Chapter 6:
Flying around the city and looking around everywhere for Jason and Christy was what Superman did for an hour after he left Lois. Then he noticed the helicopter that Lex had had, right next to a nice white big house on the edge of a lake.
Superman used his x-ray vision to see inside the house and he found Lex, Jason, Christy, and some of what must be Lex's thugs there. Even though Superman wanted to rush in, he stopped in midstep, knowing that he couldn't do it alone if there was kryptonite inside.
So Superman flew back to the Daily Planet not realizing that he went in as 'Superman' and not as 'Clark' when he entered Lois is talking to Richard...
Richard: Where is Jason? I need to take him to school.
Lois (feeling nervous): I'm sorry...I...
Superman (calling out to her): Lois!
Richard (turns to Lois): What is Superman doing here?
Lois: Jason...he's the reason why Superman is here.
Richard: What?
Superman: Lois, we need to go!
Lois: Richard, I have to go...
Richard: Are you going with him!
Lois: I'm sorry, Richard. I'll tell you what this is all about later.
Richard: No! No Lois, tell me right now do you love him?
Lois: I told you before...
Richard (grabs her hand and holds it in his own): I know, but I really need to know now if your heart is really with me. Plus I know that Jason isn't mine as much as I want him to be.
Superman/Lois (simultaneously): How!
Richard: I saw the piano crashed on top of one of those men on the boat. Then found you and Jason before Superman got there, so I knew he couldn't have done it. I added the pieces all together when you and Jason went to the hospital.
Superman: I'm sorry, Richard...
Richard: Don't be, I won't lose Jason as much as I will with Lois. I still want to see Jason sometimes, but think we are done, Lois.
Lois: I wish I could say something right now, but I can't. I have to go.
Superman: Are you sure! I might be...
Lois: Yes! I told you I'm going! I'm just glad that you came back for me. Are they okay?
Superman: Yes. Are you ready?
Superman grabbed Lois and flew out the Daily Planet. He flew them back to where Jason and Christy were.
Lex (stepping towards her menacingly): You know something?
Christy: Who, Me?
Lex: Yes, you! I'll find out what it is.
Christy (rolls her eyes): Not likely since you don't have a clue.
Lex (turning red): Don't be smart with me!
Jason (whispering): Christy, will we be ok?
Christy (whispering back): Yes, don't worry. I'll take care of you. (She turns back to the Luthor). Lex, I think you should be worried.
Lex: Why?
Jason/Christy: Look!
Superman bursts through the wall the room shared with the kitchen. Evil henchmen lay unconscious on the floor around him. Lois Lane stands just behind him, a triumphant smile on her face.
Lex (surprised...and pissed): SUPERMAN!
Superman (standing tall, but still feeling the effects of Lex's Kryptonite ring): Yes, didn't you know I would come?
Lex: But...you were dead...I killed you with Kryptonite!
Lois (rolling her eyes, just like her daughter): You didn't read the papers, did you?
Superman: You didn't think that people would save me?
Lex: No!
Christy: YES! Isn't my dad cool!
Lex: NO, everything I do...(looking at Superman then Christy)...he stops me and not once can I stop Superman even with kryptonite!
Christy: You were right about something...
Lex: Tell me!
Christy (smugly): No! But I do know something you don't.
Superman (about to panic, Kryptonian-style): Christy...please...
Christy (pretending innocence): Don't you want him to know?
Superman: No, then he will tell the world!
Lois: What are you two talking about?
Christy (sticks her tongue out at Lex): It's something about Superman's past that we only know. Lex, I guess I won't tell you, but I'm glad because I know that it will annoy you.
Lex (feeling nervous): Neither one of you can hurt me, I have my ring...
Christy: So you think you won't get your payback? Think again because you have forgotten my mom!
Lex (mockingly): Your mom? Lois? Wow! Like she can hurt me...
Lois (angrily): Don't you dare underestimate me!
Lois kicks Lex in a very bad spot (well, for him that is). He groans and falls over, clutching...erm...'himself.'
Lois: That was for almost killing Superman and taking my kids.
Lex: Oww...All right...Just don't hit me again and I'll let all of you go...OWW! What was that for?
Lois: Oh...that, it's a "thank you" and I thought you deserved to get more pain. Just wait for the pain you'll surely get when you arrive back in prison. Don't mess with us!
Superman: And this time Luthor...I wouldn't miss your court date for the world.
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"I added a few more emotions and actions, I hope you don't mind. I also rewrote a few pieces of dialogue to clean up the grammar and make it easier to read.
I also added Superman's last statement, he needed a cue superhero music 'in your face, your evil plot has been foiled' moment. Oh, and the mini-paragraph describing Superman and Lois' appearance in the room. I realized that I hadn't heard what had had happened to the goons, and so I filled in that mini-plot hole," transgenic-girl .
I hope she's ok with me letting me put what she said that she did on the chapter because I really want to give her credit for help me make this story even better. I want to give thanks to her!
I already have my next chapter done; I just need to type it out later. You guys wouldn't mind, if I bring back Mitchel Musso as a love interest for Christy even though he's not part of the Superman …era… I just think it will add to my story and will help me end it too.
If you go on youtube, you will find a video called 'Supergirl' if you search for 'Princess Diaries' and that video to me works with my story. I tried putting the address here, but it wouldn't let me.