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Summary: My account of season 5, or how I would have written it.
Rated T, there is a section rated M, but a previous warning and all you have to do is skip chapter 11.
CHAPTER 10 I Love You, Luke continued…
"Luke you wore me out, I'm tired." God he has stamina. We made love 3 times, WOW. First slow and gentle, then we explored each other which lead to another round of gentle, and last he just practically raped me. But I'm not complaining, I enjoyed every minute of him controlling urges. I tend to forget that he is just human, he always is just control of himself, I wouldn't in a million years that he would be that great in bed. Probably because he never really had and girlfriends.
"You weren't complaining 10 minutes ago." I don't know if anyone could complain if they were with her. She amazing. I mean damn 3 times. First two times were slow and careful, exploring to find what sets each other off. But that last time I took over, I couldn't handle going that slow, I needed it fast and hard. I was so scared I hurt him but she said it was good and that she enjoyed it. She didn't even compare to my fantasies, I mean she blows them out of the water.
"And I'm not complaining now." Man sex loosens him up, he never is this relaxed.
"Good." I can't complain.
"I mean you are amazing in bed. How come you never told me you were that good?"
"Oh yeah I'm just gonna start a conversation by going, 'Hey Lorelai, women worship me in bed, I mean I'm just that great.'"
"Why not? I should like build statues in your honor. But damn never in a million years thought it would be that great, no wonder Rachel and Nicole wanted you so bad." I wouldn't want to lose him. Not just because he is great in bed, but he is a great guy, what's not to love? Love? It's too early for Love right, I mean I do, but it would scared him away.
"It was pure God given talent." Well it was, but I'm glad she's happy.
"God gave you a lot of talent." And I can't complain at all.
"Yeah well… let's go to sleep. I'm also tired. God has given you quite a talent, too." And what a talent it was. Man she did quite a few things I loved. I need to quit thinking of it or I will have to go another round or take a nice cold shower, I'm not really up for either.
"Let's." I'm going tell him I love him tonight when he's asleep, just to see how it sounds. Then when I think the time is right I will tell him when he's awake.
A few minutes pass in a lulling silence. They are wrapped in each other waiting for sleep to take over. Luke's breathe is slowing and deepening. He mumbles something that sounds like goodnight, but Lorelai can't quite tell. She has been waiting for him to fall asleep so she can put her plan into action.
Luke is only about ¾ asleep, working on the other fourth when he hears…
"Good night. I love you, Luke." That wasn't so hard to say.
He wasn't at all asleep now, he took in a sharp breathe and sat up.
"Lorelai?"
Oh crap, I screwed up, I scared him, he's gonna make me go home and never see me again.
She sitting up with him looking down at her hands which are very fascinating to her.
Luke looks at her, lifts her chin, and kisses her softly.
"Lorelai, I love you, too." I love her more than she could imagine.
"Really?"
"Lorelai, how could you not know? When I said all in, I meant all in, you are it for me, the last one." She is so beautiful, hair messed up, and not to mention naked in bed with me.
"Good, 'cause so did I." He is so adorable, I like when he lets his shield down and shares with me.
They met in a gentle kiss. It was deepened, but stayed soft; they took their time exploring the other with their tongues. Neither pushed it to go any farther than that. They stayed like until deep into the night, just kissing and caressing. Finally they broke apart and went to sleep snuggled together.
CHAPTER 11 In the Morning (This chapter is rated M so you are warned. You can skip it very easily, just scroll down to chapter 12.
Luke awoke to gentle rays of sunshine peeking through is curtains. He awoke to a sleeping Lorelai snuggled deep into his chest. Luke looked at her and smiled as he remembered last night. They had made love three times, told each other that they loved them, softly kissed and caresses one another who knows how long, and then finally fell asleep in each others arms.
She is gorgeous! Look at her Danes, the one you wanted, needed, and love is lying here with you, she wants you, needs you, and loves you right back. What could be better than that Danes? She is yours to hold, to love, and to make love to. She's lying next to you, holding you. Her hair is ruffled, she's naked and sleeping deeply and she is still the most beautiful woman in the world, and you have her man. How did you manage that one?
Luke sits there just watching her, not in a creepy stocker way, but in a sweet and loving way. After a few minutes he takes his hand that is wrapped around her waist and gently rubs her stomach, slowly bringing her from a deep sleep. As his hand travels upward to knead her breast she gasps and opens her eyes to see a grinning Luke.
"ummmmmm Good-morning, that feels good." This is the way to wake up in the morning, a handsome man to caress you in to consciousness. Man does that feel good. How are his hands so soft? They feel great now and felt great last night. Oh last night, and what a night it was. He was so gentle and loving, and yet so wild and passionate. Now that those are two words that I would never think fit together, wild and Luke, just don't go together normally.
"Good-morning, baby. Did you sleep well?" I love her and I never want to stop touching her, and by the way she is responding I may never have to.
"I slept great Luke." Did I sleep well? Are you kidding me? I sleep better than I have ever sleep next to a man, it felt so good to be in his arms, so protected and yet cuddled into the man I love.
"Good I did too." He said as he moved to sit up a little more. Lorelai's head still rested on his shoulder. They turned their heads and met in the middle for a sweet kiss. But it slowly grew more intense. He used his tongue to open her mouth and massaged hers. She moaned and then moved to straddle his lap. They pulled apart when they couldn't breathe.
"Hi." Man he is good-looking. His hair tasseled, naked and kissing me, the best way to have any man, especially him. How in the world did I get so lucky to have this great guy loving me?
