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This is the loooooooooooong awaited chapter...


Lorelai was on cloud nine, Luke was back from Maine, not for just a few days, but for good, he didn't need to go back, Liz and TJ were doing good, so now she had him all to herself, she doesn't care that she his being selfish, she wants Luke, and she has him.

On the ride to the Vow Renewal, Lorelai was always in consent contact with Luke. Whether she was holding hand, touching his thigh, orknee, or kissing his cheek, she needed to touch him. Not that Luke minded. He was just as happy as Lorelai that he was back in time, she would need him after bing with her parents for so long, and all the rich snobby people.

But not everybody was as glad as Lorelai about Luke's presence, not Marilyn, she just wishes she was a gardener, the two people that didn't want Luke here were Emily and Chris, he screwed up their plans.


The night before...

Emily stopped by Christopher's place.

CHRISTOPHER'S APARTMENT
Gigi is on the floor watching Teletubbies. Chris is working on a laptop.
There is a knock at the door. Chris gets up to answer it.

CHRIS: Emily. Wow, this is a surprise.

EMILY: May I come in? She walks in.

CHRIS: Yes, please come in. I didn't even know you knew where I lived.

EMILY: I know all kinds of things. She looks around. Obviously you have a
maid.

CHRIS: Yes, I have a maid-nanny combo.

EMILY: Ah. How McDonald's of you.

CHRIS: Uh, can I get you something? A tea, or coffee, or –

EMILY: I'm fine, thank you. She looks down at Gigi. So, this is the child.

CHRIS: Yes, this is Georgia. We call her Gigi.

EMILY: And her mother's still gone?

CHRIS: Yes. She's in Paris.

EMILY: All right. I'll come straight to the point, Christopher. Now, I have
known you a long time. I watched you grow up. You were a charming boy. A
weak, but charming boy. And to be completely honest, I never thought much of
you. I still don't.

CHRIS: Wow. That's great of you to come by and share that with me.

EMILY: However, you have good breeding. You come from an impeccable and you
love Lorelai. You've always loved Lorelai. You would've married her when she
got pregnant. I know that. And you would have married her if that girlfriend
of yours hadn't gotten pregnant with this. She gestures at Gigi. I know
that too. Lorelai's in a relationship now, did you know that?

CHRIS: Yes, I know that.

EMILY: He owns a diner. He's a divorcee. He's uneducated, he's not a proper
stepfather for Rory and he's completely unsuitable for Lorelai. My daughter
is stubborn, but she's capable of greatness. And watching her settle down
with a man who could hold her back from that is unacceptable. You, at least,
won't hold her back.

CHRIS: Okay, Emily, I'm very confused by this speech of yours, and Gigi
needs to be fed.

EMILY: She's getting serious with this man. I've seen it with my own eyes.
If you want a chance with Lorelai you had better do something. And you had
better do something now. She places an envelope on the table. Timing has
never been your strong point, Christopher. You should see if you can change
that. Goodbye, Gigi. Enjoy your program.

She leaves. Chris picks up the envelope and opens it.


The cermony was great, and Lorelai was goregous. She was Luke could look at or even think about, how pretty she was, how great the dress was, how he couldn't wait for the cermony to be over to he could be with her. The cermony, wasn't terribly long, but for Luke and Lorelai who's eyes were locked, it seeed like an eternity. Finally she was walking back down the aisle, and she and Luke were in the reseption hall.

"Hey, you look amazing." Luke told Lorelai when he caught up to her in the reseption hall.

"I know."

"It's even better that you described."

Lorelai could only blush. She hugged him, she couldn't get enough of him. It felt so good, to be surrounded by him.

"Our table is this way Luke, table 7."

"Lead the way."

They sat and ate dinner, which was amazing, it was weird how good food could taste when you had endless supplies of money.

Luke and Lorelai were dancing, to a slow song, when she saw a familar face. Christoper. What was he doing here, well he does know her parents.

"Luke." Lorelai whispered

"What?"

"I was Christoper."

"What?" Lukes hissed, alittle louder than a whisper.

"Chris is here."

