theme song, and give him powers that Spider-Man, Superman, and other freakishly strong people would kill for.
I also have to thank an anonymous reviewer on reminding me that I put up the same chapter twice. I had to go eat dinner, so I totally forgot about ghostninja85's review. PLEASE DON"T BE OFFENDED! When I eat, I'm like Naruto. When someone tries to talk to me, I'm like "Yup. That's great. Thanks for the compliment." And they'll be yelling at me for my lack of manners! --;;;;;;;; yes, I have a short attention span.
Thanks for the confidence. I need support through this so I know people are actually reading this. Tell me if my chapter need anything or if I should get rid of anything. Flames I'll accept with open arms. But you'd better make sure that you have really good spelling, or else I'll rant at you about how you're spelling sucks and that you shouldn't criticize me. Everyone has his or her faults. I'm not perfect and neither are you people. Just take that into consideration before you flame me.
Also, summer vacation started for us today, and I will probably be updating a few times a week if I can manage. First, this Friday, I'm going to Kentucky for a while (I don't know how long) and my parents are getting divorced, so I'll be moving. But then I'll be updating!
Thanks for reading this. If I answered any of your questions, you're welcome. See you next chapter!!!
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( ( ) ) It's supposed to be a weird, mutated rabbit thing
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