Ok now that I have read it a few times I came to relieze that it is going a little to fast but this is my first Fanfic so don't expect perfection. Thanks for reviewing Gwenyfith Gauthier!
Mars-Where's the princess!

Jupiter- She wasn't in the room Darien and her where supposed to be!

Venus- Eh! We should never have trusted him!

Mercury- Wait guys look!

Serenity and Darien walked into the castle smiling and laughing.

Mars- Princess!

Serenity- Oh, hi guys.

Venus- We where so worried!

Jupiter- Don't ever disappear like that again!

Serenity- Hey guys, you shouldn't worry about me like that, Darien can protect me now when you guys aren't around. Mars did a look of surprise.

Mars-Serenity! I can't believe you!

Serenity- What? What I say!

Venus- Well, Come on Serenity time to go to your room!

Serenity- What am I 3?

Venus- Just come! Serenity laid in her room on her silky soft bed. Serenity then heard a creep.

Serenity- Huh? Who's there!

Serenity- I must be hearing things...

Then a cold thin finger touched her throat.

Jadeite- Never thought I would get you huh princess?

Serenity- AHHHHH! MAMA!HELP! SOMEONE!MAMA!

Queen Serenity ran up the steps.

She heard her daughte screaming all the way down stairs.

Queen Serenity- SERENITY! MY BABY, IM COMING!

Venus- Serenity Where Coming!

Darien heard the screams and stopped and pulled mars back by the shoulder.

Darien- What's happening!

Mars- Serenity! Something happened!

Darien- Huh? Is she ok!

Mars- I don't know! Come on!

Queen Serenity- Ran into the room. And saw her daughter with a man she knew.

Serenity- M...Mama h...help me! Serenity said sobbing.

Queen Serenity- LET HER GO JADEITE!

Jadeite- Now calm down, no need to get mad.

Queen Serenity- LET HER GO!

Venus and everyone else came into the room.

Darien gasped.

Serenity- D...Darien, H...help me! Don't l...let him take m...me!

Darien- I wont Sere don't worry.

Mars- Jadeite, haven't you given us pain enough?

Jadeite- No, I never have enough. But this is enough, this princess is enough, if you let me have the moon princess then I'll never bother your family again.

Serenity- NO! L...LET ME G...GO!

Jadeite- Not quite my princess. You will come now and stop those tears.

Queen Serenity- Please Jadeite, let my poor daughter go.

Jadeite- Why should I?

Darien- Because the Queen said herself, and if you don't want to die I expect you would do what she says.

Jadeite- And who is this person that will kill me prince?

Darien pulled out his sword.

Darien- That would be me.

Queen Serenity- Darien please be careful!

Serenity- Darien! Don't hurt y…yourself!

Jadeite- Hahahaha! You think you can kill me? That's just so funny! Take the princess Devil. Jadeite pushed Serenity against a tall man.

Devil- Yes sir.

Serenity- OW! You're holding to tight! Darien looked at Serenity's sad and frightened face.

Darien- You will pay for my love broken heart.

Jadeite- Oh, I really doubt it.

Darien and Jadeite started fighting, Jadeite moved so fast Serenity's eyes started hurting, but Darien looked like he was having no trouble with his eyes. Jadeite swung his sword backwards, but quickly Darien caught it.

Serenity- Be careful Darien!

Devil- Shut it!

Serenity- Yeah, you'll be shutting it in a second pal.

Devil- What did you say?

Serenity- Uh, I said, you'll be shutting it in a sec. and can you please loosen your grasp?

Devil- Hey, I don't really care if you are royal or a princess I'm not scared of you or your little prince, so no the more you complain ill just grab it harder.

Serenity- Well see the truth when you run away. (She mumbled.)

Devil- What was that princess?

Serenity- Hehe, nothing!

Darien finally got Jadeite in the chest. Then he looked up at Devil.

Darien- Let Serenity go! Unless you want this to happen to you.

Devil- Master! You hurt master Jadeite!

Darien- I said let Serenity go, I didn't say talk about how I killed your master.

Devil grabbed her harder.

Serenity- OW! STOP!

Devil- GO!

Devil pushed Serenity, and Serenity fell and hit her head.

Darien- Serenity!

Darien got by Serenity and pulled her into his arms. Devil then looked at Darien. After grabbing Jadeite.

Devil- Well meet again Darien, Well meet again. The Devil flew out the door.

But Darien didn't pay any attention to his face.

Darien- Sere? Are you all right?

Serenity- Yeah thanks for helping me.

Darien- No problem my love.

Queen Serenity- SEREDINTY!

Serenity- Mama!

Queen Serenity- Are you all right my dear? Did they hurt you!

Serenity- No, other then my hand I'm ok.

Queen Serenity- Oh my princess! I wouldn't know what to do if something had happened to you.

Serenity looked at Venus and the others.

Serenity- Why are you guys not, like noisy! There's something wrong with you guys! Mama! Their I thank their sick. That won't talk! That's not at all like them. At that being said everybody started laughing.

Serenity always made people laugh, that was the awesome thing about her.


No that's not the end there still more.