"Why?"

"I guess my parents invited him."

"I don't like him."

"I know, but I figured you would want to know he was here, so you could have a longer time to stop yourself from killing him."

"I'll try to be nice."

"Good."


While on the other hand Christoper was watching them, closely, very closely. He was getting angrier and drunker by the each minute that ticked by. He understood what Emily wanted him to do, steal Lorelai away from Luke. But he was begining to think it was going to be harder than originally planned.
Meanwhile Luke and Lorelai are still dance but to a fast song, and Logan comes up to them.

"Miss Gilmore, Logan Huntzburgerdo you know where I could locate Rory?"

"Hello Logan,I believe that Rory went back to the dressing rooms, she needed to get something, probably her camera, she should be back soon.'

"Thank you Miss Gilmore."

"Lorelai."

"Huh?"

"Call me Lorelai, Miss makes me feel old."

"Oh okay, thank you Lorelai."

"Your welcome."

"What does he want Rory for?" Luke asked.

"I don't know, I think there is something goingo n between them."

"Oh."

A little while later, Lorelai had her head laying on Luke's shoulder, and they were talking about nothing.

"I'm so glad your back."

"So am I."

"I can finally kiss you again."

As to prove her point she did. It was a short kiss, followed by another, a bit longer, and deeper. When she pulled away, she stood up, and began to walk down the hallway to the dressing rooms, signaling for him to follow.

They barely make it to where they are fully hidden by the party before Lorelai jumps him. Kissing him hard, long, deep. Luke barely muffles a groan. A couple minutes into the kiss Lorelai strips him of his jacket, to see heis wearing suspenders.

"Those...are...new."

"Yeah well, I lost a little weight since I wore them lastand my pants were sliding off even with a belt."

"Awwe Lukey losing weight."

"Stop, I was a little heavier when you bought these for me, and I just got done working outside everyday for 5-6 weeks. So stop mocking."

"I'm not mocking, I kinda like 'em."

"Yeah?"

"Yeah, they're kinda hot."

"Good."

Their lips are fused together again. Just as hot and needy as before. They make it a few more feet before Luke pushes Lorelai against the wall, his hands drop to her butt, pulling her to him, so she can feel what she is doing to him.

Lorelai's hands get a few buttons undone as the reach the door of the bridal dressing room. They open the door, still latched at the mouth, and enter the room. Little did they know, but someone had watched the whole scene.

When they are in the room, it is Luke who is presses against a wall. One of his hands goes back to her butt while the other roams her back them to her chest. He begins to kiss down her neck, to the nook of her shoulder, and starts to gentley bite, suck, lick, ans kiss.

While Lorelai moves one hand to cup Luke's front, he whimpers, a manly whinmper, but still a whimper. That whimper turns to a groan. Then she moves on to caress his back and run through his hair.

When Luke finishes with the spot on her neck, he opens his eyes to see...

"Rory!" He yells surprise.

They break apart, which for Luke is not a good thing, his pants are not doing a good enough job at hiding his arousal. He looks on the floor and finds his jacket, which will work for now.

Lorelai turns around and sees Rory and Logan, in pretty much the same state.

"Hi." Lorelai mutter.

"Hi." Rory responses.

The guys are trying to get themselves under control.

There is a long silence in the room, only rough breathing could be heard, but sooner or later is was regulated, and Lorelai finally speaks up.

"Okay we are all adults here, so let's ... I don't know...Rory, what are you doing in here with this guy!"


Meanwhile outside the door, listening in... Rory has a guy in there, doing what?.
"Well I thought it was pretty obvious, I mean you guys know what it is, or your just good at acting.

What does she mean you guys know what it is, or good acting, Luke and Lorelai were... OMG!

The door busrt open.

"Rory, what are you doing in here with a guy!"

"Dad?"

"Chris?" Luke and Lorelai question.

"What are you doing here Dad?"

"I heard Lorelai say you were with a guy in here."

"So, Chris, why are you in the hallway that leads to this room."