"Hi." He replied as they met again. It was hard and passionate from the start, tongues dueling, and hands roaming. It became so heated that Lorelai pushes Luke to lie down and she lay on top of him. She could feel his growing arousal against her thigh. Then she started to trail wet kisses down his jaw line and then to the joining of his neck and shoulder and began to suck his hot flesh into her mouth, then she would nip at it or lick, leaving a mark.
I know it is childish to leave a hickey on his neck, and he will probably kill me, but I just had to do it.
She trailed the kisses down to his chest and then to his hardened nipples. She had learned last night that they were sensitive and it drove him insane if they were touched. So she decided to torture him a little and then to get back on track. He was quietly saying her name except when she touched his nipples until she reached his throbbing erection and gentle massaged him with her hands, lips, and tongue and then he was loudly moaning incoherently at the pleasure he was receiving. Before he knew it, he came into her hand. Then he spent a few long minutes apologizing for not warning her.
She kisses him gentle then said. "Luke it's fine, I wanted to pleasure you and I did, I expected that to happen, actually hoped it would, to show you that I want to make you happy and feel good. And I did so don't worry about it." Geeze already, it's normal, but it is funny when he gets embarrassed.
"Okay, but at least let me return the favor."
"You don't have to."
"I know, but I want to."
"Okay."
He kissed her deeply, then moved his hands all over her body, rubbing, kneading, and arousing her. He spent extra time on her shoulders and breast; he discovered that those were her major engorged zones. After a full body massage he moved his hands to seek out her core. She was already hot and wet in anticipation. He gently enticed her clit, then he inserted one, then two fingers bringing her to an orgasm. Then he used his tongue to lick up and down, and then inserted it. He moved back up to kiss her hard and powerful. As he kissed her he replaced his tongue with his fingers, bring her to her climax.
They lay in bed for awhile just basking in their new revolution. The change from friends to lover. The line had been crossed and there was no going back, not that either of them really wanted to.
CHAPTER 12 Getting Around
"I do have to go to the inn sometime today, but I really don't want to get out of this bed." I mean who would, after an experience like that and just being with him, I don't ever want to go away from him.
"I know and I have to go down to the diner eventually, but I'm not really looking forward to it." I wouldn't move if my life depended on it, but we have to get back to the real world.
"But we have to."
"Okay let's get up."
"Is it okay if I use your shower?" And does it come with my very own Luke?
"Yeah, just leave some hot water."
"So you don't want to take one with me?" She said with her best pout.
"Oh… you meant…um…yeah I'm coming." Like I would ever give up the opportunity to shower with her.
They get up and walk towards the shower, Luke lagging behind. His eyes drop to the sight in front of him. Lorelai notices that she's being watched and turns her head and catches Luke looking at her naked butt. He drops his head and blushes; his face is 10 different shades of red.
He is so funny when he gets caught doing or saying something dirty! He is like a little boy caught doing something bad.
"Luke, sweetheart, it is fine, I would be doing the same thing if you were in front of me, although I would probably slapped your butt." He is soooooo embarrassed! This is funny!
"Okay you caught me now stop." It's bad enough that she caught now she has to make fun of me, but that's Lorelai for ya and I wouldn't have her any other way.
"What's the fun in that?"
"It's fun for me."
"I repeat, what's the fun in that?"
"Come on let's go take a shower."
"Why would I want to shower with a butt watcher?"
"Oh come on." And with that Luke throws her over his shoulder and goes into the bathroom.
About an hour, an argument about why she left a mark on his neck, a shower, and making out in the shower later, they walk out of the bathroom in towels looking for clothes to get dressed. Luke walks over to the dresser to get his clothes. As Luke goes to put his boxer-briefs on, he has to drop his towel, and of course it's Lorelai's turn to watch.
"Awwwwe come on why did you have to put clothes on?" She whined after he got his underwear on.
"I would love to go around in the nude all day long, but I don't want anybody but you seeing my naked body, and I don't think you do either."
"Why not?" Lorelai started to walk towards him and run her hands over his chest, shoulders, back, and finally resting on his neck playing with his wet curls.
"Because they would all want my body." He pulled her closer by her waist and then put his hands on her butt.
"Now we can't have that, you are mine, all mine."
"I'm just fine with that. I love you."
"I love you, too." And they lean in for a kiss. Soft and gentle lingering kiss. Then they pulled away.
"Mmmmmm."
He kissed her again passionately, brushing his tongue along her bottom lip, forcing her to open her mouth. Their tongues sought out the other. During which Lorelai brings her hand down his chest, to his abs, then even lower to between his legs. Drawing a loud groan from him. One of his stays in place on her ass, his other goes to cup and then knead her breast. Forcing her to pull away and moan, so he started to trail kisses on her neck, sucking, and nibbling, to get her back for that large hickey on his neck.
"You know you are going to leave a mark if you keep doing that." She barely gets out.
"That's…(Kiss)…the…(Kiss)…plan…(Kiss)."
"Who am I to argue with that?"
"You can't"
"My we are a bit cocky aren't we?"
"I let you be the judge of that."
She squeezes him through his boxer-briefs. He makes a loud sound of pleasure.
"I yep I think you are quite cocky."
"That's…not… what I…meant."
"Oh my bad, sorry."
"Yeah Yeah."
He gives her one last peck and then pushes her away.
"Go get dresses; we do have to go to work at some point today.
"Okay."
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