"I was..I uuhh...uuumm...I needed to...talk to...Lorelai...but I ...uuumm, I saw her come this way..with Luke. So I..uuuuuhhh..followed...them."

"So you watched us this whole time?"

"Uuuuuuhhhh."

"Chris what do you want?" Lorelai was starting to get pissed, and Luke was already ready to pound the guy.

"I said I needed to talk to you."

"Fine talk."

"Well could we talk in private?"

"Rory, Logan, go on, we will catch up with you later. Rory, this conversation is not over with."

"I figured."

"Smart girl, Yale might be teaching you something."

After Rory and Logan leave, Lorelai ask again.

"What do you want to talk about?"

"Uuumm Luke could you excuse us."

"No." Anger rising.

"Please."

"NO." Fist clenched.

"Whatever you need to talk to me about, you can say it in front of Luke."

"Okay. I think...we...you...I...I think you should give us another chance."

"What?"

"I think we should get another chance."

"I heard that, but in what universe do you think I want to be with you?"

"And the fact that I'm with Lorelai."

CHRIS: For now!

LUKE: What does that mean, for now? What is that, a threat?

CHRIS: Lorelai and I belong together. Everyone knows it! I know it, Emily
knows it!

LUKE: What?

CHRIS: Look, I blew it, okay? I know that I blew it. To Lorelai You
waited, and I didn't come through, and now you're with him. But it's not too
late!

LORELAI: Chris, don't.

CHRIS: It's not too late. I know it's not too late. Emily told me it wasn't
too late! Luke glares at Lorelai. She looks guilty. I mean, that's why I'm
here, okay? I know you're with him. But it's for now, it's not forever. It's
just for now. I know that.

LORELAI: Luke, I don't know what he's talking about!

"Yes you do Lorelai, we have a kid together, we can be a family, Mom, Dad, kid."

LUKE: Oh, really? Well then, where the hell were you when she got the
chicken pox and would only eat mashed potatoes for a week, or where were you
when she graduated high school, or started college? Huh? Who the hell moved
her mattress into her dorm, and out of her dorm and back into her dorm
again?

LORELAI: Luke, please. This is not the time.

CHRIS: Where I was doesn't concern you. Rory is my daughter, and Lorelai's
daughter, and that's it.

"And I'm with Lorelai, and have been more of a father to Rory than you ever have."

"NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! I am her dad!"

"And you where never there." came from an unexpected voice. Rory decided to come back.

"Rory, I'm your dad."

"But you were never there, you would say you were gonna call, but you never did, you stood me up more times than I can remember. No birthday, cards, gifts for Christmas, but Luke came through. He was there he took your place along time ago, you may be myfather biologically, but Luke I have seen him as a dad for a long time. I remember when I was littleI cried for a week, because mom told me Luke wasn't my real father, but it doesn't change the fact that he's my dad in more ways you could even hope to be."

"Rory, don't you want us to be a family, I can be there."

"I have a family, it is mom and Luke, you don't fit in there. Sorry, but your my father, not my dad, there's a difference."

Chris looks like he's gonna cry, then his expression goes from sad to pissed quick.

"Who do you think you are playing daddy to my kid, and stealing Lorelai from me?"

Christoper charges Luke, who stops him with a punch to the gut. Chris fall to the ground, but pulls himself back up, still short of breath from the blow, but gets up and plows into Luke. All hell breaks loose.

They are in a huge fight, on the ground, breaking a few things, but Lorelai successfuly pulls them apart.

"GET THE HELL OUTA HERE CHRISTOPER!" He walks away with a limp, black eye, and fat lip.

Luke is in worse shape though, when he went to the ground, his arm hit the couch at a weird angle.

"Luke are you okay." Both girls rush to his side.

"I think my arms broke."

"Shit, Rory, go get my car, and bring it around, I'm gonna take him to the hospital." A groan from Luke.

"Are you in pain baby?"

"No I hate the hospital."

Lorelai just smirks and pecks him in the lips.


I'm gonna end it there, or the chapter will go on and on and on and on forever! REVIEW& GIVE IDEAS, OR UPDATES WILL GET LESS AND LESS! PLEASE!